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1、中考英语写作指导课,肖营子初级中学 张丽东,中考英语的写作,A 组学生了解公式法作文的框架，并能学写简单的句子，逐渐连句成文,B 组学生要求掌握公式法作文的框 架，并能按规定要求结合公式法写作文。,。,教学目标：,优秀的 文章,布局,层次,过渡,文采,cross-questions(审题）,Style(体裁）,Person (人称）,Tense (时态）,认真审题， 勾画出要点， 并适当分析,中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。,布局,三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山.不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一
2、段直接说 XQ is really strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。 第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃4顿饭，He has four meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。 第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and healthy he is! I hope to be him one day!,Sentence connection,Sentence passage
3、 (根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤写出每一部分的具体内容，用关联词把各部分连起来成文）,逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。,层次,过渡,亮点：当我们将前面都做得很
4、完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。,文采,大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching（迷人的）等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯,加谚语,文采,加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club
5、is a good way to study English,As the saying goes :Practice makes perfect. So Joining the English club is a good way to study English,扩写练习：,likes playing sports,healthy,healthy,He is a boy.,He is a _ boy.,He is a _ boy who_.,I like music.,I like_ music.,I like_ music that_.,dance,dance,can make me e
6、xcited,仿写练习：,目的,原因,She always_ to _ because_.,relax,listens to some music,music is fantastic,relax study better get some knowledge keep healthy have a rest have fun get good grades ,Miss Cool,Mr. Ball,仿写练习：,It is _for_ to _.,necessary,him,difficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strange dangerous
7、/difficult/wonderful/possible impossible/unbelievable/unexpected,It is _ for children to play in the street.,read books,dangerous,Steps of writing,necessary,Writing skills,If possible,书面表达,审,改,连,列,美,善用丰富词汇,活用多种句型,妙用格言和谚语,一篇优秀的书面表达应该是：,语意要合情合理 过渡要自然顺畅 段落要清晰明了 语句要有简有繁 语法要恰当正确 语言要地道顺畅 书法要规范整洁,Title:_,t
8、o,to,general总,specific分,specific分,general总,I am a lover of reading.,I am also a music lover.,I like sports as well.,In short, I enjoy my life in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.,My hobbies,Beginning:,Key sentence B:,Key sentence
9、 A:,Ending:,Main part (正文):,Key sentence C:,(linking words),I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.,Homework,My hobbies ( Beginning ): _. ( Key sentence A):_. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key se
10、ntence B ): _. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence C ): _.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forge all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports. (Ending) _.,Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?,Practice:,I am a lover of reading,
