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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AmerchantinAkbarskingdomfelthotsohedecidedtohaveabath.Hepackedupallthejewelshewaswearing,lefttheminacornerofhisroomalongwithhisclothesandwentforabath.Thewaterinthebathtubwassocomfortablethathereallyhadagoodtime.However,whenhecameoutfromhisbath,hediscoveredthathisjewelsh
2、addisappeared.二、二、解析文本、明确主题解析文本、明确主题故事背景故事背景Amerchantsjewelshadgone.Amerchantsjewelshadgone.Althoughhelookedforthemhereandthere,hestillfailedtofindthejewels,whichmadehimreallyworried.Thenheturnedtohisservantsandquestionedeveryoneofthem.However,theycouldntofferanyusefulinformationandhewasunabletodisc
3、overwhohadstolenthejewels.Buthehadanothergoodwaytotry.HedecidedtogotoAbhortohavehisproblemsolved.AbhorassignedthecasetoBirbal.AfterBirbalkneweverydetailabouttheincident,heimmediatelyhadagoodidea.BirbalcalledthemerchantandaskedhimtobringallhisservantstotheCourtthenextday.故事背景故事背景Themerchantcouldntfin
4、dtheThemerchantcouldntfindthethiefandBirbalhadanidea.AllthiefandBirbalhadanidea.Alltheservantswereaskedtothetheservantswereaskedtothecourtthenextday.courtthenextday.Soonthenextdaycameandalloftheservantsseemedtolookhappyandfeelrelaxed.Maybetheyallfelttheywerenotthethiefandbelievedthatthethiefmusthave
5、beenoneoftheotherservants.Whenallofthemturnedupinfrontofhim,Birbalhandedeachoftheservantsastickandtoldthemcarefully,“Ihavegiveneachofyouastickofthesamelength.Buttheyaremagicsticks.Nomatterwhentheyareinthepossessionofathief,theywillgrowexactlybyoneinchaday,Ifyouhavestolenyourmastersjewels,yourstickwi
6、llgrowbyoneinchwhenyoucomebacktomorrow.Sotakethemhomeandbringthembacktomorrowatthesametime.Hethendismissed（打发走）打发走）theservants.故事背景故事背景EachoftheservantswasgivenamagicstickEachoftheservantswasgivenamagicstickandaskedtobringthestickbacktomorrow.andaskedtobringthestickbacktomorrow.Setting(under what ci
7、rcumstances the story takes place)CharactersPlotAmerchantinAkbarskingdomlosthisjewels.the merchant,his servants,BirbalThe merchant had a bath and then he found his jewels had disappeared.none of his servants admitted.The merchant asked Birbal for help.Birbal gave each of the servants a magic stick a
8、nd told them the stick would grow by one inch a day if he/she was the thief.the merchant and his servants were asked to came back the next day.who?who?when?when?where?where?what/howwhat/how?alltheservants,Birbal,alltheservants,Birbal,themerchantthemerchantthenextdaythenextdayincourtincourtParagraph1
9、:Paragraph1:ThenextdaytheCourtwasopenandalltheThenextdaytheCourtwasopenandalltheservantsofthemerchantarrivedwiththeirsticks.servantsofthemerchantarrivedwiththeirsticks.?Paragraph2:Paragraph2:Birbalthentoldtheservants,“Asamatteroffact,.Birbalthentoldtheservants,“Asamatteroffact,.guess?guess?1.Would t
10、he stick really grow by one inch a day?2.If you were the thief,what would you do?3.How would Birbal judge who was the thief?Birbal gave each of the servants a magic stick which would grow by one inch a day if he/she was the thief.Definitely not!But the thief was afraid.Theonewhohadadifferentstickwas
11、thethief.Theonewhohadadifferentstickwasthethief.4.the ending?续写第一段的段首语提到所有的仆人都已到法庭续写第一段的段首语提到所有的仆人都已到法庭，那接下来就会涉及到那接下来就会涉及到BirbalBirbal通过通过magic sticks magic sticks 来判断来判断谁是小偷。此段的重心应该描写谁是小偷。此段的重心应该描写BirbalBirbal断案的过程断案的过程。由。由第二段段首语可以判断小偷已经被查出，因此，此段还第二段段首语可以判断小偷已经被查出，因此，此段还需需点明谁是小偷点明谁是小偷。第二段段首语为第二段段首语
12、为Birbal told the servants，通过，通过“as a matter of fact”可以判断接下来是可以判断接下来是Birbal 讲述他的断案讲述他的断案原理原理。案情明了后，整个故事需要一个完结。案情明了后，整个故事需要一个完结。小偷怎么小偷怎么做？商人怎么做？做？商人怎么做？Paragraph1:Paragraph1:ThenextdaytheCourtwasopenandalltheThenextdaytheCourtwasopenandalltheservantsofthemerchantarrivedwiththeirsticks.servantsofthemer
13、chantarrivedwiththeirsticks.There is something wrong with the stick.Birbal announced who was the thief.Paragraph2:Paragraph2:Birbalthentoldtheservants,“Asamatteroffact,Birbalthentoldtheservants,“Asamatteroffact,.Birbal explained the truth.The thief admitted and returned the jewels to his master.The merchant thanked Birbal.tips1 续写是指将所给的短文继续引申下去使故事完整，不是孤立的续写是指将所给的短文继续引申下去使故事完整，不是孤立的两段。两段。把握故事的延续性，完整性。把握故事的延续性，完整性。2 续写的两个自然段需在给出的段首句基础上进行延续。续写的两个自然段需在给出的段首句基础上进行延续。仔细分析仔细分析5个个Wh,把握整个故事的开端把握整个故事的开端-发展发展-高潮高潮-结局结局 这个这个脉络。脉络。3 注意整个故事的注意整个故事的逻辑性和合理性逻辑性和合理性。前后衔接，首尾呼应前后衔接，首尾呼应。
