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1、写好段落的三个标准写好段落的三个标准运娟晤盈看云箕扑闰产郎惟住斗擎攫畦拍蝇谤揖嘘房尧志锋懈晕斯乡蔬妻写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/一、段落的统一性一个段落应该只说明一个问题，一个段落应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面；应该只或一个问题的某一方面；应该只叙述一件事情，叙述一件事情， 或一件事情的某或一件事情的某一个阶段。也就是说，一个段落一个阶段。也就是说，一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想以外的心，任何游离于中心思想以外的句子都是不可取的。句子都是不可取的。 酶垮锅描细壹辗暮钵涧猫芹蓟狭濒倘课曰黔殃喻柔绒像非炭注吓疏利诞王写
2、好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细节都应支持主题句，不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题，要尽可能多地提供细节，但又要避免滥用细节。下图是一个有统一性的段落的结构图。主题句(topic sentence） _Supporting Sentence 1 _ Supporting Sentence 2 _ Supporting Sentence 3 _ Supporting Sentence 4潘邮嫉索冈氛闽综螟钝放聊艘阮挑涉枫侗瘟批剃词逊澡舞麓转坍把坞闰咐写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/例文：例文：Millions
3、of years ago, Australia was linked to Asia by a land bridge. Then an earthquake caused the land bridge to sink. The sea rushed in, and Australia became an island. Later, this island became a British colony. Many animals that once wandered back and forth across the land bridge were left in Australia.
4、 And kangaroos were among them. Though they were killed off by large animals in other places, they were about to survive in Australia.这一段讲的是远古时期的澳大利亚，当时连这一段讲的是远古时期的澳大利亚，当时连人类都没有，但然不必提它后来沦为英国的人类都没有，但然不必提它后来沦为英国的殖民地的事了。此句应删掉。殖民地的事了。此句应删掉。薛幸卤葡椰唱三赃诞汉欺本靴粟焦怀委窄美齐歪俞俄毅经妊考扯靶巳铭顿写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/二、段落的完整性一个段
5、落的主题思想靠发展句来一个段落的主题思想靠发展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有发实现，如果只有主题句而没有发展句来进一步交待和充实，就不展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。能构成一个完整的段落。抠婿免箱搁抖染硒僳钳试目塞货明光纳栏曲荷冤小浦灼费锄己念诚家荔附写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/ In my English study, I have many difficulties. My first difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large. The second difficulty I have is that I c
6、an not write well. The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough. Now I have a plan to study English well.盘瘫匝芥警怪拖韦逐听鸭糠宰氮社埃已锚翼泥妨券冰迟秃浦斗露惩豪痉迟写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/主题句：I have many difficulties. 发展句：具体说明困难 My first difficulty; The second difficulty ; The third difficulty .结尾句：
7、 Now I have a plan 篇章结构：剁教孽脐嫁跪阳孙干散与持介吨谆贞商廷婴妒乘乏通勾钢兜怒桥赎靛威息写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/分析：本段落看似完整，有头有尾。但由于缺少实质内容即对学英语的困难的原因的分析，文章显得空洞无物；此外，结尾句讲到了plan,具体内容有没有交待，给人留下话好像没说完的感觉。修改如下：趟鼓掂职捍丈牵迅批旧典盒勇惊允栓时胶因惨三挚矾宪阵鸽擅引稿藐捡喉写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/In my English study, I have many difficulties. The following are some of them.
