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1、高考开放性作文分析与练习 一 高考开放性作文要求开放性作文字数不 少于 50 个单词 ，要求 文章扣题 ， 内容充实 、 健康 ；思维活跃，逻辑清晰 ； 语言规范，交际得体 。这对学生构思、表达以及语句的组织运用能力有很高的要求。二 高考中常见的开放性作文文章类型有：1复述故事 One day, we were having an English class when suddenly there was a knock on the door-（西城一模 2004）One day, we were having an English class when suddenly there was
2、 a knock on the door. Our teacher went out and soon returned with a smile on her face. She told us that a group of American students were visiting our school and they would like to chat with us in English. We were very glad to have this opportunity to practise our English. Soon pleasant conversation
3、s began. Today is March 5th. To learn from Lei Feng, at 3:30 p.m., my classmates and I went-（西城二模 2004）Today is March 5th . To learn from Lei Feng, at 3:30pm, my classmates and I went in groups separately to visit some old teachers who had retired from our school. We chatted with them for a while, a
4、nd then began to do some cleaning for them. Everyone worked very hard and we really felt glad we were able to do something for the old teachers. We hoped to have more chances to take part in such activities.2解决方案 On the morning of June 7, Li Ming is taking a bus on his way to take the entrance exami
5、nation. Unfortunately, he is caught in a traffic jam because of an accident. How can he manage to get there in time? Please think out two or three different ways for him. (海淀一模 2004)First of all he can persuade the bus driver to allow him to get off so that he can walk out of the heavy traffic jam t
6、o take another bus or a taxi. Or he can get off and ask an assistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike. Since it is an important day for the high school graduates, dialing 110 and getting help from the police is one of the choices as well. May 31, No Smoking Day, is drawing near. Now what do you w
7、ant to say to the smokers to help them get rid of the bad habit?（东城二模 2004）Today more and more people care for the problem of smoking because it is polluting the air, also its harmful to the peoples health and will cause lung cancer. When you want to smoke, you can eat something delicious or do some
8、 sports instead. Also you can ask the doctor for help. Whats the important, I think you should make a plan to get rid of the bad habit. Its our hope that we all take an active part in the activity. Im sure youll succeed in giving up smoking.3设计活动 You are talking with one of your close friends about
9、your plans for the summer vacation. You say to him, “ Im going to enjoy myself in the summer vacation.” He asks, “ what exactly are you going to do to have fun?”You tell him what you want to do to make your vacation great fun. Be sure to use one or more examples to show what you mean. (2003 北京 )Ill
10、go to a beach to see the seabirds flying in the dark-blue sky and drive a motorboat, sailing through clear water toward the rising sun. Then Ill surf the “” website, play games on “ FreeE, or chat with friends online about hot movies like “ The Lord of the Rings” and “Harry Potter”. 4解释原因 Tell your
11、friends why you are looking forward to the weekend.(宣武一模 2004)Having a good rest and reading some books are the most important weekend activities. Besides these two, I sometimes go shopping with my parents. Sometimes I go to visit my friends. I can also do something I like, such as watching TV, play
12、ing ping-pong, etc. I enjoy weekends very much because only on weekends can I find myself a true person but not only a student. 5发表评论 What do you think of going online in our spare time?I think we can go online in our spare time. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and t
13、he latest news at home and abroad. Whats more, network offer us a convenient way to communicate with each other. The Internet makes our lives outside class colourful and various.But I dont think it is right that a lot of precious time is spent in playing computer games, or even some students are oft
14、en absent from school for days. I think we should control the time online. China should devote major efforts to developing car industry. Do you agree?（上海 2001）I agree that China should devote major efforts to developing car industry.Now more and more families have their own cars. Its very convenient
15、 for the people to go to work. In holidays, all the families can travel to some place or go to visit exhibition far away by car. They save a lot of their spare time. With the development of car industry, the economy in china is developing rapidly too.But a lot of problems are coming about. Traffic i
16、n cities is getting heavier and heavier. The city is being polluted more and more seriously. To solve these problems, something must be done.三 学生习作存在的问题1审题出现严重错误（时态、文体、人称）2文章结构混乱，逻辑不通，罗嗦不到主题3英语汉化4错误百出四 解决方案1熟悉英语文章结构特点2朗读课文，背诵范文，大量课外阅读3强化基本句型的学习以及好词好句的积累五高考开放性作文练习1.One of you close friends tells you : “ I am suffering from depression(沮丧、消沉). I have trouble sleeping. Im often tired. When I think about the future I feel hopeless
