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1、-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 1 作文要点词汇1、长短句交叉;2、使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象 尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光 词;4、关键词是否换用切勿老用重 复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事 项1.适当用被动替换主动这样能 更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是 用 we / I 举个经典结尾的例子It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 2 approaches were implemented by the
2、service industry like that. By doing soits competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语比如说把副 词、连接词等作为插入语放在中间 一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后两 边分别加上逗号。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语 放在中间一般放在动词、助动词后 两边分别加上逗号。举例如下 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?3.一定要学会换词换形象具 体的替换太宽泛
3、的。比如第一条的例子 中applicable 替换 proper; approaches 替 换 ways;implement 替换 carry out;sharpen ones competitive edge替换 enhance ones competitiveness。下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作 文的例子看看他是如何运用各类写作 技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 3 写作手法精彩替换和句型都用上了 作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my moth
4、er bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingl
5、y 替换 very;thrilling 替换 exciting;sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;google 替换 search;an army of 替换 a lot of。The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring in
6、to the current society -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 4 as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型用来描述在 某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;Coincide
7、nt with ? 非常地道的句 型表达“与?一致”的意思替换 With ?;Advancement 替换 development;Pour into 替换 enter into;Current 替换 now;Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;It is no exaggeration to say 经典句 型 说某事是毫不夸张的。For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any
8、moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 5 horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with;We can, freely, search 用了插入 语的写作手法;o
9、ur knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;Deliver 替换 send。There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way,especially the growing violence ,porn pictures, AV-fi
10、lms emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 6 首先 There is no denying that 这个 句型;其次 however 作为插入语;再次function in the disservice of 替换 do
11、harm to。Emerging 替换 appearing ;Net citizen 网民属于精彩用词。As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;Computers do play 使用 do 表 示强调;Positive 替换 important / good 等;A slice of 替换 a part of;-精选财经经济类资料- -
