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1、书面表达突破(一)图表类图表类基础写作是以图表的形式呈现内容要点的,要点明确,范围具体。写作时要结合写作内容中的提示确定需要表达的内容要点,有时还要留意前面的文字说明部分。此类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,弄清信息点之间的关系,提炼出中心思想,然后进行分析、概括和归纳。写作时要注意：(1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述；善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率；过去特定的时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时；(2)切忌写成“填表题”,“一对一直译”,“句式单一”,遗漏“间接要点”,应巧妙组合信息。原题再现右图的饼状图(pie chart)显示了你对
2、你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120左右。写作模板学生习作A recent survey shows 图表的内容. As is shown in the pie chart,表中的内容1,这一现象说明的问题表中的内容2.表中内容3 and表中内容4. In my point of view,自己的观点如何解决问题A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. As is
3、shown in the pie chart, 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. Surfing the Internet is the second popular activity among the students and about 36% of the students have interest in it. Only 8% of the students take reading as a hobby and even fewe
4、r,about 3%, are fond of playing musical instruments. In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students interests in reading and music.名师点
5、评本文虽没有使用较复杂的句子,但句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯,读来琅琅上口,主动语态、被动语态的灵活运用,使全文成为一个严密的整体,极好的完成了写作任务。仿写训练(2010宁德第一次月考)北京市政府发出限行通告,规定每辆私家车每周停驶一天(公休日除外)。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查的结果。请根据下列图表提示,描述被调查者的不同看法,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。注意：1.文章的开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数；2.词数120左右。Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take
6、 turns off the roads one out of five workdays._ 【参考范文】Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays.A survey has been conducted about this issue on the Internet and the findings are as follows.Many people support the rest
7、riction.60% of them believe that it relieves the present traffic pressure.And 30% think it helps improve the air quality.The rest of them,about 10%,consider it saves energy.However,there are still many people who are against the new rule.About 75% among them think it inconvenient that they cant driv
8、e their own cars on a certain workday.25% are worried that more people will buy their second cars,which may cause heavier traffic.In my opinion,the new traffic rule is really an effective measure to reduce traffic jams and air pollution.补偿练习1完形填空(2009长沙第一次质检)After thinking thoroughly about it,I foun
9、d that life is worth everything.For me,life is not just about having good friends,money or a job that I like.Some people will be 1 with things like these because 2 them,theyre by far the best they can get.For me,theyre not all I can 3 from this world.I believe in harps(竖琴) and violins and 4 and ligh
10、tning.I believe in being in love and not just trying my best to make others 5 .I believe in “ 6 in love” with my partner,not just “loving” him.Life is worth so much.Life is more than spending 7 hours in the gym and eating carrot just to 8 praise from 9 .The praise of others 10 makes me feel happy,bu
11、t it is not the main 11 of my life.My life is not about living to fulfill someone elses 12 but my own.Life is more than 13 pursuing the norms(规范) of 14 but trying to be a good person by my own 15 .It is not about 16 chasing dreams to be superior to others.Its more about long walks in the quiet green
12、 parks 17 in my own thoughts.Its more about feeling the 18 in my face,as I go through the 19 on my bicycle.Life is about passion,freedom and love.I will only walk this road 20 ；I might as well make the most of it.1A.disappointedBexcitedCsatisfied Dworried答案C解析前文说,对我来说,生活不只是拥有朋友,财富或自己喜欢的工作。这里承接上文说,而有
13、些人拥有这些就很满足了。disappointed失望的；excited兴奋的；satisfied满意的；worried担心的。故选C项。2A.for Bof CwithDin答案A解析这里说,因为对于他们来说,这些就是他们所能得到的最好的东西,故选for。与前面的for me相对比。3A.likeBget Csearch Dhave答案B解析这句话的意思是：这些却不是我想从世界上得到的全部,故选get。search寻找；have拥有；like喜欢,均不符合文意。4A.lovingBraining CwindDthunder答案D解析这句话中harps和violins都是乐器,属于美好的东西；这
14、里要填thunder“雷声”和lightning“闪电”对应,指生活中的挑战。5A.sadBcomfortable CunsatisfiedDunpleasant答案B解析这句话的意思是：我相信真爱,但我不会只是尽力让别人舒服。后文说我相信彼此相爱而不只是我爱他。sad伤心的；comfortable舒服的；unsatisfied不满意的；unpleasant讨厌的,不合意的。故选B项。6A.fallingBgiving CbeingDlost答案C解析be in love爱,相爱；fall in love爱上,坠入爱河。这里指彼此相爱。故选C项。7A.endlessBseveral CvaluableDregular答案A解析前面说生活中有很多值得做的事情,这里指生活并不只是花费很多时间在体操馆里锻炼身体并且吃胡萝卜来减肥让自己漂亮。endless无休止的,无止境的；valuable有价值的；regular有规律的,固定的。选endless表达了一种没完没了的意思。8A.seek Breceive Cadmire Dkeep答案A解析seek寻求,追求；receive收到,接受；admire羡慕,钦佩；keep保持。这里指寻求别人的表扬。也就是说,自己锻炼身体和吃胡萝卜来减肥是为了寻求别人的赞美。故选A项。9A.doctors Bothers Cpa
