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1、近几年高考真题回顾2017邀请邀请邀请加入乒乓球队邀请加入乒乓球队书信书信2016求助修改申请书和个人简历书信2015约稿介绍稿件的要求书信2014询问情况询问广告情况书信2013告知情况把叔叔将去开会的事项告知朋友书信2012申请申请参加夏令营电子邮件【2013新课标新课标1卷：卷：】假定你是李华。请你给笔友假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜李明：高个子，戴眼镜航
2、班号：航班号：CA985到达：到达：8月月6日上午日上午11:30Usefulexpressions1. do/ask sb. a favor 请某人帮忙请某人帮忙2. Chinese painting 中国画中国画3. pick sb. up at the airport 到机场接人到机场接人4. a pair of glasses 一副眼镜一副眼镜5. flight number 航班号航班号6. I would be very grateful if you could . 如果您能如果您能，我将感激不尽。，我将感激不尽。7. have trouble in doing sth.在做某事
3、方面有困难在做某事方面有困难8. I find it hard for me to do sth. 我发现做某事很困难我发现做某事很困难Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the Chinese painting you like very much? My uncle will bring it to you soon. I hope you will like i
4、t. I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visited the US, so I hope you can pick him up at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985. I would be very grateful if you could meet him at the airport. My uncle is tall and will
5、 be wearing a pair of glasses and a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaWhich sentence patterns can we learn from this sample writing? How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the Chinese painting you
6、like very much? My uncle will bring it to you soon. I hope you will like it.Step 1:state the purpose of the letter（表明来信目的）（表明来信目的） I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visited the US, so I hope you can pick him up at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on Augu
7、st 6th and his flight number is CA 985. I would be very grateful if you could meet him at the airport. My uncle is tall and will be wearing a pair of glasses and a blue jacket.Step2: raise the request （委婉得体地（委婉得体地提出请求）提出请求）Translation:1. 我发现在课堂上很难理解他的话。我发现在课堂上很难理解他的话。 I find it hard for me to unders
8、tand him in class.2. 我在学习英语语法方面有困难。我在学习英语语法方面有困难。I have trouble in learning English grammar.3. 我不知道我能不能我不知道我能不能星期三或星期五下午来。星期三或星期五下午来。I wonder if I could come on Wednesday or Friday afternoons.求助信框架：Para1:自我介绍+问候+目的（求助）ImyourChinesefriendLiHua.+Howareyougoingwithyourlifeandstudy?+Imwritingtoaskyouify
9、oucandomeafavor.Para2:细述具体困难：(首先First/Tobeginwith,Ihavedifficultyindoing.其次Besides,Ifindithardformeto;总结：Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskforyourhelp.）Para3:表达感谢,期待回复（联系方式）Iwouldbegratefulifyoucanhelpme（domeafavor）.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply. 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加月来
10、到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子写一封电子邮件：邮件：1. 询问询问Tom的生活和学习情况；的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；帮忙； 3. 告诉告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。你打算赛后去看他。Dear Tom, It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going
11、 with you? I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would apprecia
12、te it if you could offer me a hand. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to see you again!Yours,Li Hua英语高考作文评分标准1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应
13、注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写词汇用法均可接受6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。7.内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。【各档次的给分范围和要求】第五档(很好)；(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
14、6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了
15、预期的写作目的。第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。不得分：（0分）未能传达给读者仟何信
16、息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。作文中反应的问题1.写了较多与文章无关的内容2.书写不整洁，有涂改，涂改液不能用3.标点符号忘记写4.字数不达标5.个别常用单词拼写错误6.格式：每段首句应空4到6个字母，与前面称呼的Dear后面对齐。假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。家里，刚回到国内。回国后你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因回国后你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内此给他写一封信，请
17、他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：容如下： 1. 感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助；感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助； 2. 一本英语词典忘记带回；一本英语词典忘记带回； 3. 词典对你的意义；词典对你的意义； 4. 邮资自己邮资自己付付。参考词汇：参考词汇：珍贵的礼物珍贵的礼物 a precious gift 邮资邮资 postage1.感谢你在美国期间给我的帮助。(Thanksbforsth)2.我突然发现我把字典落在你家了。(leavebehind)3.我会付邮费。(payfor)4.字典的意义：它是我母亲给我的一份珍贵礼物，对我的英语学习很有帮助。(apreciousgift,behelpfu
18、lto)5.请把字典寄给我，好吗？(Wouldyouplease?)6.有关字典的信息（半开放）：1）它是一本英汉词典，红色封面的，上面还有我的名字。2）它肯定在我卧室的书架上。(must)1.Thankyouforyoukindness2.IsuddenlyrealizedIleftmydictionarybehindatyourplace.3.Iwillpayforthepostage.4.Itisapreciousgiftfrommymother.5.ItisveryhelpfultomyEnglishstudy.6.Wouldyoupleasesenditbacktome?7.Itis
19、anEnglish-ChineseDictionary,aredcoverwithmynameonit.Itmustbeonthebookshelfinmybedroom.Dear Mr. Brown, Im now safely back home. Thank you very much for all the kindness I got from you during my stay in America . Hope everything is fine with you there. Now I wonder whether I could ask you ( to do me )
20、a favor. When I came back, I suddenly realized that I had left my English-Chinese dictionary behind at your place. It is the one with a red cover. The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom. It is a precious gift from my American teacher. Would you please send it back to me? Ill pay for the postage. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. Thanks and all the best.Yours,Li Hua
