2 开头段的写法谈现象，不给观点hook + phenomenon（related to the topic） 方法：hook=background 1） 写“重要性，严重性，普遍性”－－－升级版： 加时间，范围，人群， 条件句型1：…, especially when…/mainly because…句型2时间/条件+三性+范围/人群时间： nowadays, recently, presently, in the past, in current days, over the past few decades, in the contemporary time, by the end of 20th century, till the end of last century. 范围：大范围：in students’ life, in people’s lives, in our neighborhood, in our modern life, in such a highly-commercialized society/community. (computerized, cyberized, urbanized, globalized)小范围：to social cohesion, to social stability, to social harmony, to social sustainable development; to children’s physical and mental well-being; to cultivating virtues…社会，生活，社区，片区，圈子circle对象：人群：among university students, among the youth, among modern people, among different generations，post-eighties 教育：educator, educationalist 社会：scholar, expert, specialist, sociologist, psychologist, observer 经济：economist, researcher环境：environmentalist, volunteer科技：technician, inventor, scientistamong the younger generation, in particular/especially the post-nineties. People 是人的集合概念，没有peoples的形式，也不可以说a people. 条件：随着，伴随着社会：economic, cultural, environment, education, science and technological with the fast progress in technology (technological innovation), with the improvement of standards of living, with the speedy pace of modern life, with the increasing population and settlement, With the improvement of overall/general intellectual level, 举例：近日，随着技术创新的快速发展，电子商务已经变成了在高度商业化的社会里一个不可被忽视的商业类型。
Recently, with the acceleration of technological innovation, electronic commerce has become increasingly prevalent in a highly-commercialized society. 一直以来，教育在人们的生活中都起着至关重要的作用Always Through the river of human history, Invariably, Unchangedly, 大范围：Invariably, education has been playing an integral part in people’s life.小范围：Invariably, education has been widely recognized as one of the most important factos that contribute to a person’s success and happiness.Invariably, education serves as a most essential and effective means for people to improve skills and expand knowledge. 随着社会整体文化水平的提高，教育越来越在人们的生活中起着重要的作用。
With the improvement of the overall/general intellectual level in the society, 条件/时间＋关键词定性分析＋人群/范围各种性：重要性：(系表)...is fairly essential/critical/significant/fatal/indispensable...fairly: considerably, extraordinarily, exceedingly （主谓/主语+不及物动词） ...matters most/makes a huge/great/little difference when compared with other stuff/business/factors. （主谓宾/主语+及物动词+宾语） ...plays a leading/pressing role/part....(必要性)：(系表)...is fairly necessary/rudimentary雏形的/fundamental/imperative... 普遍性：(系表)...is fairly familiar/common/prevailing/prevalent.... （主谓） ...has been penetrating into all walks of life. （主谓） ...exists everywhere. 严重性：... is fairly severe, serious, grave 已经变得…: has been increasingly popular has become… has turned to be…sample:Presently, with the improvement of standards of living, television and movie play an increasingly leading role in people’s recreational/leisurely lives. 第二句话：However/Also, it is an interesting/intriguing phenomenon that people in growing numbers are voicing their opinions on ….(提纲内容的第一部分）.. 名词形式的宾语／动名词替换句型However/meanwhile, it is interesting to note that a growing number of people are expressing their concerns about…People: sociologist之类的名词environmentalist, educator, economist, psychologist, researcher, expert, specialist, scholar. 等Growing: increasing, expanding许多人/教育家：a large number of, a considerable number of, numbers of…Voice their opinions on this heated topic/issueEg: 12年12月题目It is interesting to note that a considerable number of people are expressing their concerns about the significance of receive higher education. …expressing their concerns about the relationship between higher education and career success. *…about higher education is so important to employment and career success. 第二句话的替换句2Plus/Meanwhile，there surfaced/emerged a trend that people in large population are paying/giving/pouring more attention to this issue of/about whether/how/what…名词形式的宾语／动名词People: 同More：adequate, due举例: 2013/6Plus, there emerged a trend that more people, especially the young, are pouring their attention to the issue of whether to engage in big events or trifles. 开头总结：方向在四性句型有两个简单加复杂名动不含糊尽量回避使用people, the society, we, you之类的名词和代词做主语。
动词的替换：同意积累，短语和单独动词交替使用Spoil: pour too much love over sb Try: make great efforts to do, spare no efforts to do In current years, free admission to museums is excessively prevailing both at home and abroad. And it is interesting to notice that people in expanding numbers are voicing their opinions/expressing their concerns upon this issue. 35Over the past few decades, free admission to museums has been exceedingl。