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1、Summary writingWhatisasummary?Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails.How do you usually do summary writing?Steps:2. Read for structure3. Read for main points4. Rewrite in our own words1.Read for writing style Step1.ReadquicklyforwritingstyleNewscommentary（新闻评论）（新闻评论）N
2、ews(background)Comments(suggestions)EndingPara1-2Para3-4Para5-6para7NewsCommentsSuggestionsEndingStep2.ReadquicklyforstructurePara1-2NewsPara3-4CommentsPara5-6SuggestionsPara7EndingParas.Main points1News23Comments45Suggestions67EndingStep3.Readcarefullyformainpointsa man was killed/the tiger/get int
3、o the zoo in Ningbo/without paying for a ticket/the tiger was shot deadblame / cold-hearted/ wrongtired of forgivingthe park was not well preparedraise peoples awareness / visitors to observe rules no more such tragediesStep4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip1:usewordsorphrasesofsimilarmeaningOriginalexpress
4、ionsrewritegetintowithoutpayingforaticketwasshotdeadcold-heartedthoseinthewrongenterwithoutpayingwaskilledcold-bloodedrule-breakersStep4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip2.changeclausesorsentences1.Somesaidthiswasasignthatpeoplearebecomingmorecold-hearted.Buttheyarewrong.1.Somesaidthatpeoplebecomecold-hearte
5、d,whichiswrong.2.Thetigersdeathshowstheparkwasnotwellpreparedforsuchemergencies.2.Theparkshouldmakebetterpreparations.Step4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip3.useproperconnectionsThemajorityofvoicesonlineblamedthedeadmanfortheanimalsdeath.Somesaidthatpeoplebecomecold-hearted,whichiswrong.Peoplearejusttiredof
6、forgivingthoseinthewrong.Peopleblamedthemannotbecausetheyarecold-hearted,butbecausetheyaretiredofforgivingrule-breakers.Writeasummaryingroupsoffour.Getreadytosharethesummaryinclass.Summary Writing1.Isthelengthproper?(4080words)2.Isthereanysentenceexactlyfromthearticle?3.Doesitincludeallthemainpoints
7、? one possible version： A man who entered a zoo in Ningbo without paying was killed by a tiger which was consequently killed. Many people blamed the rule-breaker for the death of the tiger not because they are cold-blooded but because sympathy shouldnt be abused. To avoid such tragedies, the park sh
8、ould take more emergency precautions and the public should raise their awareness of obeying rules. (62 words)UseyourownwordsRulesRewrite the article with about 60 wordsDont miss any main pointsMake the summary coherent(连贯的)Correct spelling, proper punctuation marks and good handwritingSummary Writin
9、g ReadformainpointsSkillsRead for structureRead for writing style Organize your languageSummary Writing HomeworkFinishyourownsummaryandswapitwithyourpartnerandmakesomechangesothatitcanbeabetterone.Wishyougoodluckinthecomingexam!(1)Use words of similar meanings同义替换法同义替换法I didnt catch any fish owing t
10、o the fact that I was not patient.I didnt catch any fish_ I was not patient.becauseHowtorewrite(2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence正话反说法正话反说法You will fail.You will _. not succeed(3)Changethepartofspeech词性转换法词性转换法Patience is very important.Patience is _.of great importance(4)Changethestru
11、ctureofasentence句式变化法句式变化法语态变换：语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.Children should_more praise.be given简单句变复合句：简单句变复合句：Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more, _ will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise. They
12、 will achieve more success.When _, children will achieve more success.whichgiven more praise(5)Use the shortest possible transitions连词衔接法连词衔接法 注意使用一些短而精的连词，如注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but, and, so, while, however, then, thus, yet, for, therefore, including, instead of 等。等。 We should encourage children. We should
13、 not scold them.We should encourage children_ scolding them.instead of(6) Change the order of the words. 词序改变法词序改变法The secret of success was patience._ was _.Patiencethe secret of success(7) Omit the details细节省略法细节省略法Dont always scold and give lots of praise instead. Dont scold and give praise inste
14、ad.(8) Make use of the meaning of a sentence句句意理解法意理解法Shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular._More and more people prefer Internet shopping.Step3.Read for Main PointsPara.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority ofvoices online blamed the dead man for the animalsdeath. Some
15、said this was a sign that people arebecoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong.Peoplehavebeendisplayingincreasinglymoreenthusiasmforhelpingthoseinneedandparticipatingincharitywork.In2016,theChinaCharityFederationreceiveddonationsof18.8billionyuan($2.7billion)intotal,46percentmorethanthedonations
16、receivedin2015,andtheysenthelpinghandstoonetragedyafteranother. Para.3 As news of the incident spread, the majority ofvoices online blamed the dead man for the animalsdeath. Some said this was a sign that people arebecoming more cold-hearted. But they are wrong.Peoplehavebeendisplayingincreasinglymo
17、reenthusiasmforhelpingthoseinneedandparticipatingincharitywork.In2016,theChinaCharityFederationreceiveddonationsof18.8billionyuan($2.7billion)intotal,46percentmorethanthedonationsreceivedin2015,andtheysenthelpinghandstoonetragedyafteranother. opinionsupportingdetailsPara.4Peoplearejusttiredofforgivi
18、ngthoseinthewrong.Whilesympathyisright,ithasbeenabusedtoomuch.Whensomebodycommitsacrime,nomatterhowcruelthecrimeis,mediaoutletsexplainthecriminalsmiserablechildhoodandtherearecallsforforgiveness.Whensomeonesmokesinpublic,therearealwayspeoplecallingfortolerance.Step3.ReadforMainPointsPara.4Peoplearejusttiredofforgivingthoseinthewrong.Whilesympathyisright,ithasbeenabusedtoomuch.Whensomebodycommitsacrime,nomatterhowcruelthecrimeis,mediaoutletsexplainthecriminalsmiserablechildhoodandtherearecallsforforgiveness.Whensomeonesmokesinpublic,therearealwayspeoplecallingfortolerance.reasonexamples