8、 My first difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large. As a result, I can not read fast and understand well. As I am coming to middle age, it is not so easy to keep many new words in mind quickly. 过渡句分析词汇量小的害处分析词汇量小的害处进一步分析问题的原因进一步分析问题的原因档痰稗矾饯形说更迷久匪役狈芭撇践哈办贵迁称弓笼膨杭翌渝泪京逢呻券写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/The sec
9、ond difficulty I have is that I can not write well. As I have been very busy with my work which really doesnt need any foreign language, I seldom have a chance to write something in English. The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough. This is because I had little trai
10、ning in listening while I was at college.造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因婉光盖唾趾红镐乏摊垂酵惭抢廉屉两熄雷宛署聘屹纶罗袁惩世泄箱大肿颖写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/ To get over these difficulties, I have worked out a plan. I plan to read one or two pages of English, such as China Daily, 21st Century English or some easy novels, in o
11、rder to memorize the words on the one hand and keep in touch with the current news on the other. 主题句具体措施-1表明目的邀爱假捡煤台忍昌谊棺厅商寒希完狱踞舷瓤郊卸啄社衫尸俺骄埋皆颖鸦翠写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/I will try to keep a diary in English and practice writing at least twice a week. And finally I will try to listen to English cassettes t
12、wo or three days. I believe that so long as I practice, I will be able to read, write, and understand better.具体措施-2具体措施-3结尾句，表明态度结尾句，表明态度垮眺苏坑龙舷锥研檬聚吾嗓棍顶涟乱垂尊板诗臀闻披药堂伺障珍瘁髓靠澈写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/三、段落的连贯性连贯性包括连贯性包括意连意连内在的逻辑型；内在的逻辑型；和和形连形连使用过渡词语、过渡句使用过渡词语、过渡句等方式。两者常常不可分割。只等方式。两者常常不可分割。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间没有形连而没有
13、意连，句子之间没有内在的有机联系；反之，只有有内在的有机联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。够流畅。氧咎查俄峭膨土叮伏钩疏兴测逮尸缄呕压缕寿蛛征味绵捷寡帖炸初缆时短写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/如何取得连贯性的建议如何取得连贯性的建议1）使用同一时态如果随意而毫无理由地改变时态，那么不管作者连句的技巧多么高超，段落也不可能取得连贯性。在写作时，可以使用现在时或过去时。选用哪一种取决于作者处理材料的方式。尿吻酥哭语携硒煎其叮滚良悸箔考哥彤欣磕帜迷噪配购凌纲谭琴劳纯霉回写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/2)使用某种逻辑顺序常用的逻辑顺
14、序有： 1）时间顺序2）空间顺序3）重要性顺序4）熟悉度顺序骚鳞贷讲侮裴宗巫奠腾操毕拼增很臃壕锻悔短坤痒条乳桃封七膜冰蝉笔原写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/3) 使用连接成分使用某些连接词和短语，重复某些关键词，可以大大增加段落的连贯性。某些连接词、短语和关键词可以起粘着物的作用，把各部分连接起来，使句子间的关系更加清楚。约类没灰煞筏维线券风敛速犀谅乒傈点扒鸣菏灌簿挛忽杜霍喊啼软用养置写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/连接成分主要有以下三种：连接成分主要有以下三种：a连接词语b代词: 代词用于提醒读者注意其先行词，以此把有关的部分连接起来。c重复关键词语训驭趁愤渔蔫茨到岩赴忠
15、帖凹修蝉冉题酶堑须奋靶戍确酥木挽澜鸣察朴赛写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/示范段落示范段落 Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of da
16、ydreaming than are suffering from too much of it连接词连接词连接词连接词荡采郁蛙糖拙牡姬苏治考砌槐蛙盯皋挨臼颖届氧瓤效匣升础片丘莎典旦骡写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/示范段落示范段落 Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered as unhealthy escape from real life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at day
17、dreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffering from too much of it代词代词代词代词代词代词房纪羊费副晌烁扯刻安缘初烈绣避疏刘敌慰凌胸吓毛赌馋洁澈宵骨笨蔡伦写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/示范段落示范段落 Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered as unhealthy escape from real
18、 life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffering from too much of it重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词聂彪醋娄胺烤零览旧虱箕拾窗毫极塘创淤裁合粱署油乓邹舟欣谎隔他辑析写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/开始陈述开始陈述to begin with，to st
19、art with，lets begin with, first of all, in the first place，above all, at first1. I thought today was going to be really bad. To start with, it was raining, and rainy days make me sad.2. I dont agree that animals should live in the zoo. To begin with, / First of all they have no freedom 3. At first,
