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1、读写任务之议论文文段导与练9/14/20242Review(Narration writing)Review(Narration writing)Steps of writing a narration:Analyze topic, key words,the requirementsOutline brainstormCompose DosStructure1.A paragraph: Topic sentence+Details+Ending2.Linking words and transitional sentences.(过去时；紧扣主题过去时；紧扣主题 )9/14/202439/1
2、4/20244二、二、 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV.This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Whos the Boss?Then one day Ethans mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjec
3、ts. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experime
4、nts with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making t
5、he act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.9/14/20245写作内容写作内容1、以约、以约30词概括上文的主要内容。词概括上文的主要内容。2、以约、以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法
6、：、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)、你的父母、你的父母(或其他亲人或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的；是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。写作要求写作要求 1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。opinionsexamplessuggestionsRequiredelements:opinions;examples
7、;suggestions9/14/20246Please analyze Sample 1 from different aspects.You can refer to the skills we have learned in writinga narration.本课时重点：如何写好议论文中的看法部分本课时重点：如何写好议论文中的看法部分9/14/20247As far as I am concerned, encouraging kids with cash results in negative effects on children. Firstly, kids will poss
8、ess the illusion that study is their parents business but not their responsibility. In this way, their motivation of study will not be fully activated or last long.Meanwhile,on the aspect of kids future development, this action may shape their habits of doing everything for visible returns. Being no
9、 exception, my parents also care about my studying but they never temper me to study hard by cash. Usually their constant timely encouragement after a frustrating exam or an unforgettable party in honor of success give me confidence and passion for my study. .opinionsexamples紧扣主题紧扣主题选择一方阐述选择一方阐述（反）（
10、反）观点健康积极观点健康积极Tense: present tense and future tense9/14/20248 From what has been mentioned above, we can draw the conclusion that parents should seek other effective methods instead of cash to motivate kids. On one hand, it is wise to cultivate the kids awareness that study is their own responsibili
11、ty. On the other hand, parents are supposed to offer mental support to their kids. Only in these ways can parents make their kids grow up healthily. suggestions9/14/20249As far as I am concerned, encouraging kids with cash results in negative effects on children. Firstly, kids will possess the illus
12、ion that study is their parents business but not their responsibility. In this way, their motivation of study will not be fully activated or last long.Meanwhile, on the aspect ofkids future development,this action may shape their habits of doing everything for visible returns. .topic sentencesupport
13、ing evidences最典型，最有说服力最典型，最有说服力的在前的在前, 重要重要次要次要You can add an ending sentence9/14/202410As far as I am concerned, encouraging kids with cash results in negative effects on children. Firstly, kids will possess the illusion that study is their parents business but not their responsibility. In this way
14、, their motivation of study will not be fully activated or last long.Meanwhile, on the aspect of kids future development,this action may shape their habits of doing everything for visible returns. .9/14/2024111.Icantagreemorewiththeauthorbecause.2.Personally,Iprefer.3.Inmyopinion,itisrightforsb.todo
15、.4.Frommypointofview,Ithink.5.Formwhatthewriterhassaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat6.Ifullyagreethat.7.Onaccountofthis,Ibelieve.如何引出观点如何引出观点9/14/2024121.Whatismore.Moreover.BesidesInadditionMeanwhile2.Firstly,.Secondly(besides),.Thirdly(finally),.3.Foronething,.Foranotherthing,.4.Firstandforemost.Secondly
16、.Lastbutnotleast.5.First.Meanwhile.6.Inthefirstplace.Furthermore.7.Ononehand.Ontheotherhand.如何列举观点如何列举观点 9/14/2024131.Inconclusion,.2.Inaword,.3.Toconclude,.4.Tosumup,.5.Advancedsentences（倒装句，（倒装句，强强调句，从句句，从句.）如何结尾如何结尾9/14/202414Sample 2(Paragraph 1)Sample 2(Paragraph 1) I think it is bad to encoura
17、ge children to study by money. Money isnt valuable to everyone, and children dont know that earning money isnt easy. If children really want to study, their goals can be improved.topic sentencesupporting evidence(内容不够充实，内容不够充实，条理不够清晰）条理不够清晰）9/14/202415SummarySummaryAnalyze topic, key words,the requi
18、rementsOutline brainstormCompose DosStructure(现在时；紧扣主题现在时；紧扣主题 )9/14/202416SummarySummaryStructure1.A paragraph: Topic sentence+Details+Ending（演绎法演绎法：总：总-分；总分；总-分分-总总) My Attitude towards the Issue Evidence 1 (Most important one) Evidence 2 (Secondly important) Evidence 3(Thirdly important)2.Linking
19、 words and transitional sentences.9/14/202417Have a tryHave a tryPlease polish your compositions using the skills we just have learned and show themto us!9/14/202418读写任务(共 1 小题，满分 25 分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。 In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams.The last exam
20、 was the English linguistics. Many of my classmates would cheat in exams. I hadnt done it before. For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me. When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam. I
21、was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper. Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts. At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics for
22、m was just hidden in my pocket. I first finished other questions. To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket. I felt so conflicted. I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand. However, I hadnt opened the left hand to look at the form till th
23、e exam was over. I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam. Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points. But now I feel good for my failed cheating.写作内容写作内容 1以约以约 30 个词概括这段短文的内容；个词概括这段短文的内容； 2然后以约然后以约 120 个词对学生考试作弊现象进行议论，个词对学生考试作弊现象进行议论，内容包括：内容包括： (1)学生考试作弊的原因；学生考试作弊的原因； (2)你对考试作弊
24、的看法；你对考试作弊的看法； (3)你认为学校怎样才能杜绝考试作弊现象。你认为学校怎样才能杜绝考试作弊现象。 9/14/202419SummarySummaryAnalyze topic, key words,the requirementsOutline brainstormCompose DosStructure9/14/202420SummarySummaryDos1. 行文时使用行文时使用现在时现在时和和将来时将来时。2.你的观点和建议你的观点和建议往往是与阅读材料中的内容往往是与阅读材料中的内容紧密相关的，是要紧密相关的，是要紧扣你要说明的主题的紧扣你要说明的主题的。9/14/202
25、421SummarySummaryStructure1.A paragraph: Topic sentence+Details+Ending（演绎法演绎法：总：总-分；总分；总-分分-总总) My Attitude towards the Issue Evidence 1 (Most important one) Evidence 2 (Secondly important) Evidence 3(Thirdly important)2.Linking words and transitional sentences.9/14/202422HomeworkHomework2、以约、以约120词
26、对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：、你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)、你的父母、你的父母(或其他亲人或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的；是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。、你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。Theskillsofwritingsuggestionsissimilartotheonesofwritingopinions.Pleasepolishtheparagraphaboutsuggestionsafterclass.*Thank you!Thank you!
