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1、 1. have a discussion讨论 2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物装进箱子 3. search the Internet上网查询 4. see sb off为某人送行 5. a five-day tour为期五天的旅行 6. drop out of school辍学相关短语7.live a.life过着的生活8.pay the tuition fees支付学费9.win the first prize获得一等奖10. be thought highly of 受到高度赞扬11. come to a conclusion that. 得出结论 如下1
2、2. take great pains to do sth不遗余力地 做某事13. set a good example to us为我们树 立了一个好榜样14. be impressed by. 对印象深刻; 为所感动15. devote ones spare time to helping others 利用业余时间帮助他人1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我们正在上语文课, 老师突 然滑倒了。2. We were about to set
3、off when it began to rain. 我们正要出发, 这时天下起雨 来了。相关句式3. I had just lain down when the telephone rang. 我刚刚躺下, 这时电话铃响了。4. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演讲完 观众就欢呼起来。(同义句式: no sooner. than. /as soon as.)5. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.一到达, 我们就开始工作 。6.
4、On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. 一听到铃声, 学生都尽快跑进教室。1. 记叙事件的写作一般按照事件发展的顺 序来写作。2. 由于活动往往有很多环节, 考生可以用一 些与时间相关的副词如then, later, next, afterwards, soon after that等或一些时间状 语从句After., before.等把要点合理连贯 地连接在一起。3. 若试题要求考生写自己的感受, 考生 不能只是用I am very happy等简单句, 而是尽量用复合句来充
5、分表达自己的观 点。另外, 记叙文多涉及情感相关的用 词, 考生平时可以多积累这样的单词或 短语, 如an unforgettable experience, to my joy/delight, be satisfied/ content with 等等。 (2008年深圳一模) 假设你参加了你校组织的“关爱生命 携手艾滋儿童”的 活动。 写作内容 请你写一篇英文日记，叙述活动情况, 内容包括：时间时间 ：2007年12月1日 星期六8：30 启程 集合地点：校门门口 车车程：一个半小时时自行车车车车 程 目 的 地：红红十字会医院 活动动内容：亲亲切交谈谈、牵牵手跳舞、赠赠送礼物、拍照留
6、念、共进进午餐后返回 感受：写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。注意: 日记的开头已写好。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。 December 1st 2007SaturdayFine例题导写认真审题。因为是日记, 所以用第一人称; 叙 述已发生的事应该用一般过去时, 感受则用一般过 去时或者一般现在时都可以。信息重组。第一个句子为总起, 描述自己何时 何地参加了何种活动。由于是记叙事件, 接下去可 以按照时间发展顺序进行信息点的划分。第二句 是出发时间, 出发地点和路程。活动的内容比较多, 可以用两句话分别表述。最后一句就是活动的感 受。句1：(1) 组织活动：_
7、句2：(2) 志愿者：_ 句3：(3) 红十字会医院：_ 词汇整理 翻译或完成下列词汇或短语。the Red Cross Hospitalorganize an activityvolunteer(4) 同亲切交谈： _ (5) 牵手跳舞： _ 句4：(6) 赠送礼物： _ (7) 拍照：_take photos of sbhave close chats with sb.dance happily togetherpresent gifts难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一 句。 句2： (1) 8：30 启程, 在校门口集中, 开始车程。 (1) We volunteers gather
8、ed at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2) 花了一个半小时自行车车程。 (2) It took us about one hour and a half. 合并:We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.参考范文December 1st 2007 Saturday FineToday is the World Aids Day, so our school o
9、rganized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m. , we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we be
10、gan to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignore
11、d and taken good care of.能力提高 1. 作文填空 请考生将括号中的中文翻译成英文完成此篇作文。 I (1) _ (参加)a fantastic English talent show in Peoples Park on Dec. 25， 2009. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)_ (表演了各 种各样的节目), like English songs, English short plays and English stories. performed all kinds of programspa
12、rticipated in / took part in / joined in(3) _ _ (这 场表演的目的在于)encourage students to introduce Guangzhou and the 2010 Asian Games in English and to arouse students interest in English as well.I was very excited because I was the leading actor/actress in an English short play at the show. Though I was(4
13、) _(一点点紧张) at the beginning, later on I felt relaxed and the performance was a great success. a little bit nervousThe purpose / aim of this show is to或This showaims / is aimed to / is meant to / is intended to2. 翻译句子 请根据括号中的提示将下列中文 句子翻译成英文。 (1) 我觉得, 帮助那些急切渴望我们帮助和关 心的小孩, 是我们应有的职责。(feel it+ 名词+ to do,
14、 give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be dying for) (1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care. (2) 我觉得这次活动很有意义, 我学会了怎 样与人沟通, 并意识到帮助他人的重要性和 感受到与之带来的乐趣。(meaningful, communicate with.)(2) I find the activity meaningful, for I h
15、ave leant how to communicate with others, realized the importance of helping others and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation.时时 间间8月12日8月23日总总体 情况(1)招募了127万来自国内外的志愿者 (2)2500 名志愿者来自深圳各大学 (3)这这2500名志愿者为为住在运动动村的五万多人服 务务 个人 工作(1)在器械部门门工作 (2)把器械搬去运动场动场 地和搬回去 (3)工作时间为时间为 早上6：3011：00 (4)因工作需要, 从6：30自愿工作到17：30 感受 辛苦，但是值值得假设你参加了深圳大运会的志愿者活动, 回来以后感触良 多。请你根据以下信息, 写一篇英文日记, 叙述活动情况。 写作内容写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章
