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考研英语一真题作文2008partb(含范文和修改)

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Directions:      Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.文字说明:你一条腿,我一条腿;你我一起,走南闯北Vane's WritingThere is a picture here showing us that two disabled man binding their two disabled legs and moving fast shoulder to shoulder, with their walking sticks thrown away. And there is a note: you have one leg and I have one leg, but we can go anywhere together. The intended meanings in this picture is cooperation. Exactly, we are just human beings who are not all-powerful, and that’s why we can’t solve all problems without other’s help. And in our society the spirit of team-working is very important, which means by working together and cooperating with each other can realize the inequality: 1+1>2.But how can we cooperate with each other? The first factor is trust. You won’t success if you don’t trust your partners. And the second factor is honesty. You should communicate with your partners not only the advantages you have, but also the disadvantages and the challenges you have to face. And in my opinion the last one is persistence. No matter how far it is, and no matter how hard it is, you should always keep walking and then you will finally get to the destination. Modified Version 1This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons handicapped men, each one has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree can’t be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is , (but your attemptation attempt on solutions.后半句话结构不全), your attempt on solutions is more important.To In my view, each page have has two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes. Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one the same field can finish the job with full concentration and yield better outcomes so that the whole project will be done in a higher level more effectively.Modified Version 2This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons, each one has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree can’t be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is, but your attemptation on solutions. To这里是to 还是on?我印象中貌似是on my view, each page have two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with full concentration and yield这个单词用的漂亮!! better outcomes so that whole 加个theproject will be done in a higher level.这个我不知道这类考研作文的具体要求是怎样,不过我觉得你这篇写得蛮好的!结构,布局都不错,用词还不错,没什么改得出来了。

不错!!加油!!!Modified Version 3 This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons, both (each) has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree can’t be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is, but your attempt (attemptation) on solutions. To my view, each page has (have) two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes. Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with full concentration and yield better outcomes so that whole project will be done in a higher level.Modified Version 4This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled people, each one has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree can’t be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is , but your attemptation on solutions. In my view, every coin has two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with fu。

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