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1、Nathan ZhangAssessments of your composition & polish it up“书面表达” 命题依据及原则 依据教育部课程标准、全国统一考试大纲（课程标准实 验版）、浙江省高中英语新课程学科教学指导意见 2011考试说明：考生应能（1）清楚连贯地传达信息，表 达意思；（2）有效运用所学语言知识。根据提示，用英语写 一篇100120个词的短文。 话题（主题）：跟高中学生学习生活有关的，或是他们关心的 ，但热点问题的可能性仍较小。 写作任务：有意义的，或者实用的（能解决实际问题的） 语言知识：高中所学词汇、语法项目、语篇知识（写作方法）五个步骤1、审题文字信息
2、图画信息 题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。 3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。 4、联句成文：注意：主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系 开头与结尾语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写高分作文29分思维习惯较好阅卷老师的建议： 字迹工整 检查，再检查 慎用套词 语言朴实 结构清晰 切题、有逻辑长度 适中 文体标准万人迷书写假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内 容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议 理由：1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的 勇气；2. 目标明确、
3、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高 的目标使人丧失信心；3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境；4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。注意： 1词数100左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇：明确的(definite) 评价（estimation）审 题1、体裁：发言稿， 谈谈高考备考过程中注 意事项及理由。为议论文体2、主要时态：一般现在时，发表自己 的看法-要点3、人称：第一人称 we 较贴近学生实际4、要点：所给的四项务必包括进去，并适当的 发表自己的看法。文章的结构- 总分总-3 段式较好。字 词 文词： have a r
4、ight attitude a normal state of mind 句：its very important to have a right attitude A normal state of mind and self-confidence helps us to relax 文：First, its very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self- confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to over
5、come difficulties bravely. Appreciation Keeping a good psychology is the first and most important step to make great progress. When it comes to aims, a definite one and a proper estimation of yourself work better A small step makes a big difference. Dont forget you are not alone. Your teacher or cla
6、ssmates and even you parents can help you to deal with your problems. So there is a growing concern for how to make preparations for it. My suggestions are as follows. Adopting an optimistic attitude is beneficial to lightening your anxiety and encouraging you to overcome difficulties. As is often t
7、he case, too low goals make everyone less aggressive. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. ( 肖 君 )(徐乐平)分芳岳平Appreciation Only if we prepare properly for the examination can we succeed in the end. To speak frankly, there is a need for us to set a clear goal objectively and assess ourselves prop
8、erly. First, always keep a good state of mind in life, which helps you not only reduce nervousness but also build up your courage of overcoming problems. In a word, study is a process of trial. ( 梦露)(林婷婷 1)小雨方芳Appreciation As a saying goes, “ God never shuts one door but he opens another. 天无绝人之路。.”
9、Always having wishes can make us strong-willed. Health is to our bodies what water is to fish. Having a balanced diet counts a lot. In addition, there is no denying that you can break away from trouble if your are under the loving care of your parents, teachers or classmates. It is apparent that onl
10、y in this way can you have little anxiety an well as strengthen bravery to get over difficulties. As a proverb goes: “ A merry heart goes all the way.”心情愉快，事事顺心 What we need to care about is that we should establish a definite goal.( 小芬)(丽芳)连杰Students version - 许丹妮 However, the path to college may n
11、ot be smooth. So we should try our best to do something best in order to welcome the National College Entrance Examination. There goes a saying that more haste, less speed. Therefore, wed better to keep a positive attitude. Not only can we calm down, but also we will get courage to overcome difficul
12、ties. In other words, we will believe there are many promising avenues to pursue.Whats the most important to us is that we have a definite goal and have a correct estimation about ourselves. Too low a goal will make us slack and too high will make us lose heart. Besides, its advisable to talk more w
13、ith others, like parents, teachers, classmates and so on, which will help us get through difficulties. Needless to say, we need a good rest and a balanced diet to keep us energetic. Come on! Everyone! Challenges and pressures can bring out us the best. Hope everyone will have a wonderful grade in th
14、e coming summer.Power Bar中国专业PPT设计交流论坛Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.First, its very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanw
15、hile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, wed better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when were in trouble. Finally,
16、 striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.Power Bar中国专业PPT设计交流论坛achieve success keep a normal state of mindovercome difficulties have a correct estimation of ourselves- - 正确的评价自己 striking a
