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1、考研英语写作常见语言错误L词法错误A.Article 冠词(l)a.The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands toproduce what are essential for them to keep alive.b.Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to producewhat are essential for them to keep alive.(2)a.Pollu
2、tion is the biggest problem of the cities.b.Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.(3)a.The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.b.The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government andpeople.(4)a.Bicycle is the most comm
3、on means of transport in our country.b.The bicycle/A bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country.(5)a.On the contrary,the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b.On the contrary,the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.(6)a.We cant avoid being beaten by the others.b.We
4、canl avoid being beaten by others.(7)a.And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use,what would these clever“people“do to their producers?b.And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use,what would these clever“people”do to their producers?(8)a.For an example,with the
5、wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses,moreand more people will lose their jobs in the future.b.For example,with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses,more andmore people will lose their jobs in the future.(9)a.Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m.and wait for the news
6、program.b.Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m.and wait for the news program.(10)a.Then,during the second part,were showed some pictures of the foreigncustoms.b.Then,during the second part,were showed some pictures of foreign places and customs.(11)a.My favourite programme is called“The Anim
7、al World”,which is provided byCCTV every Sunday night.b.My favourite programme is called“Animal World”,which is provided by CCTV everySunday night.(12)a.It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals,withthe explanation by the narrator.b.It provides us with views of nat
8、ural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wildanimals,with an explanation by the narrator.(13)a.Not only do the leaders of the countries visit the foreign countries,but also thecommon people visit abroad.b.Not only do the leaders of countries often visit the foreign countries,but also
9、 thecommon people visit abroad.(14)a.I think they are the questions of great interest.b.I think they are questions of great interest.(15)a.In short,the bad ads can be classified into two categories.One category has thebad purpose.The advertisers want to sell cigarettes,drinks,guns and so on.The othe
10、rcategory of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote theirsales.b.Generally speaking,the bad ads can be classified into two categories.One category has abad purpose.The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes,alcohol,and guns.The othercategory of bad ads are
11、 those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote theirsales.(16)a.This seems to be on fashion now.b.This seems to be in fashion now.(17)a.And also,they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.b.And also,they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese cultur
12、e.(18)a.Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.b.Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge.(19)a.Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.b.A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.(20)a.Some stu
13、dents whose major is chemistry,math or physics and so on would thinkthat when they graduate from the college theyll not apply English any more.b.Some students with majors like chemistry,math or physics would think that when theygraduate from college they*1 1 not use English any more.(21)a.Such opini
14、on leads to surprising waste of water.b.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.(22)a.And wide spread of education is also a good reason.b.And the wide spread of education is also a good reason.(23)a.The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality ofthe develo
15、ping countries in 1960 and 1990.b.The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in thedeveloping countries in 1960 and 1990.(24)a.There are other countless examples.All in all,we must keep the proverb in mindfor lifetime-Practice makes perfect.b.There are other countle
16、ss examples.In a word,we must keep the proverb in mind for alifetime-Practice makes perfect.(25)a.Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practiceour ability,through which we can learn to cooperate with people,to contribute ourintelligence to the society.b.Community services is a golden chance to use our ability,through which we can learn tocooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.(26)a.I dont think numbers have anything to do with the luck.b.I
