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1、必修一必修一-Unit1-Writing-交友建交友建议信信 Shirley, recently I find it difficult to get along with my new classmates. What should I do?根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。 假设你是李华，你的好友假设你是李华，你的好友Harry在在交友过程中遇到了困难。请你根据以下提交友过程中遇到了困难。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信，给他提出一些建示用英语给他写一封信，给他提出一些建议。议。1.帮他分析原
2、因。帮他分析原因。2. 给他提出建议和原因。给他提出建议和原因。3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算。陈述你帮助他的具体打算。 4.100个词左右。个词左右。Dear Harry, A I hope you will find these ideas useful.Looking forward your letters. B First of all, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Whats more, you should take an active part in the discussion held
3、in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. In this way，you can make friends with more people. Last but not least, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.With time going on, people will know you better and like to make fr
4、iends with you if you can do the above. C.I am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. However, the situation is easy to change if/so long as you take/follow my advice. Yours, Li hua 第一步第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?题材题材：人
5、称人称 Person (The first/ second person)时态：时态：Tense (the simple present tense)要点：要点： a letter写作攻略写作攻略2 2：建议信写作的注意事项：建议信写作的注意事项a.第一段要表达情感，写出第一段要表达情感，写出目的目的b. 提出问题的原因；提出问题的原因； 说明建议的内容，说明建议的内容，建议的原因，因此要建议的原因，因此要注意注意各条建议之间的衔接各条建议之间的衔接。c. 熟悉熟悉建议信的常用句型建议信的常用句型。StructureWhich paragrah is the most important?Pa
6、ra1:_ Para2:_ _ . _ . _Para3:Wishes and _ Feelings and purposeAdvicehopesAdvice 1reasonAdvice 2resultAdvice 3 How to come up with suggestions?我建议你把零用钱花在这些事情上/我觉得你该这么花零 花钱为例) 1.You can/ should / had better/might as well spend your pocket money in this way. 2.I think you should spend your pocket money
7、 in this way. 3.Why not/Why dont you spend your pocket money on these things? 4. Its a good idea to 6.It would be better if you 7. I think itll do you good to 8. I suggest that you should9. I would advise you to 第一步：审题第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：第二人称第二人称一封信一封信好友好友
8、Harry在交友过程中遇在交友过程中遇到了困难，给其建议到了困难，给其建议 说理逻辑性说理逻辑性现在时现在时建议信篇章结构建议信篇章结构提出问题的原因；提出问题的原因；说明建议的内容；说明建议的内容；注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。感受。适当运用模板适当运用模板Dear Harry,Im _ to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it
9、 also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有有时时根根据据需需要要具具体体到到某某一一反反面面). In addition, (其其他他建建议议). Im sure (预预测测可可能能的的结结果果，给给对对方方以以行行动动的的信心和决心信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句
10、型 1. 词汇：词汇：(1).积极参与积极参与 be active to take part in/actively take part in (2).耐心听他人说话耐心听他人说话 be patient to listen to others (3).随着时间的流逝随着时间的流逝 as time goes by/ with time going by (4).和和交朋友交朋友 make friends with 第二步：搜索相关词组或句型第二步：搜索相关词组或句型 1. 词汇：词汇：(1).很难与他人交流很难与他人交流 have trouble/difficult in communicati
11、ng with others (2).感到孤独感到孤独 feel lonely (3).采纳下面的建议采纳下面的建议 adopt the following advice/suggestions (4).了解他人的兴趣了解他人的兴趣 learn about their interest/hobbies (1).你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。你在信中说，你与别人交流时有困难。A.In your letter, you said you were not good at communicating with others. B. In your letter, you said you had
12、 difficulty/trouble in communicating with others. C. In your letter, you said you found it hard to communicate with others. A. 2. 句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译 (2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下几点建议。几点建议。 A. I believe you can just overcome it so long as you can adopt the following advice . B. I think you
13、can get over it_ so long as you can follow/take the advice .2. 句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(3).在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极在班级举行讨论的时候，你要积极参加，并且积极表达自己的观点。表达自己的观点。A.In a class discussion, youd better actively take part in it and express your views/opinions actively.B. When taking part in a class discussion, you should
14、 take part in it and tell others what you think actively. A.C. You should participate in the discussion positively and make your voice heard actively. 2. 句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(4).这样你就可以结识更多的人。这样你就可以结识更多的人。A.In this way, you can make friends with more people.B. Then you can make acquaintance with more pe
15、ople. 2. 句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译(5).必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主必要时给别人以帮助也是个好主意。意。 A. It will also be a good idea to help others when necessary. B. It is also a good idea that you can help others when necessary. 2. 句式练习句式练习 一句多译一句多译Dear Harry, I am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and of
16、ten feel lonely. However, the situation is easy to change if/so long as you take/follow my advice. First of all, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Whats more, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the s
17、ame time, learn to listen to others patiently. In this way，you can make friends with more people. Last but not least, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I hope you will find t
18、hese ideas useful. Yours, Li hua oWhat makes an excellent writing?主谓宾拼写检查三段谚语刚学习的单词单词 语法句式语法句式连接词连接词【Show Time】o假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary最近刚升入高一，在英语学习方面遇到困难，询问你如何学好英语。根据以下内容回信给她。o1.上课认真听讲做好笔记，及时复习，觉得记好单词很简单（When/ find it. to do sth）o2.每天花半小时时间背英语，读英语课文。（What about）o3.多于同学用英语交流，提高口语能力（communicate with)o4.词数在100字左右，内容适当发挥，注意行文连贯。oDear Maryo I am sorry to hear that_ Looking forward to your reply.oYours,oLi Hua谢谢观赏谢谢观赏
