2024年中考英语作文评分标准及满分技巧曝光一、结构要清晰结构清晰这点真的很重要,我们都知道,阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文,而清晰的结构会让阅卷老师一目了然,自然就会喜欢你的作文什么结构好呢?那就是三段式第一段要开门见山,直接拿出主题给大家举个例子,比 如,写我的妈妈,第一段直接就说My mother is a worker.She isbeautiful and she is a good mother.明确自己的观点第二段就要说,她为什么是一个好妈妈1.She works hard.2.She is very strict with me.3.She always encourages me andhelp me when I am in trouble.详细说出妈妈的优点第三段得出结论大家可以发表自己的观点,也可以提出建议和希望如,I love my mother.I love my family!二、时态要准确英语作文除了结构,还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的 那就是时态,这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应再根据内容要求,现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生,比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。
一定不能乱用乱配三、短语运用要灵活同学们在写作文的时候,要尽量使用有把握的词,避免不必要的失分当 然,定语从句、宾语从句等句型,在关键的时候用上一两 个,会增添你文章的文采在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味还有对关联词的使用,如 first of all,secondly,finally,last,so that,in order that,not.but,not only.but also 等还可以使用高级点的如,in a word,all in all(表示总结的),but,yet,however(表示转折)等经验的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了整个文章的思路四、写全要点近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多,也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示,确切地说就是给出写作提纲,通 常 都 是3 5个提示点,这种作文,同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译,但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现文章写得再好,如果缺少了要点就会扣分的所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容,同学们要把提示点写全,然后围绕提示点充分发 挥,丰富自己所写的内容五、书写要认真这一点同学们必须高度重视,作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁,同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到5分的差距。
给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写,最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情,在扣分时自然会 手下留情大家切记不要涂改,在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿避免不必要的丢分漂亮的字体是可以练出来的,只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写,都会写得很好作文评分标准中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分(总分20分):(一)内 容(满 分 8)7-8分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整5-6 分:内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚、但不够完整2-4 分:内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚、有些离题0-1分:文不对题,表达不清二)语 言(满 分8)词 数:每 少5个单词扣0.5分,以此类推只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分拼 写:每处错误扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数语 法:每处错误扣0.5分,同一语法错误不重复扣分标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣0.5分,但扣分总和不超过1分三)组织结构(满分4)内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可 给3-4分内容充实,不写废话,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可 给2分。
一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在15分 以 上 者(含),方可得 到1-2分组织结构分内容和语言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分分类作文提纲一、活动介绍类首 段:(1)F m pleased to know that you re greatly interestedin.,so F d like to share a piece of good news that therewill be a.Nowjet me offer you some useful information.(2)It s my great honor to invite you to enter a.Nowjetme offer you some useful information about it.(3)It s time for us to say goodbye to our school lifesoon.Surprisingly,there is a/an.prepared for us.Now,letme offer you some information about it.主体段:1.时间&地 点:The.will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 oclock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.2.内容:Q)主 题 句:There will be various meaningful activitiesincluded in it.要点:First of all,You will be invited to./You will be givena chance to.which will.After that,It will be more than interesting for you to./Itwill impress you a lot to.so that.At last,doing sth.will play an important part in.So.尾 段:That*s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will.That s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share thehappiness/fun with us.二、写人叙事类首 段:(1)朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friendjust like that who often offers me much warmth in my life.Let me introduce him to you.(2)父母:If you ask me who is the most important one tome,without doubt,the answer is my.Let me introducehim to you.(3)老师:In both my life and study,my.teacher is specialto me because he is not only my teacher but also my friendwho has made a great difference to my character.主 体 段:L夕卜貌:.is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair andbig eyes.2.性格:.is an outgoing woman who always gets along wellwith people around her./.is very kind to others and easyto get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like tomake friends with him.3.爱好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooksdifferent delicious foods for me.4.事例:(1)Linda is like an angel.Whenever I meet trouble,shewill always be there.When I fail my test,She alwaysencourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries tohelp me to check the reason why I fail.At the same time,she shares her good ways of studying with me.(2)My Chinese teacher,Ms Li,not only teaches us how tolearn,but also teaches us how to be a person.I remember Imade a serious mistakes in Grade seven,that was to copyothers homework.Ms Li knew that.Instead of beingangry with me,she told me the importance of study andencouraged me to study hard to become a talented personin the future.(3)Last term,I failed my exam.I was so that that I criedsadly in my room.When my mother came from work late,she talked with me patiently and cheered me up.Thatevening,when I woke up at night,my mother was stillworking.I was deeply moved.Then I made up my mind tostudy harder than before.尾 段:As a sunshine teenager,Xiao Hui is a good example for usto learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.Now I understand my father7 s love to me.I will neverforget what my father did for me and try my best to makehim pleased.He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love himforever.三、咨询建议类首 段:r m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing.Don,t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I d liketo share with you.主体段:1.主题句:Actually,if you are careful,youz II fin。