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1、TOEFL WRITING GUZHENG BETTY_KOOLIVE.COM 综合写作独立写作 形式 reading+listening +writing writing 时间20min30min 字数180-225400 题材academicnon-academic 题型讲解 综合写作 独立写作 综合写作 近年来，韩剧风靡大江南北，尤其在女性观众中大受欢迎。然而， 看韩剧对女性智商，情商，以及家庭生活来说害处很多。 第一. 女性过多看韩剧会导致智商下降。因为韩剧大多叙事简单，观 看起来并不需要动脑子。很多结局在开始就可以猜测到。长期看韩 剧导致女性脑子惰性增长，懒于思考，智商降低。 第二.
2、 女性看韩剧同时会影响情商。由于韩剧女主角大多以犯傻犯二 而受到男主角喜爱，从而得到完美的爱情。女性观看之后会开始模 仿，因而在现实生活中格格不入，人际交往受挫。 第三. 观看韩剧还是有害夫妻感情。有很多家庭中因为女方看韩剧而 导致矛盾，这些女性用韩剧中不现实的爱情观要求男性，还有的要 求丈夫整容成男主角的样子，导致感情破裂。 开头段 - Thesis Statement 分论点1 - sub point 1 分论点2 - sub point 2 分论点3 - sub point 3 READINGLISTENING 总论点韩剧有害韩剧没害 分论点1 女性过多看韩剧会导 致智商下降 看韩剧不会
3、导致智商 下降 分论点2 女性看韩剧会同时影 响情商 不会影响情商 分论点3 观看韩剧还是有害夫 妻感情 观看韩剧不会损害夫 妻感情 独立写作 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specifi c reasons and examples to support your answer. It is important for families have meals together regularly. Technology makes people
4、s lives simpler rather than makes peoples lives more complicated. The environmental issue is too complex to be solved by the individuals. 开头段 分论点1 分论点2 结尾段 Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past. The world is rapidly developing; and correspondingly, people ar
5、e progressing generation after generation. Currently, the young people have broader horizon, more enriched knowledge and greater ambition than their predecessors had; but unfortunately, they are also growing more indiff erent toward others than the people in the past. To begin with, the current gene
6、ration of young people is even busier than one could imagine, which leaves them little time to help others out. When I was in high school, my greatest friend Sophia had a hard time dealing with her mathematics, which I happened to be profi cient in. As much as I wanted to help her with the diffi cul
7、t math problems after class, I myself was occupied by so many other thingsevery day after school I needed to go to the English training club, and during the weekend my mother had arranged the cooking class, computer skill-training class and so on, because she thought it would be better for me if I c
8、ould be more versatile. But how about the situation in the past? According to my mom, when they were at school, the competition was not really so fi erce, so students were not required to be engaged in so many extracurricular activities to sharpen their competitive edge. With more free time, of cour
9、se they could care more about someone else other than themselves. Second, the prevalence of the Internet is also a reason why young people today are less likely to help others. Why is this so? Today adolescents spend so much time searching and receiving information on the Internet, and some of the i
10、nformation is not only widely spread but also profoundly infl uential to youngsters. For example, 3 years ago this piece of news was all the rage online: an old granny fell down when she was crossing the road. A nice young man saw her falling, ran towards her and tried to pull her up. However, the g
11、ranny refused him and cried out all of a sudden, claiming that it was this young man who pushed her down. She even asked for a compensation of 1,000 yuan from the man. After this news was released on the Internet, there was a heated discussion online, and the majority of the youngsters agreed that “
12、now that being good is not appreciated and rewarded, I would rather be a by-passer.” As you can see, with more of the negative events taking place every day, and with the rapid spread of the negative news, young people are less bold to off er their help to those who are in need. My idea is thus quit
13、e clear that the youngsters today are less friendly than the young people in the past. BUT THERE ARE OTHER WAYS There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyon
14、e would more or less wish that the person she is dealing with has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however, can be very subjective and relative. When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most important thing in my rel
15、ationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were. After stating that everyones opinion can be diff erent about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is in
16、arguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something. In any relationship of mine, I would wish that fi rst of all, the person Im dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldnt like, s/hed better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I fi nd out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, thatd be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever beli
