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1、Section Writing典典题示例示例读后续写读后续写(2020山东卷山东卷)阅读下面材料阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。左右。The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to ma
2、ke ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morni
3、ng she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boyhis name was Bernardhad interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,Jo
4、hn,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry
5、.“We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good
6、 one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too._ With everything
7、 ready,Bernard started out on his new business._写作指写作指导1.认真读懂所提供的材料认真读懂所提供的材料:善良的善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社一家住在一个小社区里区里,他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床,女主人要照顾丈夫女主人要照顾丈夫,无法外出赚钱无法外出赚钱,家中的小男孩家中的小男孩Bernard也做也做不了什么事情不了什么事情,生活十分困难。后来生活十分困难。后来,Meredith的孩子想出了的孩子想出了一个主意一个主意制作爆米花制作爆米花,让让Bernard去卖爆米花。去
8、卖爆米花。2.根据所给材料确定文章主题根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith一家通过制作和卖爆一家通过制作和卖爆米花帮助米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境。一家摆脱困境。3.续写第一段首句为续写第一段首句为“When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.(当当Meredith太太听到太太听到John的主意时的主意时,她也认为这是个好主意她也认为这是个好主意)”,故可针对如何实现故可针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思制作爆米花这个提议展开构思;续写第二段首句为续写第二段首句为“With ev
9、erything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.(一一切准备就绪后切准备就绪后,Bernard开始了他的新生意开始了他的新生意)”,故可针对故可针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。高分范文高分范文When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the local supermarket together.They bought a bag of
10、corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home,they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.With the popcorn,they went to Bernards home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help th
11、is family.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore,he asked Mrs Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.He also added cream and salt to the
12、popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of the Meredith family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.名师点评名师点评1.续写部分和前面的文章衔接合理续写部分和前面的文章衔接合理,并且与原文情节发展、人并且与原文情节发展、人物性格相一致物性格相一致,故事情节的向后延续发展合乎情理。故事情节的向后延续发展合乎情理。2.续写的语言与原文的语言保持了风格上的一
13、致。句子的表续写的语言与原文的语言保持了风格上的一致。句子的表达形式多样化达形式多样化,使用了一些高级句式和高级词汇使用了一些高级句式和高级词汇,提高了书面提高了书面表达的档次和可读性。表达的档次和可读性。3.作文层次清晰作文层次清晰,要点全面要点全面,表达流畅表达流畅,切合题干要求切合题干要求,句子结构句子结构准确准确,篇章结构连贯。篇章结构连贯。高分典句高分典句1.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.Meredith一家人帮助了这个家庭一家人帮助了这个家庭,所以也感到很高兴。所以也感到很高兴。2.
14、He did not forget the help of the Meredith family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.他没有忘记他没有忘记Meredith一家人的帮助一家人的帮助,他也尽其所有的能力去他也尽其所有的能力去帮助那些需要帮助的人。帮助那些需要帮助的人。即学即即学即练阅读下面材料阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。左右。A funny thing happened to
15、 Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur
16、stopped and said,“It looks like you have got a problem.”“I am afraid so.I am in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“Thanks.If you are sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these two suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all,Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turne
