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1、1A model pie chart report step by step This lesson gives you a step-by-step approach to dealing with pie charts in task 1. I talk you through how to identify the main points, select the supporting details and then structure your report. I then show you two model answers: one with standard vocabulary
2、 and then a much more advanced version with more vocabulary and grammar you can borrow. The task The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the m
3、ain features, and make omparisons where relevant. Step 1: seeing the big picture The first step is to identify the main points of the two charts. This is not just an important part of the task and your band score, it will also help you write your description. The main points are normally obvious. So
4、metimes they are so obvious that candidates ignore them. Look at these questions: 1.How many activities are there in each chart? Just count 2.Are the activities the same in each chart? Read the key 3.Are there any changes in popularity between the two years? Look at the colours You should get these
5、answers: 1.There are 8 activities for each year 2.7 of 8 activities are the same 3.There are a number of differences in popularity between the two years. All you need to do now is put that into English and you have the main points of the report. Adding in a short description of the task we have: The
6、se two pie charts show the changes in popularity of different leisure activities in the United States of America between 1999 and 2009. We can see that the most popular leisure activities were almost the same in both periods, but there were a number of differences in popularity between the various a
7、ctivities. Step 2: choose the details to include There are 16 different figures you can include. This is too many. The task is to select and report the most important details. This will include naming all the activities, but not all the numbers. To do this, try looking for: 1.the biggest number 2.th
8、e smallest number These are generally important details to include. You should also consider what changes beween the two charts, not least because the task asks you to make comparisons. So, ask yourself: 1.whats gone up 2.whats gone down 3.what hasnt changed 4.whats new Putting this together, we nee
9、d these details: 1.walking is most popular in both periods22.yoga disappears and weightlifting is new 3.swimming doubles 4.aerobics, jogging and cycling all fall 5.soccer and camping dont change much Step 3: organise your report This will vary from task to task, but typically you will be looking at
10、two content paragraphs. As you write your paragraphs, you want to think of three key ideas: highlight the main points they come first group similar ideas together find a logical structure to present the points In this case, I would go with this structure: Paragraph 1 walking is much the biggest slic
11、e of the pie in both years weightlifting is new and yoga has gone It is clear that walking was the most popular activity in both 1999 and 2009 with around 30% of Americans saying that they preferred it. Also, yoga was no longer among the preferred activities in 2009, but weightlifting was chosen by
12、10% of people. Paragraph 2 refer to the other activities in order of popularity in 2009 soccer and swimming first, jogging and aerobics last note the biggest changes cycling, jogging and aerobics all big fallers, swimming the big riser. The second most popular activity was soccer at just under 20% i
13、n both years, a figure that was matched by swimming in 2009, having almost doubled in popularity over the previous decade. Most of the other activities became less popular over the same period of time, with cycling, jogging and aerobics all falling by at least a half to under 10%. The one exception
14、to this trend was camping which stayed almost unchanged at around 9%. Step 4: get the vocabulary right This is the big one and will take time to learn. To help you on your way, I show you two model answers with extensive vocabulary notes. My suggestion is start with the first one. Dont be worries th
15、at it looks too simple. it isnt. It is in fact extremely good band score 9. The when you have that right, take a look at the second version which has some more advanced vocabulary. A good version This is the final report These two pie charts show the changes in popularity of different leisure activi
16、ties in the United States of America between 1999 and 2009. We can see that the most popular leisure activities were almost the same in both periods, but there were a number of differences in popularity between the various activities. It is clear that walking was the most popular activity in both 1999 and 2009, with around 30% of Americans saying that they preferred it. Also, yoga was no longer among the preferred activities in 2009,
