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1、抓大放小，不漏要点高考英语书面表达要求学生通过审查文字提示、图画、表格等后进行有一定控制性的写作。学生在这种题型上常犯的错误之一就是：遗漏要点。难点6月9日，星期天，你和朋友本来约好去看球赛，但未看成。请你根据下列六幅图画写一篇日记。注意：（1）日记必须包括所有图画内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；（2）词数100左右。（3）开头已给出。June 9,Sunday FineIt is Sudnay today.案例探究10月23日（星期五）中午在你上学途中发生了一件事情。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：（1）日记须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增减细节，使日记连贯。（2）词数100左右。命
2、题意图：本题考查学生的读图能力和运用逻辑讲述故事、传达主旨的能力。错解分析：（1）人称、时态运用不准确；（2）主要内容遗漏。解题技巧与方法：（1）细读文字说明部分，弄清人称、时间、事件背景；（2）仔细观察每一幅图，确定文章中心，确定内容要点：a.听见喊救命，下水救女孩 b.好心人相助 c.送女孩去医院 d.上课迟到 e.感谢信 f.受表扬；（3）依据要点写出提纲，然后拓展成文；（4）检查要点、格式、人称、时态、动词变化形式、标点符号等。参考答案：October 23rd Friday FineOn my way to school at noon I heard loud shouts fro
3、m the lake. I found a girl struggling in the water. I quickly jumped into the lake, swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank. A kind woman also came to help. We immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital. When I hurried to school, I was late for class. However, I didnt expla
4、in to my teacher what had happened. But to my surprise, a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon. So my teacher and classmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot. I felt a little shy but proud.锦囊妙计1.文字、图画或图表同等重视，不可厚此薄彼，粗心大意。2.确定中心，围绕中心确定内容要
5、点，凡是对说明文章中心来讲必不可少的内容切不可遗漏，而与中心无关的的细枝末节都可以省略;3.可将内容要点写在草稿纸上，然后依据要点写出提纲，成文后再根据草稿纸上的要点逐一查对。歼灭难点训练1.（）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。注意：（1）包括示意图中主要内容；（2）词数100左右；（3）信的开头已为你写好。（4）生词：图书城Book TownDear Mike，Im glad to hear you are coming soonIve planned a one-day t
6、rip for you in Beijing Best wishes， ours Li Hua2.（）你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。注意：（1）词数100左右。（2）日记的开头已为你写好。生词：指南针：compass n. 手电筒:flashlight n.急救包：first-aid kit 宿营地：campsite n. Saturday,May 4,2002 CloudyLi Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has
7、 been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school3.（）假如你是李华，下面四幅图画反映你家乡的自然环境的变化情况。请你向报社写一封信反映此情况并提出加强环保的建议。词数100左右，开头已写出（不计入总词数）。参考词语：wasteland 荒地 sandstorm 沙尘暴Dear editor,In the past,my hometown句子衔接加连词高考英语短文改错命题的一个重要方面就是考查连接手段，连词使用不当会造成上下句不衔接。英语中的词与词、句与句之间必须使用并列或从属连词。难点磁场1.（）It was
8、about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.78. _ (NMET2002)2.（）The food was expensive and the service was good.84. _ (NMET2002)3.（）It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.84. _ (NMET2001)4.（） felt that they helped me understand what the world works.89. _(NMET2001春季)5.（）She
9、 was smiling but nodding at me. 92. _(NMET2000)案例探究1.If the book you want is out, you may ask for it to be called back for you, and whether you pay the cost of sending a post card, the librarian will write to you.解析：此题为五星级题。whether改为If。此题考查if与whether作为连词的区别。此处为if引导的条件状语从句，表示“如果”；如用whether，则表示“是否”，语意
10、不通。在下列情况下一般只用whether：引导介词后的宾语从句、主语从句、表语从句、同位语从句或在whether to do, whetheror not中。e.g.Whether well go camping tomorrow depends on the weather.I asked him whether he would go or not.2.I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 解析：此题为四星级题。此题考查定语从句中的非关系代词、副词的用法。where改为which。这是一个非限制性定语从句，从句中缺少主语，主语应
11、由关系代词来充当，所以应将关系词where改为which。此句应改为：I live in Beijing, where there are lot of places of interest.先行词在定语从句为地点状语，所以应用关系副词where。如：e.g.This is a house that / which I visited yesterday.This is a house where I spent a happy childhood. 3.It is a very important exam but I cant afford to fail it解析：此题为五星级题。此题考
12、查并列句之间的关系，在此两句为因果关系，所以根据句意，but改为so。4.When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf.(NMET2000)解析：此题为四星级题。考查sothat引导的结果状语从句。把as改为that,结果状语从句一般由so that，sothat，suchthat引导。e.g.The box is so heavy that nobody can move it.It is such a heavy box that nobody can move it.He go
13、t up later so that missed the first bus.锦囊妙计在连接手段上应侧重考虑：1.语句中的词与词、句与句之间必须使用并列或从属连词。2.若为并列句，要判断句与句之间的关系是并列、转折、选择、递进还是让步关系，从而选择恰当的连词。3.若为复合句，首先判断属于何种从句，然后根据主、从句之间的关系判断连接词使用是否准确或是否有遗漏或多余现象，要注意句子结构的完整性。歼灭难点训练1.（）When I talked to him, and I found that from childhood he had developed the habit of reading2
14、.（）As you know, there are still some students, most of which are boys of science, learn English with much trouble.3.（）I realized that I had left soft drinks at the store but I ran out to get it before guests arrived.4.（）the only thing I think is that when Im going to get home to listen to a new piece.5.（）The question is,“How can we do about it ?”6.（）that old people should usually like to wear dark colored cl
