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1、一.点评刚刚结束的期中考试中,各校的书面表达呈现出了各自的特点,不乏精彩设计,值得探究。本次期中考试的书面表达分析选取了海淀(101 中学、RDF )、西城(四中、八中)和东城(五中)这三区五校为典型代表进行横向比较分析。与上期分析过的单项选择不同,书面表达受教材因素影响较小,各区之间的区别不明显,所以本期分析主要从写作文体进行分类分析。综合看来,五道书面表达中,书信体占据了三道,说明文和议论文各有一篇。体裁学校题材能力考查亮点句型应用文101求职信文字组织能力、说服力擅长: Be good at/be an expert at致力于: Be devoted to doing八中回信介绍北京概
2、况文字组织能力坐落于: Be located in/at因而闻名: Be famous/ well-known for五中回信提建议逻辑能力、 说服力站在的立场上: be in one s place/shoes表建议: You d better/ It would be better that说明文RDF人物介绍“推销”所介绍人物喜欢: be fond of不仅而且: not only but also议论文四中证明谁更胜任信息分析能力、说服力很关键: It matters that赶上某人: catch up with somebody书信:主要考察形式,打动了五所名校中三所学校出题老师的
3、心。八中的书面表达是给出信息点,写一篇介绍北京概况的说明性文字,要求涵盖所有信息点并要有吸引力; 五中的题是要求回信提建议,帮助笔友 Lily解决与父母沟通的问题,要求较强的逻辑思维能力和文字说服力,注意身份是“报社编辑”;101 中学的则是较有特色的求职信,这就要求要有相当的说服力,当然如果了解关于求职的一些常识和求职相关的习惯表达,则会增加很多亮点。说明文: RDF ,内容是人物介绍,涵盖所有信息点,并且可以适当发挥,因为所给信息都是名词和形容词,则要求学生活用动词和副词能力较强,对语言精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 1 页,共
4、 4 页组织能力要求较高, 比如连词的使用, 最终要达到把所介绍人物” 推销出去 ” 的目的。议论文:四中,题型相对较为新颖。首先要根据已有数据选择一个可以胜任的人,然后根据所给信息进行横向分析,给出理由,要求学生要有较强的数据综合分析能力,逻辑连词使用要到位,而且对比较级的用法要比较纯熟。综合看来,这五道题的难度都在中上,对于已给信息的题,要善于组织和凝练,而且词、词组和句几个层次都有较高要求。较能区分学生的写作能力,多练有利于写作水平的拔高。二.书面表达案例精选本期书面表达经典案例选择了四中。乍一看,貌似不难;再一看,暗藏机关;仔细一品,实乃经典。它的简单在于所给情景和数据材料都不复杂,都
5、是简单的一对一横向比较。说它经典也正是因为情景和数据的简单,给学生留下了广阔的思维空间, Mike 和 Jack两者中选任何一个都可以,只要你说得出充分的理由。设置的巧妙在于每组数据都没有特别明显的差距,不会出现“一票否定”。建议学生们可以尝试写两篇,分别支持不同人,体验新思路,教师可给予适当指导。经典案例:(四中)学校篮球队正在招募队员,Mike 和 Jack 都想去试试。下面是他们两个人的基本资料,请根据以下资料,判断谁更有可能入选。MikeJack1. Height(身高) cm1721652. Weight(体重) kg50653. Basketball Skills*4. Free
6、time for trainingEvery day after classEvery Tuesday and Friday after classI think _ is more likely(更有可能 ) to join the basketball team. _精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 4 页_.技巧点拨:1. 比较级。因为涉及两个人的能力比较,所以比较级运用要熟练,同时一些亮点句型也可用上,比如asas和由其演变出的not soas 等。2. 扬长避短。两个人都有各自的优势,所以分析时扬所选人的长,避其
7、短才有说服力。可在长处大做文章,而短处则可用although或 but 的转折句来弱化,效果会相当明显。3修辞。想要让自己的分析更有说服力,修辞必不可少。比如Mike 的优势之一是身高,那就可以用 a basketball players height is as important as a hunters gun这样的比喻来形象化。这样既生动,又会增强自己观点的感染力。4. 引经据典。谚语、名人言论等等都有较强的说服力和感染力,比如可以用 practice makes perfect来放大 Mike 每天都能参加训练这一点的价值。参考范文:1. JackI think Jack is mo
8、re likely to join the basketball team. Although Jack is not as high as Mike, his basketball skills are much better. Skills are the most important things to a basketball player, so in my opinion Jack is the better choice. We can see from the chart that Mike is less heavy than Jack and has more time t
9、o practice. However, practice doesnt always make perfect. Only effective training can improve basketball skills and the process of improving is quite long. For the reasons above, Jack is more likely to join the team.2. Mike精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 4 页I think Mike is more
10、likely to join the basketball team. A basketball players height is as important as a hunters gun. So Mike enjoys a key advantage. Although he is a little disadvantaged at weight and even basket skills, he still has the chance to catch up with Jack. Since he can attend training every day after class and practice makes perfect, he can make up for his skill disadvantage. It really matters that he has the height gift and works hard to practice skills. So I believe Mike is the right choice.精选学习资料 - - - - - - - - - 名师归纳总结 - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 4 页