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1、Practice nDirections: Man-made beauty has been a new word in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon? Make a topic outline and then write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:nMY VIEW ON MAN-MA
2、DE BEAUTY2021/6/71nYou are to write in three parts.n In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.n In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea.n In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.n Marks will be awarded for content,
3、 organization, grammar and appropriateness. n Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.2021/6/72My View on Man-Made Beautyn The traditional Chinese saying “Clothes make a person” reflects the importance of “appearance”. Nowadays, such a belief has its new content. Many people
4、, especially young girls or ladies, are not content with getting more beautiful by clothes. They turn to a more challenging practice of physiological reform to make them man-made beauties. I dont think this practice should be advocated. 2021/6/73n The desire for beautiful appearance is one of human
5、natures. The operations may really mean something to some people. At least they turn more beautiful. But a coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the two following reasons. Firstly, ones appearance is the Gods blessing, and has been one part of our life. The reform of the o
6、riginal physiological structure may bring great harm to our bodies. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, 2021/6/74nmany of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, the advocating f
7、or such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc., which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contests about man-made beauty wil
8、l confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty. 2021/6/75n Concerning the above possible harms the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty.2021/6/76 Three Main Parts of a CompositionnMost compositions are made up of a beginning,
9、 a middle, and an end.nWe usually write one paragraph each for the beginning (the introduction) and the end (the conclusion), but for the middle (the body), often more paragraphs are needed.2021/6/77The BeginningnThe beginning rouses the readers interest and draws their attention to the subject matt
10、er of the paper and/or provides necessary background information.nThere are a number of possible ways to begin a paper, and for different types of writing, some approaches are often better than others.2021/6/78n1) relevant background materialn2) the time and place of the event to be describedn3) a q
11、uotationn4) a questionn5) a statementn6) figures of statisticsn7) a definition2021/6/79Practice nDirections: Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:nWill Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?2021/6/710nYou are to write in three parts.n In the first part, state specifically wh
12、at your idea is.n In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea.n In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.n Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. n Failure to follow the instructions may result i
13、n a loss of marks.2021/6/711The MiddlenThe middle presents clearly and logically the writers facts and ideas.nThe body of a paper often consists of several paragraphs arranged in some kind of order. nThe order depends on the nature of the subject, or the type of paper to be written.2021/6/712The End
14、 nThe end winds up the paper often with an emphatic and forceful statement to influence the readers final impression and shows them the writers purpose.nThe end of a paper is important because it is often the part that makes the deepest impression on the reader.nThe concluding paragraph should be th
15、ought-provoking. 2021/6/713nIt is made up mainly of restatements or summaries of the points discussed. We should not introduce new ideas in such a paragraph.nSometimes it is good to link the last paragraph with the first. If a question is asked in the introductory paragraph, an answer should be give
16、n in the concluding one.2021/6/714Practice nDirections: Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:nWill Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?2021/6/715nYou are to write in three parts.n In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.n In the second part, provide one or
17、two reasons to support your idea.n In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.n Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. n Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.2021/6/716Will Tourism Bring Harm t
18、o the Environment?n In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our enviro
19、nment. As for me, Im convinced/ firmly believe that too much tourists bring harm to the environment.2021/6/717n The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. One way is the process of exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of art
20、ificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This process usually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land sli
21、des and mud-rock flows come up. The other way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tourists go to scenic2021/6/718 spots. Some tourists dont have the awareness to protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local
22、 wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.n It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind that too many tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducin
23、g to a minimum the pollution they cause. 2021/6/719Useful expressions nTopic: On the Impact of nBeginning:nIt is probably no exaggeration to say thatnNo one can cast any doubt on the fact thatnMiddle:nBut it may also result in a series of problems.nNevertheless, we should not neglect that n is a two
24、-edged sword.2021/6/720nEnd ：nFrom this point of view, nIn a word, nIn conclusion,nTo sum up, nOn account of this, we can find that nThus, this is the reason why we must 2021/6/721nIn summary, it is important (essential, vital, necessary, urgent) that we should (must) nFrom what has been discussed (mentioned) above, we may safely (reasonably) arrive at (come to, reach, draw) the conclusion that nTaking into account all these factors, we can saynJudging from all the evidence offered, 2021/6/722部分资料从网络收集整理而来，供大家参考，感谢您的关注！
