母题四书面表达【母题来源】【2016·北京】【母题原题】【2016·北京】书面表达（共两节，15 分）第一节（15分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁；2. 该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua考点：应用文写作【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。
从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力得分要点】题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升母题1】【来源】2015-2016学年北京东城区高三上学期期末考试英语试卷（带解析）书面表达假设你是红星中学高二(1)班李华，你校《英语报刊》人物专栏征稿请你用英语介绍一位你喜欢的人物内容包括以下三部分：1. 对该人物的简单介绍；2. 喜欢该人物的理由；3. 从该人物身上得到的启示注意：词数不少于80答案】Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor. He was once considered as a boy who was not worth teaching. In fact, he was full of curiosity and imagination.I admire him because of his contributions to the world. In his life, he was always trying out new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, many of which still have great influence on our life today. He was also very diligent. And all these explained why he had so many great inventions and what he did inspires me to be creative in my work.【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be worth doing值得做某事；because of因为；Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor这个句子born是过去分词做后置定语；In his life, he was always trying out new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, many of which still have great influence on our life today这个句子运用到many of which引导的非限制性定语从句；And all these explained why he had so many great inventions and what he did inspires me to be creative in my work.这个句子运用到why和what引导的宾语从句；考点： 提纲类作文 【母题2】【来源】2015-2016学年江西贵溪实验中学高三上期中考试英语试卷（带解析）教师节期间，《中国日报》要报道一批优秀教师的事迹，请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一篇介绍你班班主任李老师的短文。
注意：⑴词数100左右2）不要逐字逐句翻译1. 年近三十，从教十年2. 知识渊博，教学方法科学，上课生动有趣3. 严格、友善、耐心，深受学生欢迎4 工作努力，受到表彰5. 鼓励大家勤奋学习在他的帮助下，大家进步很大答案】One Possible VersionOur Teacher – Mr. LiOur headteacher, Mr. Li, is now nearly thirty. He has been teaching in our school for almost ten years. He has much knowledge and his teaching method is scientific. All of us enjoy his lessons which are lively and interesting. Not only is he strict but also kind and patient. As a result, he is popular with us students. All these years he has been working hard. Many times he has been praised for excellent work. what's more, he often encourages us to study hard for the good of our country. With his help, we’ve made great progress.Mr. Li is not only our good teacher but also our good friend. We all love and respect him. 【亮点说明】文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如 has been teaching使用了现在完成进行时；All of us enjoy his lessons which are lively and interesting.which引导的定语从句； is popular with（ us students）受（学生）欢迎；还有Not only… but also，As a result,What’s more等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。