2022年高考英语真题深度解读（天津卷）写作分析【考题】第二节：书面表达(满分25分)你是高中口语社成员李津，李华为了招募新成员，让你录制一个视频，撰写视频的文字稿，要点如下：1.邀请大家加入社团2.介绍一下社团活动3.谈谈你加入社团以后的收获，可适当添加细节参考词汇：Spoken English Club;English Speech Contest注意：(1) 词数不少于100；(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数〖解题思路（写前四审）〗1. 审题材：成员招募2. 审时态：一般现在时为主，进行时等为辅助3. 审人称：第一、第二人称为主4. 审要点：构思文章是否符合题目要求，主旨突出，内容要点齐全，写作对象明确，语言的选用得当，符合要求等〖解题思路（分段落，列提纲）〗今年的作文非常的灵活，是一个招募新成员的一个视频解说词，因此在介绍的时候，既有对过去旧的招募通告的一种传承，也要考虑到结合视频，和这个受众互动其次它的写作目的是介绍大家入团，那么必然要介绍一下社团的活动有哪些，最重要还是以自己加入社团的收获现身说法，并且添加适当的细节来使得这个视频更加的有说服力。
因此在写作过程当中，应该是第二点是写作的核心，第三点属于例子证明，写作的目的就是第一条，分清主次，分清层次对于考生就是一个审题重难点了因此我们不要轻易改变所给要点顺序，按照三个要点的要求写出来就好作文中所给的关键词要用上 第一段：作用：开篇要求：开门见山，点名主题，篇幅：2-3行：2句-3句Hi! My name is Li Ha, a member from Spoken English Club. Now I would like to represent our Club to recruit new members. If you also feel zest to improve your oral English, through this short video clip, you will feel amazed to join us. 第二段：作用：文章主体内容要求：层次分明，逻辑清晰，要点齐全篇幅：4-5行，4-5个句子As you can see, various activities are being held in our Club , such as English Speech Contest, and Poetry Repetition, etc. What’s more, members will gather together on our English corner to talk freely under the instruction of our foreign teachers, Ann and John. Now they are leading us to train our oral English for film dubbing, which is my favorite part. For me, I have gained a lot from this fantastic Club, not only because it builds up courage and confidence in me by practising but also because communicating with others easily in English helps me make more friends and enrich my life with a new experience. 第三段：结尾段，作用：收尾，点题，补充其他细节等。
要求：概括，得体篇幅2行左右，1-2个句子What are you waiting for? Join us, to explore a new world, and become a new star in our Club, to demonstrate your charm and make more progress with us! Below the screen is the telephone number, We are expecting your joining. 作文答题纸一共13行，字数分布要均匀〖解题思路（列好提纲后三审）〗1. 检查时态、语态、单词拼写、标点符号是否有错误2. 句子的时态，主谓，代词要做到一致；句子谓语要完整；习惯用法，固定搭配要正确；冠词，形容词，副词及连词要得当；有没有合适的被动语态；有没有双谓语或者没有谓语的情况等3. 根据内容要点改写句子、合并句子、用非谓语动词改写句子、用高级替代词、用高级句式润色文章、运用适当的过渡词加强逻辑等〖参考范文1〗Hi! My name is Li Ha, a member from Spoken English Club. Now I would like to represent our Club to recruit new members. If you also feel zest to improve your oral English, through this short video clip, you will feel amazed to join us. As you can see, various activities are being held in our Club , such as English Speech Contest, and Poetry Repetition, etc. What’s more, members will gather together on our English corner to talk freely under the instruction of our foreign teachers, Ann and John. Now they are leading us to train our oral English for film dubbing, which is my favorite part. For me, I have gained a lot from this fantastic Club, not only because it builds up courage and confidence in me by practising but also because communicating with others easily in English helps me make more friends and enrich my life with a new experience. Anyone, as long as your are interested in oral English, can join us, to explore a new world, and become a new star in our Club, to demonstrate your charm and make more progress with us! Below the screen is the telephone number, We are expecting your joining. (197)点评：这篇作文中语言注重了给视频配稿子，所以要通过叙述有画面感。
时态方面进行时较多另外从句较多〖语篇分析〗写作体裁应用文：（说明+议论+倡议）写作题材撰写招募视频稿试题情境这篇文章要求我们写的是给视频撰写稿件，要求学生展开想象，适当增加细节，那么试题具有开放性的特点，内容紧扣着这种招募的这样的一个主题，既要能够恰如其分地介绍好招募的条件，也要介绍好这个俱乐部的活动的内容，同时也要结合自己的实际经验进行加以举例说明加入之后的收获四层分析核心价值本试题符合反映了新时代教育系统当中，鼓励学生学以致用的学习英语，引发学生关注，自我提升，倡导这种团队合作的精神，用一种新型的学生喜闻乐见的形式，容易被学生所接受，能够把英语学习学以致用，而不仅仅把英语当做考试的一个科目学科素养提升口语的活动形式应该是比较多的，让考生结合自己学校的情况以及对英语口语提升的形式的思考，能够使文章成一个完整，逻辑清晰的文章，同时考生需要发挥独立思考的能力，适当增加细节，把握篇章结构，也能够达到更好的有效招募的效果，对于考生的交际学习和思辨素养都有考察关键能力重点考查综合运用语言的能力和书面表达能力，考生作文是否内容完整逻辑清晰，符合习的目的，词汇和语法结构运用是否丰富恰当，句间段是否衔接有效，以使整体结构清晰，单词拼写标点符号运用是否符合规范，都是对考生在本题型中书。