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1、 2022年年6月英语四级热点(4)1)父母都会望子成龙,但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的抱负发生冲突2)分析这种冲突产生的缘由3)应当如何解决这一冲突Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals_行文思路此题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的缘由,提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题,由此可推断本文应为问题解决型作文。依据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述父母的期望和孩子的抱负之间的冲突;分析这种冲突产生的主要缘由;说明解决这一冲突的方法。高分范文Parental Hopes and Personal IdealsAll par
2、ents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents” expectations for their children are not always 1in accordance with their children”s personal ideals, 2and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is often a main cause for quarrels and gaps between parents and ch
3、ildren. 3But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?3The following three factors contribute to the conflict. 4First of all, in this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind. 4Secondly, traditional patriarchy is still influencing Chin
4、ese parents in modern society. They are used to making decisions for their children. 4Third, nowadays young people have strong independence, 5who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny. 4Thus the conflict between parents and children inevitably appear.6In order to solve the conf
5、lict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. 4For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices 7instead of replacing them to make choices. 4For another, children should learn to respect their parents” advices
6、 8since parents tend to have more life experience. 4Besides, to communicate with each other actively is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both parents and children learn to think 9from the other side”s point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided.亮点点评1“和全都”。2表示递进。3通
7、过转折和设问句引出缘由,简单引起留意。4过渡连接词语,使文章条理清楚、连接严密。5who引导非限制性定语从句。6“为了”,表示目的,常用于句首。7“代替,而不是”。8since引导缘由状语从句,表示既定的缘由,常译为“既然”。9“从对方的角度”。佳句临摩1.佳句:Parents” expectations for their children are not always in accordance with their children”s personal ideals, and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other.临摩:
8、过多的压力使得很多大学生产生抑郁、焦虑等心理疾病,甚至导致一些大学生自杀。_.2.佳句:Nowadays young people have strong independence, who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny.临摩:郊区的新奇空气和漂亮风景对那些忍受着空气污染和噪音的城市居民会有很大的吸引力。_.3.佳句:In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts.临摩:为了保持旧的友情,
9、很多同学每天花费一两个小时给亲切的老朋友打电话。_.KEY:1. Overdue pressure makes many college students suffer from psychological diseases, like depression, anxiety, and even leads to some students” suicide.2. The fresh air and beautiful scenery in the suburbs will be appealing to the city citizens, who suffer from air pollution and noises.3. In order to keep those old friendships alive, many freshmen spend one or two hours a day calling their old close friends.