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1、人教课标 高二 必修 5 Unit 4,新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面:,即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。,是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。,是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。,新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。,5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天
2、等)。假如你是校报的英语记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。,要求： 1. 时间，地点，人物，活动。 2. 老人们的反应。 3. 简短评论。,第一步 认真审题(analyze the requirements) 第二步 谋篇布局(draw up an outline) 第三步 联句成篇(organize the sentences) 第四步 锦上添花(get the article polished up) 第五步 查漏补缺 (check the mistakes),审主题 审体裁 _ 审人称 _ 审时态 _ 审要求,students, _,time, place, p
3、ersons, activities reaction of the elderly brief evaluation,did voluntary work,a letter,the third,the past tense,标题(headline),Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine,What would be the headline of this composition?,导语 (lead),Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, _ Sunshine Nursing H
4、ome and _.,went to,did some voluntary work,正文 (body),They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, _ and _. Everything done, they sat in the yard _.,presented,with,cleaning the windows,sweeping the floor,chatting with the elderly people,评语 (evaluation),What they did has
5、 brought _ to others and _ their own lives.,joy,enriched,first, second, then, finally /at last , soon immediately, suddenly,here, there, on one side on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to,for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand,but, however, while, though,
6、 otherwise,because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of),as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless,though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where) ever,whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, whats worse,in a word, altogether, all in all, in general,They gave flower
7、s and fruits to the elderly. They _ the elderly _ flowers and fruits.,They said the students had done so much for them and they would never forget them. They said it was _ a beautiful day _ they would remember it forever.,such,that,When they arrived _ their arrival,Upon,They started working at once,
8、 _ the windows and _ the floor. 2. _, they sat in the yard _ with the elderly people.,巧用分词,cleaning,sweeping,Everything done,chatting,名词性从句要用得妙,What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.,They presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. _ they started working at once, cl
9、eaning the windows and sweeping the floor. _, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.,Then,Everything done,On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.,Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were w
10、armly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.,When It was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. LiYue and ZhangHua are very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.,
