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1、 抄改 连扩抓审书面 表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题抄改 连扩抓审审书面 表达3 审: 审文体审要求审人称2007浙江高考在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕“ How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only , or in both English and Chinese? ” 这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文授课形式一：只用英语授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用 优点：有助于提高 听说能力等 缺憾：不易听懂等 结论：优点：易于理解等 缺憾：英语氛
2、围不等 结论：注意：1.词数100-120, 短文开头已给出(不计词数).2.参考词汇: atmosphere 氛围 I prefer my English classes to be taught in 某考生I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In English only, or in both English and Chinese, and i
3、ts all has its advantages and disadvantages.If in English only, can make our listening and speaking more good, and what worse, we will hard to understand our class.But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English atmosphere is less than in English only.In my opini
4、on, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and understand it good, listening or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.11分 书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?抄改 连扩抓抓审书面 表达时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此 人
5、们评价不一。请你对此现象向21st Century 投稿， 谈谈个人看法：态度一 态度二 你的观点 给观众提供了更多的 参与机会 控制不当，节目品位 无法保证 ？ 给媒体带来更多收益 短信费用过高，观众 易生反感 迎合年轻人对新事物 的追求 沉溺于此，浪费精力 要求:1词数：120词左右。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Practice: l提供机会l带来收益l迎合追求l保证品位l产生反感l浪费精力l你的观点 offer /provide chancesbring in profits / benefit from meet/appeal to the needs of ensur
6、e the tastefeel bad / bored / annoyed waste time and energyIn my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards列出要点书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?抄改 连扩扩抓审书面 表达1 offer chancesAudiences are offered more chances toparticipate in the live programs.2 bring in profits / benefit from They bring in p
7、rofits to the mass media. 3 appeal to the needs of They appeal to the needs of the young people.4 ensure the taste4 ensure the tasteWe cannot ensure the taste of the We cannot ensure the taste of the programs if short messages are out of programs if short messages are out of control. control. 5 feel
8、 bad / bored / annoyed 5 feel bad / bored / annoyed They cost a lot and make the audiences They cost a lot and make the audiences feel bored. feel bored.6 waste time and energy 6 waste time and energyIt will be a waste of time and energy if It will be a waste of time and energy if the young are addi
9、cted to them. the young are addicted to them.7 take a critical attitude 7 take a critical attitude In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards short messages. 书面表达六步法四、连句成文正确使用过渡词，使 行文流畅。并注意段 与段的衔接。 抄改 连连扩抓审书面 表达a. 表示列举和顺序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as，after tha
10、t b. b. 表示意义增补和引申用also, besides, above all, whats more / whats worse c. 表示结果用 so, therefore, as a result, sothat d. 表示意义转折用 instead, however, but e. 表示解释说明用 in other words, that is to say f. 表示概括和总结用 then, in all, as we know g. 表示时间顺序用 now, at first, when, after h. 表示并列关系用 or, and, also, too, i. 表示条
11、件关系用 as (so) long as, if, unless j. 表示举例用 for example, for instance, such as k. 表示让步关系用 though, even if , however, as 1.过好行文逻辑关2. 用活语言，准确生动使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词，with复合结 构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语 从句，状语从句等The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much
12、. (so that/sothat/suchthat)Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting books.b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not onlybut also)c. My brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing) My brother was riding a bik
13、e with me sitting on the seat behind him.Not having received his letter he decided to write to her again.d. He hadnt received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done)e. We are glad to see such great changes in ourschool life. ( how )How glad we are to see such great changes in
14、ourschool life.书面表达六步法五、查错改错注意时态、标点和拼写 是否正确,词数是否符合 要求等。抄改改 连扩抓审书面 表达书面表达六步法六、誊写修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!抄抄改 连扩抓审书面 表达4 规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写Make what you have written clear enough!小结l审题，抓点l造句，成文l改错，誉写文不对题（文体格式不规范）离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该 说的说的太多）词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄 袭试卷上的材料）病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错 误）卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱
15、涂改、添插箭头 满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!） 前车之鉴!一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达，给阅卷老师的印象应该是：语意要合情合理，过渡自然；语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安；语法要结构正确，无懈可击；语言要地道流畅，书写规范。目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。有的同学认为 有的同学认为 学校限制我们的自由；学 生和社会接触少；学生的 兴趣和爱好不能得到充分 的发展。因此 学校是学习知识的地方：学 生应该安心在学校里学习； 学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老 师，可能会 你的看法： 注意：1. 字数120左右; 不要逐字
16、翻译。2. 短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day longPractice Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they