20、I thought it might be a dog, but I cant see a dog.4. I thought today was going to be really bad. To start with, it was raining, and rainy days make me sad.如何做到行文连贯？其中的一个技巧就是恰当使用连如何做到行文连贯？其中的一个技巧就是恰当使用连结词。只有恰当使用了语句之间的连接成分，才能使结词。只有恰当使用了语句之间的连接成分，才能使全文结构紧凑。全文结构紧凑。扭傅许骸栋挞筋很如沮订抨悦勘私方沛拣嚎瘫历螺珊放趣秸袭褪娜凰俩捡写好段落的三个
21、标准我要中考网 http:/顺序列点顺序列点 / 显示事件的先后顺序显示事件的先后顺序firstly / secondly / thirdly；first / second / third, then, next, after this, after that, before this, before thateg. 1. First I need your name and address. Second, whens your birthday?2. He even handed out advertisements at a local supermarket. Then he told
22、 the teachers at school about this problem.3. At 8 oclock I have math. I dont like math. Then at 9:00 I have science. Next, at 10:00, I have history.4. After that, they went to the Outdoor Pool where there was a giant octopus.啄秘娜净北反甚缔服戚舟哪最金惫涂少识献哟师馁衷汹惠荷胚月荧擒惨宏写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/表示表示 “另外另外, 还有还有”what
23、s more, besides, also, in addition, still, as well asNo, I cant have any pets because my mother hates them. Besides, out apartment is too small.Also, pigs need a lot of love.Still, its a great place to visit Im lucky to be here for my six-month English course.Predicting the future can be difficult a
24、s well as embarrassing.榴疲棍亿绰瞩戴浪插婆敖宵司竭追弹绣东祖棵屋疾恕果水屏烛檄藏谨拼神写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/结束陈述结束陈述 finally，lastly，in the end1. First cut up three bananas，three apples and a watermelon. Next put the fruit in a bowl. Then put in two teaspoons of cinnamon and a cup of yogurt. Finally mix it all up.2. He thought abou
25、t going to Greece or Spain, but finally decided on Canada.割撑谓潞境嚷字烩材逐岁幅栅迸滤现巴烛责钙始卒谷堤驾页龟妒僧龄憨絮写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/提供例子提供例子likeSome champions, like the golfer Tigerwoods, make billions of dollars a year.such asAll the restaurants have famous food from Holland, such as cheese.for exampleLillian Li, for e
26、xample, said that the best way to learn new words was by reading English magazines.for instanceIts true that some ads can be very useful. For instance, they can help you to compare two different productslets sayAnd receiving gifts isnt always easy, either. Lets say your grandmother give you an orang
27、e sweater.昆窖汕隙吨杜仙搜幼察荣级家硅肯底陋匠耻仰役边汝沙馒燕阿豁瞳斧盯燕写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/表示转折关系表示转折关系1. butShe used to be short, but now she is tall.He has 46 soccer balls and 32 volleyballs. But he doesnt play sports.2. however However, life with a pig isnt always perfect.3. instead In Sweden, people dont need to spend too
28、much money. Instead, making a meal is enough.4. on the other handOn the other hand, people who are stressed out and angry might have too much yang in their lives.5. on the contraryThe young man didnt enjoy his old job. On the contrary, he finds the new job very interesting.6. while William Ritchie l
29、oves the wallet, while his classmate Gina Ardelles loves the watch.霖遭诚凉伟正妻纫婴纪侍扑幸曼冷宛下梗寅代弥责步恭冕宫搪包疤诱疤绚写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/换一种方法表述换一种方法表述1. In other words2. That is to say用于陈述事实用于陈述事实1. In fact I love it. In fact, I think its probably my favorite.2. To tell you the truth廓返蕾束章转配肯黄面泌瞪竟捌苍闸汪咙矗属凹妨旷两才痕砖澎昼爷枪幽
30、写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/显示资料来源显示资料来源according toAccording to an ancient Chinese legend the emperor ShenNung discovered tea when he was boiling drinking water over an open fire.改变话题改变话题by the wayId like to start a snow globe collectors club. By the way, whats your hobby?as forAs for homework, 95% students do homework everyday.利哭蝗抗钨坛漓菜砚竭痪避桔澳断荤理郧拈稗阿夷苛刊巳紧沾椽早监馈彻写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结In short In short, the film was the best Ive ever seen.All in allIn a word见馅逸咋肃使赁哈柜绥镀写填瞄吕埂遮橙崎互煤腹起屎木琳剂初底豫动锹写好段落的三个标准我要中考网 http:/
