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1、高考开放作文评分标准第一档 13-15分 完全完成试题规定的任 务。 内容充实,体现了活跃 的思维和清晰的逻辑； 交际得体,表达时充分 考虑到了交际对象的需 求； 语法或用词方面有个 别错误，但为尽可能表 达丰富的内容所致；体 现了较强的语言运用能 力。第二档 9-12分 基本完成试题规定 的任务。 内容、逻辑和交 际等方面基本符合 要求； 所用语法和词汇 满足了任务的要求 ； 语法用词方面有 一些错误，但不影 响理解。第三档 4-8分 未恰当完成试题规定 的任务。 表达未能切题； 所用词汇有限，语 法或用词方面的错误 影响了对写作内容的 理解；第四档 1-3分 未完成试题规定的任 务。 写了
2、少量相关内容； 语法或用词方面的错 误较多，严重影响了 对写内容的理解。Points that make a good composition 内容充实思维活跃，逻辑清晰交际得体，考虑交际对象需求表达方式丰富，错误较少2007北京请根据下面提示,写一篇短 文. 词数不少于50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.判分原则 审题:1). 对图的描述:What do you see?Wha
3、t is going on?2). 对图的理解:立意积极 孩子独立 (消极的得3 分)逻辑清晰,有深度 (讲故事的得2-3分 ) 2. 定挡:只抄上文或照搬其他文章,与此文不相关的得 0分.Dearly-beloved children, explore the wonder of world, never say goodbye to their parents, who raised them up, leave their parents an empty nest. The similar things happen in our real life. Were young and e
4、ager to see the world, when we have strong wings to fly on our own. We, just like these birds, are leaving our aged parents to the house which was once filled with our laughter. Little do we know how our parents feel until we have our own children. We may just imagine every dawn and dusk seeing them
5、 walking around in the room we once lived in, recalling the old day we spent together. The picture tells us, or warns us that no matter how busy we are, we must spare some time to visit or think about or telephone our dearly-beloved parents, who are missing us so much.Possible VersionIn this picture
6、, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away. I think the mother bird must be very proud of her children, who are able to find their own food now. But she may also feel a sense of loss since they no longer need her day-to-day care as they used to. This picture sho
7、ws very well the mixed feelings of parents when watching their children grow up. For my parents, things will be much easier. We will set up a family blog to post our photos, journals, and even audios. Once I leave for college, we can conveniently share our experiences and support each other no matte
8、r where we are. Their “nest” will never be empty. 2008北京高考英语开放作文（15分） 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于 50。 In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it. 强调切题和逻辑性 评分时最重要的一点是describe和explain 之间不能分家，要有有机的逻辑上的联系 切题题与否？ 问题问题 ： 写图图与议论
9、议论 无联联系 逻辑逻辑 上牵牵强 叙述简单简单 ，与理解形不成清晰的逻辑逻辑 不写图图 讲讲故事 只讲讲一方（对图对图 理解没有全局性），没 能 看到两者间间的联联系In the picture, we can see a cartoon pencil is running with great effort to draw a square. While a tool used in drawing circles is doing his job in an easy way, feeling quite proud and looking down upon the “silly” l
10、ittle pencil. This is quite a common scene in the society. Some people are talented and can learn a subject in an easy and perfect way. They can easily get proud and look down upon those who have to make great efforts to do it. In their opinion, those people are too silly to achieve goals. However,
11、these “talented” and proud people dont understand that even though they can do will in one subject, there are still many jobs, theydont know how to do, just like the tool used in drawing circles, he can never draw a square that easily. While those “silly” people, though with great, can achieve their
12、 dreams in many subjects because of their self-awareness and perseverance. Just like the little pencil, who can draw various shapes. So dont be proud when you can do something well. Be patient and work hard, youll achieve more goals, especially in studying. In this picture, a tool, specially designe
13、d for drawing circles, easily draw a circle on the paper, taking pride in itself. While with sweat dropping down, a pencil tries arduously but persistently to draw a large square. The picture indicates that pride limits our ability. When we are proud of own advantages, we become reluctant to better
14、ourselves. As a consequence, our potential and ability stop accumulating, but remain where they were. However, once we cast aside the pride and continue cultivating our ability, well realize how much knowledge there is waiting for us to obtain. Thats why many famous people never stop learning, ever
15、though they have achieved countless achievements. In conclusion, we should not resemble the tool for drawing circles, because its pride limits the length of the circles radium. Therefore, lets learn from the pencil, who is humbly drawing the largest square it can ever draw in its life! One possible
16、versionIn the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great efforts.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pe
