Section Writing 劝说性建议信 技法指导 劝说性建议信是针对对方提出的问题或困惑，有针对性地提出自己的建议的一种书信文 体 一、基本结构 劝说性建议信可采用“三段式”写法： 第一段：要分析问题，表明自己的观点 第二段：针对问题提出建议，并说明原因 第三段：提出期望，希望收信者积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文 二、注意事项 提出个人的建议时，应注意以下两点： 1态度认真理智认真对待对方提出的问题，理智分析，并给出合理的解释以及实际有 效的解决方法 2简明扼要，以理服人针对问题提出解决方法时，一定要语气柔和，态度明确，逻辑 分明，重点突出，让对方感到“纳而有因，拒而有理” 黄金表达 1首段：引出问题 I am sorry you have had so much trouble in ... You have asked for my advice on ... and I will try to make some suggestions. Im writing to share my experience with you. 2主体：提出建议 In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action. First of all ...; Meanwhile ...; In addition, ... Its important for you to ... 3结尾：提出期望 Cheer up! Your troubles will soon be over. Where there is a will, there is a way. Dont lose heart, whatever happens. I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. Please let me know if I can help further. 典题演练 你的网友Mike 由于长期上网，出现了视力下降、肥胖症等多种健康问题，并染上了一些 疾病，住进了医院。
现在请你以李明的身份给他写一封信，希望他早日康复，并给他提一些 合理的建议 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2语言通顺、连贯 参考词汇：肥胖( 症) obesity 谋篇布局 1体裁：应用文 2话题：健康生活 3时态：一般现在时为主 4人称：第一、二人称为主 5结构 第一段：引出问题 第二段：提出建议 第三段：希望和祝福 联想词汇 1采纳如下建议 __________________ 答案： take the following advice 2持有观点 __________________ 答案： hold the view that 3锻炼 __________________ 答案： work out 4没有什么比更重要 __________________ 答案： nothing is more important than ... 连词成句 1听说你由于视力下降、肥胖症等多种健康问题和一些其他疾病，住进了医院，我很难 过 I hear that you are in hospital with eyesight decreasing, fatness and some other diseases. I am sad. Im very sorry to hear that you are in hospital with eyesight decreasing, obesity and some other diseases.(升级句 ) 2我认为，你应该采纳如下建议。
I think you should take the following advice. I hold the view that you are supposed to take the following advice.(升级句 ) 3为了保持身体健康，我们应该锻炼身体，因为健康最重要 We should take exercise to keep healthy, for health is the most important. Instead, we should work out so as to keep healthy, because nothing is more important than health.(升级句 ) 连句成篇 Dear Mike ， Im very sorry to hear that you are in hospital with eyesight decreasing, obesity and some other diseases. I hope that you will recover soon. I hold the view that you are supposed to take the following advice. You said that your illness was caused by surfing the Internet too much. I think that we should spend less time on the Internet from now on. Instead, we should work out so as to keep healthy, because nothing is more important than health. Only when we are healthy can we study better. And my teachers often tell us that its harmful for us to surf the Internet every day. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Therefore, follow the doctors advice and dont worry, and you will be well soon. Best wishes! Yours， Li Ming 跟踪训练 (2019广东省高三“六校联盟”第一次联考) 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony 刚刚升入高 三，因为暑期短他没休息好，所以现在状态很差。
面临高考压力，Tony 不知所措请你给他 写一封信表示安慰，要点如下： 1表示难过和理解； 2就如何调整状态提出建议 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 精彩范文 名师点评 It is not a good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest. 这是一个以it为形式主语而以动词不定式短语为真正主语的高级句式，属本单元核心语法知 识足见作者活学活用，具有较强的语言运用能力 As the saying goes, failing to plan is planning to fail.作者恰当运用谚语“凡 事预则立，不预则废”来增强自己的说服力，可谓点睛之笔 which can guarantee your final success为非限制性定语从句，which 指代主句整 体内容非限制性定语从句的应用，言简意赅，行文流畅，为作文得分溢彩之笔 总评 本文为书信体建议作文开头提出写作该信的目的，然后写建议的内容，使用了 To begin with, whats more, last but not least，令建议内容条理分明，最后表达愿望。
该文布局 合理，表达流畅，结构紧凑，建议内容合情合理，具有较强的说服力 课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式 (2019广东省惠州市高三第一次调研考试)Longjing tea, __1__ has topped the list of the ten most famous teas in China with its color, taste and shape, __2__ (name) after its production region Longjing Village of West Lake. The good environment and water resources have contributed much to the__3 __ (grow) of the tea, confirm-ing the saying that “Longjing tea is the__4__ (good) among all of the teas in the world”. Thanks __5__ the Qianlong Emperor of the Qing Dynasty, the tea has earned a high reputation. The story went that the Qianlong Emperor visited a mountain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw some ladies picking the tea at __6__ foot of the mountain. He was so interested in their movements that he decided to have a go himself. While __7__ (pick)the tea, he received the news of his mothers illness, so he carelessly put the leaves in his right sleeve and __8__ (leave) Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother__9__ (immediate) upon his arrival in Beijing, and his mother smelt the fragrance of the tea leaves from his right sleeve and wanted to have a taste. After drinking a cup of tea, she found herself completely__10__ (refresh), and she even praised it as a cure for all illnesses. From then on, it was listed as the tribute tea. 1________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________ 5________ 6.________ 7.________ 8.________ 9________ 10.________ 答案： 1.which 2.is named 3.growth 4.best 5.to 6.the 7.picking 8.left 9.immediately 10.refreshed 。