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1、第一部分,第一、四级作文的评分标准和要求 一、考核目的考核学生用英语进行书面表达的初步能力。 二、考核要求：1. 时间：30分钟 2. 字数：120词以上 （120150）3. 题型：1）根据给出的段首句续写 2）根据中文提要作文 3）根据图表写作4）书信写作 三、评分原则：1. 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。 2. 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评
2、判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。,上拧谗蚌棍玫变隧橡烽窃丫例桓鹿蹈博诗渊沽勉酵断贫塞磺瘦专识醛设咙英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解,四、评分标准：1作文题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共人为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离
3、破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分-基本切题，表达思想比清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。 11分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。 阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为某一分数文件次（如8分）相似，即定为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减半分。字数不足应酌情扣分：,注：1、如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得记入所写字数。 2、 只写一段者：04分，只写两段者：09分（指
4、规定三段的作文） 3、白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给零分。 2. 设作文最低分，采用下列成绩计算方法： 1）作文分为0分者，总分即使高于60分，一律作不及格处理； 2）作文分大于 0 分小于 6 分者，按下 列方式计算成绩： 最后报道分 = 原计算总分 6 + 作文实得分,隙儿沧鱼瑞霍该钓昆尚帚乔粗箩茂替郝所架钉藏徐京蛹斥首跌皑设行荡顾英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解,五、 评分实例 Title： An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic AccidentSample 1 （2 points）I s
5、aw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May1. Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary p
6、eople come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place.My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come. All of above, I
7、 think the car dreiver must be serier the Traffice Accident.Sample 2 （5 points）It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school.When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happend. A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when he arrived the school gate, a large
8、truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. Surely, the poor boy was hurt very bad. I think there are two reasons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ri
9、de his bike so fast, even didnt low down his speed at the gate. Secend,the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road.,涤神舜顷迂聊噪保税入矛瓤节贾羞择玖暑垄若呆擞幂讹屉宣仁注战魔英值英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四
10、级作文PPT课件及评分讲解,Sample 3 （8 points）The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock. The yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the righ-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it crack
11、ed with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions. I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly made the accidents happen. It was not too careful f
12、or them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the constructure of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are needed at any junction. Sample 4 （11 points）It was last Friday morning. The acc
13、ident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible that I would never forget it. I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldnt
14、 respond immiditely. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident. I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all, the red car shouldnt stop suddenly without any signals. Secondly, the following car should keep a certain distance from
15、 the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to driving, this accident wouldnt have happened,素罢档七其素力砚镣尧淫瑚据盈挠专酝阴哨滔府吏闻求马缮耳炬建废角叮英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解英语四级作文PPT课件及评分讲解,Sample 5 （14 p
16、oints）It was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual.It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didnt wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode
17、with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.I think the boys absent-mindedness accounted muc
18、h for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the unproperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident,
