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1、2022年1月浙江高考应用文阅卷（范文+ 1-5档样卷）一、范文：Dear Chris,How was your journey home?朋友间的问I关I am still excited about what we experienced together during the China-Ireland Cultural Festival. The lectures we attended, the movie we watched, and the exhibitions we visited were really impressive. I certainly learned a
2、lot about the Irish culture. What is amazing is that I gained a deeper understanding of my culture as well.回忆经历和收获I hope I can visit Ireland some day and gain first-hand experience of your culture. I also hope you will come to China again sometime. Lets keep in touch.期彳寺和保持 联系Yours,Li Hua 二、样卷：五档：覆盖
3、了所有要点，文体比拟自然、清楚，段间衔接连贯，语言丰富，很口语化，很能表 达他的心情。句型灵活，些许错误，不影响理解，文体适宜。Dears Chris,How have you been these days in Ireland? Ive been missing you badly since you went back.Reflecting on the experience I had during the China-Ireland Culture Festival, I find it quite fulfilling. We did various interesting thi
4、s together, ranging from visiting Chinese historical relics to singing traditional Irish songs. I not only gained a glimpse of your nations profound history and splendid culture, but also had fun sharing mine.Words fail to express my emotions. Hopefully we will stay in touch. Looking forward to seei
5、ng you again soon!Yours,Li Hua 四档：内容要点全，漏了次要点（中国文化），语言简单了点有少许错误，文体适宜，交际性符 4 口 ODears Chris,How is everything going? Cant stop thinking about the fantastic days we spent together. I miss you so much.What a marvelous culture festival! I was many painting and enjoyed so many delicious foods in your cou
6、ntry, especially the country music, which really presented the heavenly view of your homeland. This festival did broad my horizon and fuel my desire for travelling there in the future.How do you think of the Chines culture? Im longing for your reply. Keep in touch!Yours,Li Hua 三档：覆盖了所有要点，介绍了文化节活动而非回
7、忆活动经历，活动介绍太笼统，句子简 单点，错多但能达意。Dears Chris,Hearing that you have returned to your country, Im writing this email to share my experience during the Culture Festival.Themed on the colorful culture of different country, the festival contained many activities including speech competition, exhibitions and s
8、o on, in which I all took part. This experience really broadened my horizon. It sparked my enthusiasm of foreign culture and learned a lot.I hope we can stay in touch. Im looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Li Hua 二档：词汇贫乏，句式简单，内客较少。问题比拟多，有些影响理解，加了些无关信息，基本 完成写作任务。Dears Chris,Last week, we took
9、part in the same activity which held by our school to promote our knowledge about different culture. We two all like the traditional food both counties. So we talked a lot happily.I got it that the different food is link to the different culture tightly.Its my pleasure if you could give me some advi
10、ces. Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua 一档：无法理解，没完成任务，没看懂题意，卷面一看就很差，内容几乎无关，偏题。Dears Chris,Im writing to express my heartfelt luck to make friends with you.Up to now, I still remember I met you.We found we have the same interest.The time 1 shared with you make me know spending time with friends is a great happiness.Abundant thanks with your company. I hope we can keep association. Anticipating your visit to ChinaYours,Li Hua
