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1、,书面表达写作技巧,Which composition feels more attractive, why?,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面(neatness),9分,6分,24分,影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料 (words, phrases and sentence patterns),人靠衣装，文靠词装,A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，,B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;,Writing a composition is just like making a hamburger.,词汇, 倒装句，强调句，主从复合句，with复合结构，it做形式主语或宾语,1.
2、覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体,要点全,连接词 （递进，转折， 因果， 目的， 归纳）,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,“My Way to Learn English”,As we all know, English learning is more and more important. Its a big problem to improve our English. I used to be poor at English. But after trying many useful ways,
3、 I make some progress. I was poor at reciting. To slove this problem, I write down the words list. I read it when I am waiting for the bus or waiting in line. After using this way and working hard, my English has improved a lot. What a useful way to learn English.,这篇文章中规中矩，思路较为清晰，语法也没有错误。但在考场上也拿不了高分
4、， 这篇文章要修改，主要可从以下几个问题上入手： 语言平平无奇、繁琐； 句式单一； 缺少复合句； 接下来我们一个点一个点地来修改。,As we all know, English learning is more and more important. Its a big problem to improve our English. 润色语言（改换已经用烂了的短语）； As far as Im concerned Its a big problem to improve English because english learning is more and more important.
5、添加复合句（because ）,2,I used to be poor at English. But after trying many useful ways, I make some progress. I was poor at reciting. 语言重复繁琐且单调。 改：I used to be poor at reciting English words. But after 注：使用了方法并取得进步可以放在后文进行具体的交代。,3,To slove this problem, I write down the words list. I read it when I am wa
6、iting for the bus or waiting in line. To solve this problem, I try writing down the words list and carry it with me so as to memorize and go over them anytime.,4,After using this way and working hard, my English has improved a lot. 改：With the help of this useful way and my hard work, I make big prog
7、ress in my English learning. 注：看似句子变长了，但是将时间状语改为介词短语，更加能突出这种学习方法对我的帮助之大。而且后半句明确点出我获益于这种方法。 这句话也成了全文的中心句！,5,What a useful way to learn English. 这种结尾真是太不给力了，一点都不出彩。如果放在一篇好文章的结尾显得虎头蛇尾，很有可能会影响阅卷老师的最后评分。 改：Therefore, why not try the way yourself to improve you English. 使用提议的句型能在总结的基础上发出呼告。,SEE YOU！,In summary：作文的修改还是要多读多感知，写完考场作文后一定要再通读几遍，检查语法。尽量还是先打好草稿，这样检查语法同时，润色语言，再誊抄到答题纸上才能发挥自己的最高水准。,Thanks for your attention!,Goodbye!,
