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1、2013中考英语-书面表达题金典(回顾)例析例文1:【2011年昆明市高中(中专)招生统一考试书面表达题】(满分10分)A. Enjoy _. B. Dont forget _.要求:1、请从所给的A, B两个题目中任选一个,吧题目补充完整后作答,分值相同。2、注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。3、不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需要使用,请用Mike, Gina等英文名字,校名统一用Guangming Middle School.4、词数不少于60. 【思路点拨】一、审题:1、两个作文属于半命题作文。和云南其他15个地州市不同,后面没有写作内容要点提示语的限制,这就为考生提供了更大的发挥
2、空间。第一个题目是“Enjoy _” (享受或喜爱_).本篇作文以记叙文为主,以议论为辅。写作范围广泛,可以写自己的一次旅行或生日晚会等,可以写自己的某个科目的学习、自己的生活等。第二个题目是“Dont forget _” (别忘了_).本篇作文以议论文为主,可以写毕业前对同学或老师的情谊,可以讨论某个话题,并提出建议。两个题目都与考生的学习生活息息相关,考生都能够找到自己熟悉的话题和材料。2、确定适合自己的一个题目,然后补全题目。二、写作要点:第一个题目:1、可以写去年快乐暑假的一次旅行。2、说明自己在旅途中的体会、感受。首先补全题目,第二个题目:1、列举一些事例,说明微笑在学习生活中的作用
3、;2、说说微笑在自己学习生活中的重要性;3、提出自己的建议。Enjoy LearningAs we know, learning is very important to us. All of us must learn hard. At school we should learn all the subjects which are very useful for our life in the future. If we learn hard, we will make our dreams come true. We will feel happy and excited when w
4、e can go to a top senior high school by working hard. Besides, we also learn other things that we cant do. If so, we will have some skills and experience that may be good for our future.Without learning, the life couldnt be so smooth, without enjoying ,the life couldnt be so colorful.Dont forget our
5、 English teacherWe will graduate from our school soon. But my classmates please dont forget our English teacher. We all know we cant make so much progress without the help of our English teacher. He is kind to us but strict. Whenever we are in trouble, he will try his best to help us. So we cant for
6、get him. After we leave our school, we can keep in touch with him by writing letters, sending e-mails or making phone calls.例文2:【2011年曲靖市高中(中专)招生统一考试书面表达题】(满分15分)An interesting _ 提示:有趣的人让人轻松快乐,有趣的事让人开怀大笑,意味深长 在你的生活中一定不乏有趣的人或事。请用英语写一篇短文,讲述你身边有趣的人或有趣的事。从某一方面评价自己,使自己在未来的学习和生活中有更好的发展。要求:1、请补全所给题目,如:An i
7、nteresting Teacher/Day/Book词数不少于60;2、语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁。3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;4、短文须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。5、抄袭试题中阅读部分的,抄袭部分不给分。【思路点拨】一、审题:该作文属于半命题作文。题目是“An Interesting _” (一个有趣的_).本篇作文根据提示语应该以记叙文为主,适时点题并辅以适当议论。根据提示可以写有趣的人,也可叙有趣的事,还可以介绍一本有趣的书等。然后适当对所写的人、事或物作简单的评价。总之,该话题贴近考生生活实际,让不同层次的考生都能够有话可说,考生有较大的发挥空
8、间。二、写作要点:1、首先补全题目,如An Interesting Picnic,可以把野炊的过程描述下来,内容可以包括记叙文的三要素:时间、地点和事件。此作文一般可按照总-分-总的布局安排,即先用一句话作为第一个段落,对该次野炊作积极的体验性的评价,接着写过程,最后总结感受或评价。重点要把“有趣”作为中心来组织材料。这是记叙的部分,是全文的主要部分,应该详写。2、把野炊的过程描述结束后,对该次有趣野炊作简要的评价。这是议论的部分,即评价,是全文的次要部分,应该略写,点到为止。An Interested picnicOur class had a good time last Sunday.O
9、ur class had a picnic last Sunday. We went to West Hill by bike in the morning. We had a short rest after we got to the food of West Hill. First we had our picnic lunch. After lunch we sang and danced happily. Then we began to climb the hill. We saw many beautiful flowers, heard the birds singing. W
10、e got a lot of wild fruits, too. We took many photos in the in the end. Everyone had a good time. I felt very tired when I got home, but I was very happy. 例文3:【2011年大理、楚雄、文山、保山、丽江、怒江、迪庆、临沧高中(中专)招生统一考试书面表达题】(满分15分)I Am Not a Child Any More提示:在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师
11、长?还是 成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以 “I Am Not a Child Any More” 为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已不再是一个小孩。要求:1. 请根据所给的题目,用英语写一篇短文,词数不少于60个;2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分记;4. 短文必须写在答题卷上,如在本卷作答,一律不得分。 【思路点拨】一、审题:该作文属于命题作文。本篇作文的体裁为记叙文,记叙考生们在学习生活中经历的一件事或两件事,通过事例来证明自己已经长大,时态主要用一般过去时。二、写作要点:1、对自己的过去和现在作比较,以此说明自己已经长
12、大;2、写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件事或两件事,通过事例来证明自己的观点。3、作总结,再次突出主题。I Am Not a Child Any MoreI am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others.It was a We
13、dnesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said: “Dear, you have grown up.”It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.学优中考网