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1、写 作第一部分 写作的要求、评分标准及评卷实例（一）短文写作的要求硕士研究生英语入学考试大纲规定：英语短文写作，要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇约 200 个单词的短文（不包括试题中所给的短文开头的第一句话） 。出题方式有：命题作文、看图作文、情景作文或段首句作文。短文必须根据考题中所给的题目和提纲所规定的范围来写。主要测试考生综合运用英语（包括词汇、语法、逻辑等）的能力。（二）评分标准本题采用总体评分法，通篇分档计分，即从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。语言上的错误，要视其是否影响清楚地表达思想，或成为理解上的障碍，来判来定其严重程度。 “样卷”是评分标准的具体化。每一分数段的中间分，各有样卷两
2、份。阅卷员要根据第五项的评分标准，对照“样卷”进行评分（不得给 0.5 分） 。评分要实事求是，严肃认真，标准始终统一，要避免前紧后松，还应避免趋中现象。作文的字数明显不足者，结合其内容和语言适当扣分。1999 年评分标准1513 分：内容切题，包括图中说明effect的有关信息；清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确，文章长度符合要求。1210 分：内容切题，包括图中说明effect的有关信息，比较清楚地表达其内涵；文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误，文章长度符合要求。9 分7 分：内容切题，基本包括图中说明effect的有关信息；基本清楚地表达其内涵；
3、句子结构和用词有少量错误，文章长度符合要求。6 分4 分：内容基本切题，基本表达图中信息，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误，文章长度基本符合要求。3 分1 分：基本按图写作，但只有少数句子可理解。0 分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。1998 年评分标准本题以通篇文档计分，计分标准如下：1513 分：内容切题，包括图画的全部信息；清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。1210 分：内容切题，包括图画的全部信息；比较清楚地表达其内涵，文字基本连贯，句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误，文章长度符合要求。97 分：内容切题，基本包括图画的信息；基
4、本清楚地表达其内涵，句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。64 分：基本表达图画信息，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 31 分：基本按图画写作，但只有少数句子可理解。0 分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。长度计分标准120150 词：扣 2 分90120 词：扣 5 分90 词以下：最高分不超过 6 分1997 年评分标准各档评分标准如下：15 分13 分：内容符合要求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的预测理由，数字表达正确，语言流畅，句式变化多样，用词面宽，虽有个别不妥之处，仍表明作者语言基本功较好，表达能力较强，长度符合要求。12 分10 分：内容符合要
5、求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的预测及理由，数字表达正确，思想表达清楚，文字连贯，句式变化较多，结构与用词有少量一般性错误，长度符合要求。9 分7 分：内容符合要求，包括对各图的说明，对趋势的预测及理由，表达基本清楚，但结构与用词错误较多，数字表达有误，长度符合要求。6 分4 分：内容基本符合要求，语句尚可理解，但结构与用词错误多，有些是严重错误数字表达错误，长度符合要求。3 分1 分：内容与本题要求部分有关，除事先备好但与要求不符的语句外，结构与用词错误多且严重，词不达意，条理不清，不成篇章，数字表达混乱。0 分：语句几乎无一正确，数字表达混乱，长度不合要求。套用事先备好的文章，但文不对联题，
6、不能给分。19911996 年评分标准本题以通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：总分 15 分1513 分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。1210 分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字基本连贯；句式有一些变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。97 分：内容切题，基本包括文章的要点；表达基本清楚，句子结构和用词有少量错误。64 分：内容基本切题，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。31 分：基本按题意写作，但只有少数句子可以理解。0 分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。长度计分标准：91100 词：扣 1 分8191 词：扣 2.5 分718
7、0 词：扣 4 分6170 词：扣 6 分60 词以下：扣 8 分（三）评卷实例（1999 年）Directions:A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.C. Your essay should cover these three points:1. effect of the countrys growing human population on its
8、wildlife2. possible reason for the effect3. your suggestion for wildlife protection样卷 1得分 14 分From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet.Why does th
9、is phenomenon appear? I think there are several possible reasons for this. First, with a rapid growth of population, more and more people came to live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably can not adapt to the new evironment
10、and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Third, with the development of the industry, the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed. The defor
11、estration has become more and more serious. So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinct.In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the governments should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love natu
12、re and protect it. Third, as for ourselves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.样卷 2得分 11 分There are two graphs about the changes of population and wildlife in the U.S. As is seen in the graphs, with the rising of population, the number of extincted species increased.
13、Obviously, there is a strong effect of population over the wildlife in this country.Why does is happen? I can say there are many reasons. First, man continued to hunt animals for food and money and many valuable species were killed. Second, wildlife lost their surviving space, bacause man expanded t
14、heir industry at a rapid speed. More land was needed for this development As a result, wildlife has no place to live. The last reason is that the environment for wildlife has been polluted, and many species died.In my opinion, we should educate people to love the wild animals, not to kill and eat th
15、em. We also need to provide wildlife with a good living conditions. We must also lay down a law to protect the wild animals.得卷 3得分 8 分As is shown in the table, the number of people increased from less than one million in 1800 to 250 millon in 1990 in U.S. According to the figures in table, we also c
16、an see that there has been a sharp dicline in the wildlife species. Its clear that the countrys growing population have a harmful effect on wildlife.The possible reason I think are as follows: For the first place, the population growth makes the room of the wildlife. Secondly, the pollution causing of people gets rid of large number of wildlife. Maybe there are some other reason to show the wildlife downs, bu
