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1、2010年6刀英语四六级作文高分原则和经典旬型导读可可网整理了以下四六级作文高分原则和经典句型,帮助考生提高写作能力。一、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可 以起到逝龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind,
2、they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见, 长 短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长 后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先 短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、主题句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首“Z感!相信备位读 过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章Z内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝 备位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安 无事!特别提示
3、:隐藏主体彳U可是要冒险的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题j). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly三、一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点如此罗嗦。 可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否 结构清楚,条理白然。破解方法
4、很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前 就清楚了。1 )first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不 推荐,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly、推荐,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
5、6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, fin ally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建 议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、短语优先原则写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处
6、:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮 点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。 相反,如果发现亮点精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路, 只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也 更准确。五、多实少虚原则原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用 实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比
7、较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候, 不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之类的形象词。再比如:走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将
8、会大放异彩!六、多变句式原则1)加法(串联)祁希望写下很长的句了,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险 的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句了 Z间加翳菇級Q 号飓 的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如 果是二者并列的,我们J以川一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2)转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯
9、先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转 入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说 话的时候,只要在要点Z前先来点废话,注意二者Z间川个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3)因果(so, so, so)咋天在街上我看到了一个女
10、孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅, 然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什 么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体 大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样了,可如果真的是这样了,
11、也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。 文章中如果出现这样的句了,就更会让考官看到你的句了与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表 语从彳宾语从何的变形。举例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sue同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:When to go, Why he goes away.5)附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会 插一句说,我咋天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那 就是泄语从句和同位语从何或者是插入语。The man whom
12、 you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I dont enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其 实很简单,同位语要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句了的构成;定语从旬借用z前的关键 词并且用其重新纟R成一个句了插入其中,但是whom or that关键词必须要紧跟在先行词Z-1/a 刖。6) 排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的 话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定
13、式,一个个地词, 一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之.势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides- We have got to study hard, to e
14、nlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的旬了非用排比不可!七、挑战极限原则既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在大家写的文章中,很少 发现诸如独立主格的句了,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是 分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western
15、 Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果你可一些出这样的句了 经典句型:1 表示好处1) It has the following advantages2) It does us a lot of good3) It benefits us quite a lot.4) It is beneficial to us.5) It is of great benefit to us.例如:Books are like friends.They c
16、an help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.2. 表示原因1 )There are three reasons for this2) The reasons for this are as follows.3) The reason for this is obvious.4) The reason for this is not far to seek.5) The reason for this is that.6) W