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1、恩波恩波考研英语考前考研英语考前 30 天狂背作文天狂背作文1恩波恩波考研英语考前考研英语考前 30 天狂背作文天狂背作文下载十一下载十一 贡献：贡献：国内大学英语考试辅导专家，具有丰富的考试辅导经验。在教学上精益求精，激情 洋溢，有高度的责任心。现已出版多部英语专著， “黄金模板”系列更居同类图书榜首。在 苏、浙、沪等地多所大学授课，深受学生欢迎。恩波学校六级网站版主，第一位在网上为 全国学生免费批改作文的老师，也是目前全国批改作文最多的老师。Direction 26 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in wh
2、ich you should: 1. describe the picture; 2. interpret the meaning of the picture; 3. make your comments. You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 审题：审题： 这道题目属于哲理类的题目，可以用多种方法来说明图中所阐述的道理，文章的安排 也有多种可能性。我们可以采用一种比较独特的方式，先描述图表，在第二段中就所表达 的内容进行提问，在第三段中以举例说明我们对该问题的理解和认识，最后在第四段做结。Sample: A mise
3、rable picture unfolds before our eyes: a flood has destroyed a whole city. We can imagine the loss of lives and property. Under the picture, there was a thoughtprovoking sentence: every drop of water says it is not responsible for the flood. This picture inevitably invites a series of questions: the
4、n who is responsible for the flood? Who has demolished the houses? Who has drowned the children? A good case in point is pollution. Twenty years ago, most rivers were so cleanthe water was drinkable and so many people went swimming and fishing. Only two decades later, many of them became so polluted
5、 that we can no longer drink the waterfishes have died out and nobody ever swims in it or washes clothes by it. Every one of us never thinks the industrial waste or the living garbage we once damped into the river would cause so serious a resulttoday the harsh reality has become too hard to swallow.
6、 Finally we realize that every drop of water actually is responsible for the flood. Only if every citizen takes on his responsibility as a member of a family, a nation and the world can all of us wish to have a more beautiful future. 点评：点评： 第一段对图表和图下的文字进行描述。这一段使用了少用的句型 A miserable picture unfolds be
7、fore our eyes 以深化看到图画后受到的震撼。而后加入了联想性的句子 We can imagine the loss of lives and property，这是不多见的。然后描述了图下的一句话。 第二段创造性地连问了三个问题，与图下的文字针锋相对，又为第三段的论述做了充 分的铺垫。三个问题中，第一个问题直接与上段末句形成对立，而后面两句则是呼应首段 的次句，可谓环环相扣，联系紧密。 第三段共分四句，举了污染的例子。第一句是常用句型。第二句和第三句形成了鲜明 的对比二十年前的河流清澈，二十年后的却污染严重。最后一句是关键倾倒工业 废料、生活垃圾的人也没有想到会有如此严重的后果。
8、最后一段是结论段，共分两句。第一句话正好与图中的话相反，这是在论述后得到的 结论。第二句话引申说每个公民都要尽自己的责任，我们才能拥有美好的明天。 恩波恩波考研英语考前考研英语考前 30 天狂背作文天狂背作文2心得：心得： 在说理的文章中，找到切入点是很重要的，所以很多时候要用到举例。一般说来，有 多种例子可举，并不一定哪一种就是最好的。这时由于时间有限，不可太犹豫。本文中举 了污染的例子，解答了第二段中的疑问，也直接引出了末段的结论，作用非常重要，请大 家用心体会。Direction 27 Study the following pictures carefully and write an
9、 essay in which you should: 1. describe the pictures; 2. interpret the meaning of the pictures; 3. make your comments. You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题：审题： 这是一个非常好的题目，我们可以这样来构思：描述图表分析其中道理推广 到生活中采取行动。 Sample: In the first picture, a young girl poured a whole barrel of water o
10、n a little flower in order to help it grow more quickly. In the second picture, the flower withered before long, and the child was cryingshe wondered why things should be that way. Trees need water to grow up, and flowers need water to bloom. But too much water can no longer be helpfulit can only hi
11、nder their growth and even kill them. Whenever we water trees or flowers, we should do it according to the natural principle. Actually, whenever we take action in our daily life, we should follow the law of nature. It is understandable for us to dream of quick success and then take immediate actions
12、 to turn it into reality, but we should not be too hasty. If we are always in a hurry, quality often suffers, making it more difficult for us to attain the aim. Up until now, we come to understand the meaning of the old saying “Haste makes waste” better. We should break our great plan into small par
13、ts, analyze the feature of each part and carry it out step by stepwhen we follow the natural pace of development, success will soon be in our hands. 点评：点评： 本文共分为四段。第一段描述两幅图画，突出了其中的对比。第二段分三句来阐述画 中的道理。前两句话说树与花都需要水，但过多的水不但无益，反倒有害。最后一句话说 浇水要符合自然规律。第三段共三句话。第一句说在日常生活中，我们应遵守自然规律。 第二句说梦想快速成功然后立即采取行动是可以理解的，但
14、是不能太着急。第三句话说如 果总是匆匆忙忙，质量肯定会受影响，达到目的就更难了。最后一段两句话，第一句话说 我们最终更好地理解了“欲速则不达”这句话。第二句话说了我们正确的做法将计划 拆分成小的部分，分析每部分的特点，而后一步步地付诸实施。 心得：心得： 该文由浅入深，环环相扣，渐入佳境，源自宏观上全局的安排和微观上语言的处理。 从分析画本身的道理，说到我们的日常生活，再到我们处事的具体做法，非常自然，也使 人感到亲切。 在语言上，首段采用了两句简洁的描述，突出显示了对比。次段首句采用的是平行结恩波恩波考研英语考前考研英语考前 30 天狂背作文天狂背作文3构。次句采用了破折号表示递进。第三段中
15、第二句采用了表转折的并列句，第三句采用了 条件状语从句。第四段第二句采用了平行的动宾词组，而后使用破折号，最后使用了时间 状语从句。Direction 28 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the picture, 2. interpret the meaning of the picture; 3. make your comments. You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2
16、. 审题：审题： 这道题目看似简单，却富含哲理，对我们而言是一个很好的挑战。在谋篇布局上，需 要精心安排。可以这样做：在描述图画后，在第二段中直接对图中的论断进行批驳，而后 在第三段拓展到社会生活中相关的方面。最后在第四段中下结论。 Sample:In the picture, a young man is lying in bed and says to himself, “If I do nothing, I will make no mistakes.” How ridiculous this statement is! To err is humanwho can avoid making mistakes all the time? If we are careful and cautious enough, we can always learn from our mistakes and failures. So when we
