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1、Section Writing写作专题突破写作专题突破写作要求写作要求假假设你你是是学学校校学学生生会会的的生生活活委委员，平平时在在餐餐厅就就餐餐时发现不不少少同同学学在在饮食食方方面面存存在在很很不不好好的的习惯，这直直接接影影响响着着他他们的的健健康康。请根根据据以以下下提示，用英提示，用英语写一篇短文，刊登在校写一篇短文，刊登在校报上。上。现象象：一一些些同同学学没没有有意意识到到饮食食和和健健康康的的关关系系，饮食食不不科科学学，常常吃吃一一些些含含热量量和和脂脂肪肪过高高的的食食品。品。后果：一些同学开始后果：一些同学开始发胖，没精力学胖，没精力学习。建建议：大大家家要要意意识到到
2、健健康康饮食食的的重重要要性性，多多吃吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做运蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做运动。注意：用注意：用5句句话表达所有要点。表达所有要点。写作要点：写作要点：1餐餐厅_答案：答案：the dining hall2饮食和健康的关系食和健康的关系_答案：答案：the link between diet and good health3含含热量和脂肪量和脂肪过高的食品高的食品_答案：答案：food rich in fat and calories4锻炼身体身体 _答案：答案：take exercise句型句型结结构构1当当在在餐餐厅就就餐餐时，我我发现不不少少同同学学没没有有意意识到到饮食
3、与健康的关系。食与健康的关系。When _，I find that some students hadnt realized _.答答案案：eating in the dining hall；the link between diet and good health2这不不仅影响他影响他们的学的学习还影响他影响他们的健康。的健康。This affects _ their study _ their health.答案：答案：not only；but also3大家要意大家要意识到健康到健康饮食的重要性。食的重要性。It is _ for us _ the importance of _.答答
4、案案 ： important； to realize； eating healthy kinds of food 4多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉。多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉。We should have _ vegetables， more _ and _ meat.答案：答案：more；fruits；less连句成篇句成篇_佳作欣佳作欣赏Recently，when eating in the dining hall，I have found that some students havent realized the link between diet and good health and they
5、 dont eat healthy food.They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat.As a result，they often feel too weak to take their lessons energetically，thus affecting not only their study but also their health.Therefore，it is important for us to realize the importance of eating healthy
6、 kinds of food. In order to keep our body strong，we should take enough exercise as well as having more vegetables，more fruits and less meat.类文点津文点津本本模模块的的写写作作要要求求是是写写说明明文文。说明明文文是是介介绍人人的的事事迹迹或或描描述述事事物物的的形形态、规模模、方方位位、关关系系、功功能能等等。说明明文文离离不不开开描描写写，同同时具具有有描描写写文文的的特点。特点。说明明文文在在一一般般情情况况下下是是对要要说明明的的对象象作作客客观的
7、的介介绍、解、解释或或说明，使明，使读者者获得相关的知得相关的知识信息。信息。写作要求：写作要求：1根根据据写写作作的的目目的的，抓抓住住人人或或物物的的主主要要方方面面去去写写，避免面面俱到；避免面面俱到；2文文章章结构构要要体体现出出内内在在的的逻辑性性，避避免免杂乱乱无无章章。可可按按时间、空空间、逻辑等等顺序序依依次次描描写写。使使文章条理清楚，文章条理清楚，层次分明；次分明；3准确恰当地运用形容准确恰当地运用形容词、副、副词，以增，以增强强效果；效果；4在在写写作作时要要注注意意高高级词汇等等的的应用用，在在保保证正正确确的的基基础上上应尽尽量量用用一一些些固固定定句句型型、非非谓语
8、动词、复复合合句句等等，增增强强其其可可读性性，让文文章章尽尽量量提高一个档次。提高一个档次。Several years ago， I rarely_took_exercise and ate too much junk food which contained fat.As a result， I became overweight，which gave too much burden to my lung and made me difficult to breathe.Besides，I was not fit and often had_a_temperature.More funni
9、ly，when I lay_down，it was difficult for me to get up.I didnt live a normal life.When I walked in the street，someone would stop to eye me.词语串串练词语串串练My mother was anxious_about me，so she took me to the hospital to have me examined.The doctor said my obesity was connected with unhealthy food.He advised
10、 that I should have a balanced diet and take more exercise.I put myself into the fight against obesity.I changed my lifestyle and began with eating vegetables and fruits.Whats more，I took an active part in sports.The captain of the school football team is my closest friend.几年以前，我很少参加体育几年以前，我很少参加体育锻炼
11、而且吃了太多含脂肪的而且吃了太多含脂肪的垃圾食品。垃圾食品。结果，我太胖了果，我太胖了，这给我的肺增加了很大我的肺增加了很大的的负担，使我呼吸困担，使我呼吸困难。而而且且，我我不不健健康康，经常常地地发烧。更更可可笑笑的的是是，当当我我躺躺下下后后，我我再再起起来来就就很很难了了。我我不不能能过正正常常的的生生活活。当当我我走走在在街街上上，有有人人就就会会停停下下来来盯着着我我看看。我我妈妈为我我担担心心，于于是是她她带我我去去医医院院做做了了检查。医医生生说我我的的肥肥胖胖跟跟不不健健康康的的食食品品有有关。关。他他建建议我我应该健健康康饮食食，多多参参加加锻炼。我我全全身身心心地地投投入入到到减减肥肥的的战斗斗中中。我我从从吃吃蔬蔬菜菜和和水水果果开开始始，改改变了了自自己己的的生生活活方方式式。此此外外，我我还积极极参参加加体体育育活活动。学学校校足足球球队的的队长是是我我的的铁哥哥们，他他允允许我我跟跟着着他他的的队员训练。当当有有人人在在训练中中受受伤了了，我我可可以以替替换一一下下。渐渐地地，事事情情朝朝着着更更好好的的方方向向发展展。我我在在一一个个月月里里减减了了30斤斤，这给了了我我极极大大的的信心。信心。现在我很少生病了，而且迷恋上了足球。在我很少生病了，而且迷恋上了足球。
