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1、Dear SmithLi HuaYours24I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visited. On one side of the road is a new classroom building; On the other side ,where the track used to be, stands another n
2、ew building-our library. The playground is located right in front of the school . In addition , we have planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 高考书面表达的 复习训练策略一.评分标准:假设你是李华，在一所中学读书 。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来
3、信.他三 年前参观过你校,听说现在变 化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照 下图，给他写封回信,介绍你校的变 化。注意 ：1，回信须包括图画的主要 内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连 贯。 2，词数100左右。三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼Dear Mr Smith Im very happy to hear from your letter ，Lets tell you the new school.Our school happened great change.An new labrary build in the three years ago.A new cla
4、ssroom building was built at other side of road. Our new playgroud out the school.At last we planted many trees. That all, thank you.8高考书面表达评分原则第二挡（较差）（6-10分） 未恰当完成试题规定的任务* 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容* 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限* 有语法或词汇错误，影响了对内容的理解* 较少使用语句间的连接词，内容缺少连贯性，8 Dear SmithI was very happy to hear from you. Now let m
5、e tell you something about our new school. Great changes have taken place in our school. A new library was built . And a new classroom building was set up on the other side of the road. Our new playground was outside our school. At last, we have planted many green trees around our school .Thats all,
6、 thank you. Li HuaYours15高考书面表达评分原则第三档（适当）（11 15 分） *基本完成了试题规定的任务。*虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有内容应用 的语法和词汇能满足任务的要求*有一些语法和词汇错误，但不影响理解*应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。15Dear SmithI was very happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our new school. Great changes have taken place in our school. A new library
7、 was built where the old playground used to be . And a new teaching building was set up on the other side of the road. Our new playground was outside our school. At last, we have planted many green trees around our school .Thats all, thank you. Li HuaYours17高考书面表达评分原则第四挡（好）（16 20 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖
8、所有主要内容* 语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求* 语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，* 应用简单的语句间的连接词，使全文紧凑，17Dear SmithLi HuaYours22I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Quite a few changes have taken place here . On one side of the road is a new teaching building
9、; On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 高考书面表达
10、评分原则第五挡（好）（21-25 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求* 语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误但主 要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，* 应用简单的语句间的连接词， 使全文紧凑，22Dear SmithLi HuaYours24I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visi
11、ted. On one side of the road is a new classroom building; On the other side ,where the track used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is located right in front of the school . In addition , we have planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be abl
12、e to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 24高考书面表达评分原则第五挡（很好）（21-25 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 应用了较多语法结构和词汇* 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误。但为尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具有较强的语言应用能力 * 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的高考书面表达评分原则* 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。* 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。25二.写作步骤 :练 习根据 下列图画 中Tom骑
13、 自行车的 经历，用 英语写一 篇短文。 短文要写 得连贯、 完整。字 数100字 左右。书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点（仔细阅读写作要求，确定写作要点）2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。（认真拟好写作表达顺序，先写出简单句）4 联句成文：5（依据句式结构要求， 巧妙整合各句，使句子 紧凑，增加句子信息量 。）注意 ：主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系开头与结尾语篇衔接 5、检查修改，规范抄写练 习根据 下列图画 中Tom骑 自行车的 经历，用 英语写一 篇短文
14、。 短文要写 得连贯、 完整。字 数100字 左右。审 题字 词 文参考答案审 题1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记 叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起 交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点： 时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。词 句 文词： to ride a bike to hit his bike and fall off句：Tom was riding a bike along the street.The car hit his bike and he fell off it. 文：The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike, then he fell off it.参考答案Tom was a lucky dog. ( heading )The other day, Tom was riding along the street when a car ran towards him fast. He was so frightened that h
