Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,一、动作描写 Part1 身体动作,1.点头,面部运动,nod,ded,ones head up and down,上下点头,shake,shook shaken,ones head from side to side,左右摇头,lift/raise ones head,and,look at my eyes straight,抬起头看着我,bow/droop/lower/hang/hung bend/bent,ones head 低头,give sb.a determined nod,坚定地点点头,smile,at/,beam at,sb 朝某人微笑,give sb.a reassuring,/encouraging,smile,投给某人一个安慰的/鼓励的微笑,give/manage/force/squeeze,a weak smile 强颜欢笑,laugh from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴,1)He came up,,with his head bowed.With his head down,他低着头走了上来。
2)His head didnt droop(低垂)and his eyes were brighter than usual,3)Pam sat in the corner,with his head hung down,(头低着),4),His jaw dropped in amazement,.他下巴惊讶得掉下来,5)The smile froze(僵住)on his face;,his mouth fell wide open,6)we nodded our heads in agreement,understanding each other,favorably,一、动作描写 Part1 身体动作,1,.Our,mouths dropped open,in surprise.,我们惊奇地张大了嘴2.He straightened up and looked at me,open-mouthed,.,他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我3.She froze,her,mouth hanging open,.,她呆住了,嘴张开着4.His,mouth widened to a,smile.,他的咧开嘴笑了。
5.She,opened her mouth,to say something.,她张开嘴要说什么1.The firm,lips pouted,in a sulk.,紧闭的双唇因为生闷气撅了起来pout:,撅,sulk:,闷气),2.He shrugged and,pouted his lips,.,他耸耸肩,撅起嘴唇4.She,pouted,prettily at him.,她冲他撅着嘴,样子很可爱注意:pout 既可以做及物,也可以作不及物动词1.Our mouths dropped openin s,Her,mouth grew stiff,with pain,and distress.,疼痛和悲伤让她嘴巴发僵五、嘴笑(smile 和 a smile play on/over/around/across),1,He,smiled his admiration,.,他用微笑表达了赞美2.I came out of my reflection and,smiling respect and recognition,asked his address for keeping in further touch.,我从沉思中恢复过来,笑着表达了我的尊重与首肯,并且问他地址,以便进一步 联系。
3.,A smile played around,his mouth.,他的嘴上闪过一丝笑意这里,play,作,“,闪过,”,意),4.He tilts his head to one side,intrigued,a hint of a,smile playing,on/across/over his lips.,他把头侧向一边,他有点好奇,嘴唇上闪过一丝微笑该处,playing,是独立分词结构),Her mouth grew stiff with pain,六、嘴笑(beam),(beam 为书面语,有“发光发热”之意,表示“笑”,即喜形于色地笑,满脸堆笑beam的用法就类似与smile,多为不及物动词,搭配beam at sb;但也可以作及物动词,表示:用笑表达),1.“What a beautiful picnic!”my father beams.,“,多么美妙的野餐啊父亲笑容满面地说2.He beamed with pleasure at seeing her.,看到她,他眉开眼笑3.He beamed his approval of the new idea.,他微笑表示赞同这个新主意,六、嘴笑(beam)(beam 为书面语,有“发光发,对话的,3,种表现形式,1.,对话标签在前,She said,“I would like to go with you,but I havent finished my homework.”,2.,对话标签在后,“I would like to go with you,but I havent finished my homework.”,She said.,3.,对话标签在句子中间,“I would like to go with you,”,she said,“but I havent finished my homework.”,对话的3种表现形式,三让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧,在对话标签中加入,语气,,,嗓音,,,情感,以及,伴随动作,,让你的描写更生动传神。
I would love to,”said Emily,in a pleasant tone,.,愉悦的语气,用,.,的语气,in a/an+,形容词,+tone,如:,in a,pleasant,愉悦的,/firm,坚定的,/,rude,粗鲁的,/sad,悲伤的,tone,也可以用,in a tone of+,名词的搭配,如:,in a tone of,surprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/command,命令,/sarcasm,讽刺,“I didnt mean to,”she murmured,in a low voice,.,小声地说道,用,.,的声音,in a/an+,形容词,+voice,如:,in a,high/low/sweet/loud/soft/weak,voice,“I.I.dont think Im right for the part,”I replied,with embarrassment.,“I will never do that again,”I answered,firmly,坚定地,.,=,Firmly,,,I answered,,“,I will never do that again.,”可将副词提到句首,用介词短语或者副词来表达情感,介词短语有:,in:,in surprise/shock/sorrow,伤心,/horror,害怕,with,:with delight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty,坚定,等等,副词有:,firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully,等等,三让你的对话标签不平庸的小技巧,“Well,”said the farmer,as he rubbed the sweat of the back of his neck.,此处在说的动作后,紧跟了,as,引导的状语从句,翻译成“一边,一边”。
他一边擦脖子后面的汗水一边说“好啊I want that one,”the boy said,pointing to the little dog.,=Pointing the little dog,the boy said,“I want that one.”,此处在说的动作后,紧跟了,doing,的非谓语结构,表伴随The farmer,picked up the dog,knelt down and said in a soft voice,“Its yours now.”,=The farmer,picked up the dog and knelt down,saying,“Its yours now.”,此处是拿起狗,蹲下并温柔地说的三个并列动作,可以用并列谓语,也可以用第二条中的非谓语With her head down/With tears in her eyes,she said,“Sorry.”,小结:在说的同时,可以加入伴随动作,即说话的同时(自己,/,别人)在做什么,用动作描写来辅助对话可以用,as,引导的从句,,,非谓语,并列谓语以及,with,的复合结构,Well,”said the farmer,as h,那表示“说”的具体词汇有哪些呢?下面是读后续写中常用的各种各样的“说”。
1.,喊叫,:,shout,大喊;,scream,尖叫,;,yell,大喊,;,exclaim,惊叫(因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫);,cry out,喊叫;,call,喊叫,如:,He yelled at her,“You are an idiot,傻瓜,.”,2.,问与答,:,ask,询问;,reply,回复;,answer,回答;,如:,She answered in a firm tone,“That doesnt matter.”,3.,建议:,propose,;,suggest,;,offer,如:,She offered,“How about going to the beach this weekend?”,4.,其他的说,:,add,补充说道,=continue,继续说道;,retort,反驳道;,explain,解释道;,state,陈述道;,protest,抗议道;,sob,哭诉道;,agree,同意地说;,comfort,安慰道,;,promise,承诺道;,assure,保证,道;,insist,坚持说;,announce,宣布道,;,mumble,/,whisper,/,murmur,/grunt,嘟囔;,stammer,/,stutter,结巴地说,如:,After a slight pause,she added,“Thank you.”,James comforted her,“Dont worry about your son.”,“S-s-sorry,”she stammered,“I didnt mean to hurt you.”,那表示“说”的具体词汇有哪些呢?下面是读后续写中常用的各种各,1)She greeted James and,inquired(问),,“Are you ready?James didnt respond,2)“Here,Mum!Here!Tony,exclaimed,as he waved wildly in the crowd,3)My teammates were all,screaming,as,they,dashed(。