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1、书面表达（3）,-学会恰当地运用复合句和非谓语动词,阅读有关上海世博会的短文：1.找出运用非谓语动词和从句的句子。2.思考：高分作文具备的几个条件？,Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country. And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a be
2、tter urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life. Since the 2010 World Expo is around the corner, the Shanghai government is busy preparing for it and our city has taken on a new look.,First and foremost, as we all know, many beautiful and creative pavilions of different
3、countries have been built for the exhibition in the Expo site along the Huangpu River. Besides, the government also pays great attention to the improvement of public transportation. We citizens can find that many roads have been widened and several new metro lines are being built now. Furthermore, t
4、he common people of all ages are keen on learning English and even took some foreign language courses, because they hope to be a volunteer for the World Expo.,语言地道，规范，符合英语表达习惯,1.内容要点全； 2.词汇和语法的数量和准确性高； 3.上下文的连贯性好； 4.语言表达得体,恰当、准确、较多应用,有效地使用语句间的连接成分（过渡，并列或从属连词）,高分作文具备的几个条件：,非谓语动词或从句之间相互改写,(1) We shoul
5、d drink water which has been boiled.,We should drink boiled water.,（2）They took the woman who was injured to the nearby hospital at once.,They took the injured woman to the nearby hospital at once.,(3) The kidnappers were using a car which was stolen.,The kidnappers were using a stolen car.,(5) The
6、dark-haired man went into the room.,The man who was dark-haired went into the room.,(4) The name which was mentioned in the letter was unknown to me.,The name mentioned in the letter was known to me.,(6) The firemen were trying to rescue the people who were trapped in the fire.,The firemen were tryi
7、ng to rescue the people trapped in the fire.,(7) Frightened by the scene, the girl did not dare go out alone.,Because she was frightened by the scene, the girl did not dare go out alone.,(8) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.,Once seen , it can never be forgotten.,(9) Unless I am invited, I
8、 will not go to the party.,Unless invited , I will not go to the party .,写作中非谓语常见的错误,1.非谓语动词作状语被误用为单句,Working hard, and we can learn English well.,Given help if you can, and our country will improve better.,策略：注意逗号在句子中的作用。,2.忽视非谓语动词的逻辑主语,Being bad, we had to put off the meeting.,3.主被动误用,English is h
9、ard to be learn well.,4.表达不地道，不符合英语表达习惯,To get up early is good for us.,策略：注意非谓语动词的逻辑主语。,策略：熟记非谓语动词主动表被动用法。,策略：多记，多背，多模仿使用特殊句式（型）。,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time.,策略：从句不可以单独使用，必须用于主句中。,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子,The old man thought of his son, tears c
10、ame down from his face.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.,Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.,策略：注意逗号前后句子关系：主从句或并列句。,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息, We were driving out into the
11、 country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing., As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in
12、a crowded bus.,策略：注意将所学的多种语法，句式句型灵活使用于表达之中，表达要精练，合乎逻辑。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是
13、人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。 小学生同时学汉语和英语。 这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning En
14、glish., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning Eng
15、lish., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese stud
16、y,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages w
