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1、20142014 英语高考疯狂时刻引领状元之路：英语高考疯狂时刻引领状元之路：短文改错短文改错 3 3( (建议用时建议用时: : 4040 分钟分钟)下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误; 2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 3. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。1Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I
2、 had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight As, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victors dream was to see
3、really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and
4、threw it at each other. 2The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel hom
5、esick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of Im on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In th
6、e other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 3As we know, when senior students finish their school, most of their reference books are thrown away, which are still in good conditions. What a great waste it is! I suggested that we should recycle all this books. On t
7、he one hand, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. On the other hand, the notes on the books are helpful to whoever need them. In fact, recycling textbooks has been increasing popular in such countries as America and Australia. We should learn from the
8、m, but make every effort to build energy-saving society. In my opinion, it is of many benefit both to our present and to our future. 4Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly wh
9、at lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, dont put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go wal
10、king. Lastly, make friend with others, such as, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. 答案解析答案解析1答案: Skiing is my favorite sport,
11、even though I had only skied for four days in havemy whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did ifwell in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight takeAs, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”wo
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13、hildren. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other. them 1. 【解析】第一句 hadhave。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态, 所以, 状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态, 不可能是过去完成时态。2. 【解析】第二句 becauseif。在 that 引导的宾语从句中, 又包含一个条件状语从句。在爸爸许诺时, 考试还没进行, 所以, 应该用 if 引导条件状语从句。3. 【解析】第二句 bringtake。此处的 take 表示“带我们去”, 不能用 bring。4 . 【解析】第四句 wordswor
14、d。keep ones word 是固定词组, 意为“遵守诺言” 。5. 【解析】第五句 reallyreal。用形容词修饰名词。来源:学|科|网6. 【解析】第六句 atfor。for Christmas vacation 意为“去度圣诞假期” 。7. 【解析】第七句 climbclimbed。文章叙述的是过去的事情, 故应用一般过去时态。8. 【解析】第八句 play 后面加 with。play with snow 意为“玩雪” 。9. 【解析】第十句去掉 the。little children 表示泛指,其前面不用定冠词。10. 【解析】第十一句第二个 itthem。此处的 them 指
15、的是 snowballs, 而不是 snow。2答案: The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in highdecidedschool. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my getting dollarspockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home whi
16、le I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different when totallyexperience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of Im on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their toadvices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I h
