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1、Writing of TEM-4Writing of ParagraphsWriting of Paragraphsl主题的拓展方法主题的拓展方法l1.对比比较法lInstructions:lYou have been asked by the Students Union to write a passage entitled The Main Difference between My College Life and My Middle School Life as a part of an introduction program for new students coming in
2、September. lCollege life is quite different from middle school life. We, for example, have greater academic pressure, and we have more chance to meet learned scholars. Among various differences, I enjoy the “freedom” of college life most.lI prefer college life to middle school life because I am free
3、 in the college. Firstly, secondly, lTherefore, by comparison, I love the freedom of college life, which makes me feel like an adult. To the newcomers, I would suggest that we should make the best use of the “freedom” provided by the colleges to fully develop ourselves. 主题的拓展方法l2. 举例法Sample 1lI have
4、 a neighbor, a 20-year-old girl. She is very beautiful, with well-proportioned figure and bright eyes. But unfortunately, you cannot say that she is attractive, because you are always surprised at her harsh voice and quarrels with other people over minor matters. So, we cannot judge a person accordi
5、ng to his or her appearance. Case Study l1. 事例要具有典型性。Sample 1-1lIt is obviously true that we can not judge a person by his appearance. Li Zhaoxing, the former diplomacy minister, is not as handsome as Zhou, Enlai, and not as tall and sturdy as Zhu Rongji. But when he unyieldingly declares the Chinas
6、 stance on the issue of “embassy attack”, when he strongly warns Japanese government of Taiwan affairs, and when we witness his great efforts and diplomacy wits in promoting Chinas entrance of WTO, we cant help being attracted by his special charming and admitting that a person can not be judged by
7、his or her appearance. Sample 2l. My view that keeping a good mood is important lies in two important reasons. The first reason is keeping a good mood can keep people in high spirit in difficulties. Lets take Sang Lan for example to show the importance of keeping a good mood. Although she is a disab
8、led person, nothing can stop her completing university career and being a successful person in trouble.Case Study l2. 事例和主题的连贯性进行必要的点题Sample 2-2lMy view that keeping a good mood is important lies in two important reasons. The first reason is keeping a good mood can keep people in high spirit in diff
9、iculties. Lets take Sang Lan for example to show the importance of keeping a good mood. Although she is a disabled person, nothing can stop her completing university career and being a successful person in trouble. One important reason is that she treats life as a journey of happiness and with such
10、a good mood she has the courage to overcome difficulties and makes great progress in her life. Sample 3lIts quite clear that travel can broaden our mind. Last summer holiday, I visited the Great Wall, which was regarded as the symbol of China. When I stood at the highest point of the wall, I was gre
11、atly attracted by the beautiful scenery around it. I was so proud to live in such a beautiful country. When I have a birds eye view of this great wonder, I can sense the history of Chinese people. That is a history of China struggling to be strong, and a history written by the ordinary people. From
12、this, I have a deep understanding of the nation and the people. Case Study l3. 事例繁简得当。主题的拓展方法l3. 定义法lPeople should never ignore the effect a good mood has on them. Keeping a good mood means a positive attitude towards life. And it is said that “attitude decides everything”. Whit a good mood, it is p
13、ossible for people to deal with difficulties optimistically, not grumbling against heaven and laying the blame upon other people. 主题的拓展方法l4. 正反结合l The first reason is that keeping a good mood can help us stay healthy. It is written in a Chinese traditional medical book that various negative moods an
14、d behaviors will have a bad influence on various parts of our body. For example, if we are easy to get angry, we are likely to have our liver hurt. If we are gloomy for a long time, our kidneys are easily hurt. If we keep a good mood, we would have a less chance to suffer them. Another reason why we
15、 should keep a good mood is that with it we can get on better with others. If we keep a positive mood when we greet and treat our relatives, friends, and colleagues, for example, smiling to them, they may hardly take offence on us, nor may they respond to our passion with coldness. As a result, we c
16、an be in better term with people around us and feel much happier ourselves. Writing of Paragraphsl结尾段落的写法结尾段落的写法l1. 同义反复+观点概括lFor example:lWhy, then, do I teach? I teach because I like the pace of the academic calendar. June, July, and August offer an opportunity for reflection, research, and writing. I teach because teaching is a profession built on change. When the material is the same, I
