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1、如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词巧用逗号，提升作文品质On writing -词汇选择与衔接词运用 Be thoughtful Being thoughtful(体谅人）simply means thinking of others before yourself. What you say or do will have an effect on others. Therefore, it is important that you think before you
2、 say or do anything. In this way, you can avoid hurting others feelings. Moreover, a thoughtless act or remark can spoil (损害)a perfect relationship. Remember these rules. If you dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything. Likewise, if you think what you do will hurt others, dont do it. After
3、all, what goes around comes around.(种什么因，得什么果）Section 1:上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性一篇好的书面表达，应该行文一篇好的书面表达，应该行文连贯流畅连贯流畅，具有，具有“逻辑逻辑美美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧自然、紧凑凑，使文章更为，使文章更为地道地道，更具，更具“英语味英语味”。记得使用恰。记得使用恰当的连接词当的连接词,如以下的几类。如以下的几类。1。 表增加的过渡词： and then, in addition, furthermore, moreover, again, anothe
4、r, first, second 2. 表时间顺序的过渡词： afterwards, earlier, later, immediately, soon, next, suddenly, finally3. 表空间顺序的过渡词： near (to), far (from), in front of, behind, beside, beyond4. 表比较的过渡词： in the same way, just like, just as5. 表对照的过渡词： but, still, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of
5、, even though6. 表结果和原因： because, since, as a result, therefore, thus, hopefully, otherwise7. 表目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that8。 表强调的过渡词： in fact, in deed, surely, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, above all, the most important of all,9. 表解释说明的过渡词： for example, in th
6、is case, for instance10. 表总结的过渡词： finally, at last, in conclusion, as I have shown, in other words, in brief, as has been stated above,1.We have been preparing for the past few years. We believe the 29th Olympics will be a great success.We have been preparing for the past few years. Hopefully, the 2
7、9th Olympics will be a great success.2. He is running his own research company and he has served as a volunteer.He is running his own research company. In addition, he has served as a volunteer.3. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way
8、through college.Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.4. Yao Ming is a successful basketball player and he is a commercial star.Yao Ming is a successful basketball player in addition to/apart from being a
9、 commercial star.5. You will succeed in your training. You work hard and never give up.So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your training.6. Last night I had a dream. I was running on the track, competing with Liu Xiang. Last night I had a dream that/where I was running on the track, compet
10、ing with Liu Xiang. 7. When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. He became a rich man.When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. As a result, he became a rich man.8. A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. One who has a large number of friends must be warm-hearted
11、and friendly.A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. On the contrary, one who has a large number of friends must be warmhearted and friendly.你能用我们刚才学的连接词让下面的文章更精彩吗？(task for section1)Passage oneLife is filled with challenges. We are faced with a challenge. We usually have two choices.
12、We can try to solve it. We can decide it isnt worth the trouble and leave it behind.Section2:词汇的应用词汇的应用1.恰当使用高级词汇1)Neil can be expected to come to China around August 6th for the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games. 2)Neil will be available to come to China around August 6th for the opening c
13、eremony of the 29th Olympic Games. 2) The situation is really difficult to understand.The situation is really confusing.3) Birds Nest lies in the Beijing Olympic Park. Birds Nest is located in the Beijing Olympic Park.4) I am sure to find ways to solve the problem.I am sure to find the solutions to
14、the problem.5) We all have the same chance. We all possess the same opportunity.6) There are more opponents(对手）than ever before. There exist more opponents(对手）than ever before. 7. One day I visited the Internet and I opened OICQ. (explored )visited8. Tears sometimes fall down my face. 9. I must gras
15、p the time which belongs to me. (cheeks)( treasure)10. I dont think your plan will be useful. ( work)facegraspbe useful11.He sent his son to school on foot every morning.12.My bicycle lost air yesterday on my way home.(He walked his son to school every morning.)(I got a flat tire yesterday on my way
16、 home.)sent13.I didnt hear your name.14.I thanked him and stopped the phone.(I didnt quite catch your name.)(I thanked him and hung up the phone.)2. 适当利用短语取代单词1） We all think Chen Zhonghe is a great coach.We all _ Chen Zhonghe.2) The result of the Olympics will be good. The Olympics will _ to be a s
17、uccessful one.3)I am going to Beijing to attend the opening ceremony. I am going to Beijing _ attending the opening ceremony. think highly of turn outfor the purpose of4).There are five rings representing five parts of the world.The Olympic Rings _ five rings representing five parts of the world.5)S
18、uddenly I thought out a good idea.A good idea _ to me.A good idea suddenly_ me.Suddenly I _ with a good idea.consist ofoccurred struckcame up 6)Foreign athletes will find the way easily with the help of volunteers.Foreign athletes will _ finding the way with the help of volunteers.7)Everyone should
19、do his or her best.Everyone is _ do his or her best.have no troublesupposed to 8) For most foreigners answers in Chinese cannot be understood. For most foreigners answers in Chinese dont_ .9)What you do will be very important.What you do will _make a difference.make sense at allavailable, confusing,
20、 be located, think highly of, turn out, for the purpose of, consist of, occur to sb., strike sb., come up with, have no trouble in, be supposed to, make sense, solution, possess the same opportunity, explore, cheeks, treasure, get a flat tire, hang up the phone, make sense, make a difference, 逗号的作用：
21、逗号的作用： 凡逗号出现的场合无不体现英语的使用习惯凡逗号出现的场合无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式或固定的表达方式, , 也与也与“为尽力使用较复杂为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇结构或较高级词汇, , 具有较强的语言运用能力具有较强的语言运用能力”, , 以及实现以及实现“上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性, , 即有效地使即有效地使用语句间的连接成分用语句间的连接成分, , 全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑, , 语言的语言的得体性得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线主线, , 研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式, , 有可有可能使得
22、写作快速步上新的台阶能使得写作快速步上新的台阶, , 从而收到事半从而收到事半功倍的效果。功倍的效果。例句：例句： 1. It is, after all, due to his negligence.2. She is, as I have told you before, very fond of collecting stamps. 3. I am ,therefore, very careful when crossing the road. 4. They, Mr. and Mrs. White, will be there in Beijing tomorrow. 5. He is
23、, to be exact, sixteen years old and is not old enough to join the army. (task for section 2)一家宾馆新开业,希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：1。地点：位于白山入口处500米。2。房间及价格：单人间（20间），100元/天 双人间（15间），150元/天3。餐饮：中西餐，茶，咖啡4。 游泳池：全天免费开放。5。欢迎预定 （book in advance) Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business Baishan
24、Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel is located 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. Chinese food and western food are both available. You can also enjoy yourself at the caf drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. Booking in advance is recommended. All are welcome!
