高考书面表达（八）英语游记 一．写作要点：1.按游览的顺序或时间来写；2.写出景物的特点；3.适当抒发自己的情感或发表自己的看法二．写作结构：一般可分为三个部分来写：第一部分：简述旅行概况：（什么时候去哪儿旅行）；第二部分：描述旅行过程中所见所闻（具体活动介绍以及评价）；第三部分：表达旅行之感悟三．经典套话（开头）1.Last summer holiday，I went to Australia with my parents.2.Last winter holiday ,my parents and I made a seven –day tour of Harbin.3.On National Day , our class went on a trip to Qian Ling Park.（行程中所见及评价）4.Last summer holiday ,I travel to Xing Jiang with my family.5.On the first day we visited …..they were really wonderful. The next day, we went to …and saw…they were so …..that …On the third day, we had much fun doing…they were too exciting.（结尾）6. Tired/Exhausted as we were, it was really wonderful. Not only did we feel very relaxed, but also we gained a lot beyond our textbooks.7 .Exhausted as we were, it was worth it. Not only did it entertain us, but it also broadened our horizon.四．范文学习 ： 假设你是李华，上周你和父母参加旅行社组织的香港三日游活动，请根据下面内容用英语写一篇游记。
第一天：参观紫荆广场及海洋公园；乘观光轮船夜游维多利亚港第二天：游览香港迪士尼主题公园；第三天：市内游玩；购物 Last week, my parents and I made a three –day tour of Hong Kong. On our flight’s arrival, we headed straight for the Golden Bauhinia Square. After lunch, we went to Hong Kong Ocean Park, where we were impressed by a wide variety of amazing marine life. After supper, we admired the fascinating night scenes of Victoria Harbor from a cruise ship. The next day, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland and had much fun there participating in many thrilling activities. On the third day, we went on a sightseeing tour of the streets and purchased some souvenir gifts. Exhausted as we were, it was worth it. Not only did it entertain us, but it also broadened our horizon.五．实战演练：近期你们班全体同学组织了一次户外活动，请你写一篇英文游记，介绍你们的旅游经历，内容包括：1. 时间：五一节2. 地点：the Hong Feng Lake3. 活动内容：参观游览，活动 。
可能用到的句子：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六．完整的作文____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 On May Day，Our class went on a trip to Hong Feng Lake, inviting our teachers and parents. On that morning, we gathered at school at 9:00 and took a bus to the destination. Getting there, we were attracted by the beauty of the Hong Feng Lake and walked around it. Then we prepared for barbecue with our parents. The food were so abundant and delicious that all of us had enough. After lunch, we spent the rest of the day singsing, dancing, fishing, boating and taking photos, which made us so excited. Tired/Exhausted as we were, it was really wonderful. Not only did we feel very relaxed, but also we gained a lot beyond our textbooks. 。