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1、书面表达（讲义）一、观点表述类书面表达目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史，有人选择读史书来了解历史。你的选择及理由是什么？请你根据以下内容写一篇英文短文。选择理由看历史剧情节有趣、通俗易懂；读历史书资料真实、引人深思；你的选择？要求：1. 语言表达准确；短文连贯通顺；2. 短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；4. 词数 80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Many historical plays have been on TV recently. 一审（审题）观点表述类书面表达看历史剧学历史 VS 看历史书学历史二理理要点：
2、 + 个人观点理结构：总 陈述整体情况分 观点及理由观点及理由总 自己的观点及理由三定定人称 第一人称、第三人称定顺序 逻辑顺序定时态 一般现在时第 页四查例文赏析Many historical plays have been on TV recently. About learning history by reading books or by watching these plays, people have different opinions.Those who learn history by watching historical plays think the plays ar
3、e interesting and easy to understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.While, other people think reading books on history is a good way to learn history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can also learn and think a lot from them while reading.As f
4、or me, I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time. Whats more, I think it is easier for me to understand the history book after I finish watching the TV plays.二、写作训练营中学生的苦恼对于 “碰到作业困难时是否向老师请教”，同学们持有不同的观点，请你根据下表内容的提示，用英语写一篇短文。陈述同学们的观点及理由，并谈谈你的观点及理由，发表在校园网的论坛
5、上。观点理由向老师请教老师讲解的清楚，易于理解增加与老师交流的机会不向老师请教性格内向，羞于开口怕被同学嘲笑你的观点及理由：(理由至少 2 条，不能重复已给的理由)注意:1. 短文必须包含表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；3. 词数 80 左右。参考词汇：explain clearly, communicate with, be laughed atThe students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework prob
6、lems.一审观点表述类书面表达碰到作业困难时是否向老师请教二理理要点 向老师请教及看法不向老师请教及看法自己的看法理结构总 引入话题，客观陈述学生不同看法分 向老师请教a.老师讲解清楚，易于理解b.增加与老师交流机会不向老师请教a.性格内向，羞于开口b.怕同学取笑总 自己看法a.得到更多学习的方法向老师请教b.解决问题容易，节省时间三定定人称 第三人称、第一人称定顺序 逻辑顺序定时态 一般现在时四查例文赏析Whether to Ask Teachers for HelpThe students of our class have different ideas about whether w
7、e ask teachers for help with homework problems.Those who prefer to ask teachers for help think that teachers can explain clearly, and it will be a good chance to communicate with teachers.However, some disagree. On one hand, they are too shy to ask teachers for help. On the other hand, they are afra
8、id to be laughed at by others.As for me, I would like to ask teachers for help. When I do this, I can get more ways for my study. It is also easier for me to solve the problems with their help, and I can save more time in homework. Teachers can help me a lot.社会公德假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英文写一篇
9、短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评述。要点提示：1. 邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟；2. 你请他们不要那样做；3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你；4. 你认为: 1)他们在公共场所那样做是不对的；2)年轻人是祖国的未来，应该 参考词汇：嘲笑 laugh at要求：词数：80 左右短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.一审（审题）“记叙+观点表述类”书面表达二理理要点 记叙事情经过；表述观点理结构总 引入话题 (上周六晚上，全家在餐馆就餐)分 记叙经过
10、1. 邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟；2. 你请他们不要那样做；3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你； 表述观点 (就事论事)他们在公共场所那样做是不对的总 总结论述 (升华主题)年轻人是祖国的未来，应该注意自身言行、关注社会公德三定定人称 第三人称、第一人称定顺序 逻辑顺序定时态 一般过去时、过去进行时四查例文赏析Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.We were enjoying ourselves when something disturbing happened. A group of young peopl
11、e were sitting at the table nearby. While they were eating, they talked loudly and smoked cigarettes, making the restaurant full of noise and smoke.I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me.Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.In fact, what they did u
12、pset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, one should keep quiet and not affect others when in public.Therefore its completely bad behavior to do that in the restaurant. Whats more, we should always pay attention to our manners and public morality, as young people are the future o
13、f the country.三、课堂检测假如你是Jenny，你的好友 Linda 在微博上说最近很累很不开心，而且很担心即将到来的期末考试，请你在 Linda 的微博中回复， 给她一些建议，使她振作起来。文中不得出现真实人名和校名。提示：1. 分析 Linda 不开心的原因；2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力；3. 给她美好的祝福。一审（审题）书信格式下观点表述类书面表达我(Jenny)针对微博上好友 Linda 很累也不开心，考前担忧分析原因并给予建议二理理要点 Linda 很累不开心的原因给 Linda 的建议给 Linda 的祝福理结构总 开篇点题，分析很累不开心原因可能是学习压力太大可能是
14、熬夜休息不好分 结合实际，给出建议建议其与家长沟通交流，他们更有经验建议其与好朋友交流，寻找学习方法不要熬夜，注意休息和运动总 总结全篇，送出祝愿三定定人称 第二人称定顺序 逻辑顺序定时态 一般现在时四查例文赏析Dear Linda,I know you are very tired and unhappy these days. Perhaps you study under too much pressure. Or you may have stayed up too late to study and this makes you exhausted.First, I think yo
15、u can talk with your parents because they have more experience than us and they may give you some advice. Second, chatting with a good friend may help you. You can talk to a good friend and ask whether he/she has similar problems and how he/she deal with them. Finally, youd better not stay up late again and do some exercise. Being healthy and energetic is important for us.Cheer up! Your problem will soon be over. The less pressure, the better life! Best wishes to you!Yours, Jenny
