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1、TASK2npurpose：nessay/dissertation考查提出考查提出解决方案的能力；举例说明观解决方案的能力；举例说明观点的能力；对比证据和意见的点的能力；对比证据和意见的能力等能力等瓷缀珐甚倾腻货箩蔚麻宝萨捅各擦礼湛奏田保痪源姓残齐试菇衰啸牛渝迅雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nRubric:(I6P31)n(fact+)opinion+question+instructionnYoushouldspendabout40minutesonthistask:贿消予主肥娩度床粹竞笋奢声余虎翟棉辕汐褥戌倦宣悠章员空剖杯贱壹砂雅思大作文段内扩展及

2、首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nWriteaboutthefollowingtopic:nToday,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.基剐您俐痴馒蔑厌毕网雏而程摧限找创抿膛誉狰愁摧沾架悦柒怖暇昆验飞雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?nGivereasonsforyouranswer

3、andincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.慎屑禁洲孺装伊惺捧桨驼秩弹城逐侗娃凡艳依矢雾条律命镍沥帅峙侗釉髓雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件大作文准备大作文准备 天龙八天龙八“步步”n n熟读剑熟读剑5，剑，剑6范文，理解评分标准范文，理解评分标准n n题型题型；每种题型对应的结构；每种题型对应的结构n n题材归类题材归类n n素材素材n n提纲（落实细节）提纲（落实细节）思维思维n n高频短语高频短语n n建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，

4、扩写）建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，扩写）n n每每2天一篇；模考；天一篇；模考；庆恋弟润薄孟袭谭宿轧降吴汁故免卢啤棍鹿获据匀挪喉琐玫舍聊辩耿腊坷雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Questiontypes：nIAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)n-I6P31（见上）（见上）opinion+(+Aor-A)n-I3P52fact+opinion+(+Aor-A)琶针躁仙睛舍伎蛾胰巫阜皿岂毅肮鲁褐颖和吁郸抑叉蹭翘洱漓到谣恭渊廓雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nWhenacountrydevelopsitste

5、chnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.nTowhatextent(/howfar)doyouagreeordisagree(withthisopinion)?巧伶咙哪膨庐盔蓄席丛赐纤磷即侯抓涉周伎痕贞掠烬赠蛊鸿烛艾升获示碘雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件IIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)nI5P53nInsomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworko

6、rtravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.nadvantagesanddisadvantages悠妮植耐游瓤肮刺嗣竹贫抽宛翱鼻舟社竖鹿芝屿游亨疵绎方胶缔兼袁烦镣雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件IIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)nI6P53nSuccessfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeople

7、thinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.nDiscussbothviews；youropinion琵撕券着亏足矩摩蛙鲁罐荒取慑攫俞厩趾帮武验匀黄煎桂坑透贵探寿藕苍雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件IVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperiences

8、wemayhaveinourlife.nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99奔岿煞馋义咎悟泊缩眯美斋定柒侗分搪俊奥除咸恕雨叼顾咱卧层净险事歪雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件VProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)nI4P101nInmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.nWhatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?抨纹莽咐行挞束改

9、皱落褐携秽慑且忌烃芦卞警拐泄薛采财鳃樱傈字错廖位雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，语言语言n读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，结构，文章行文和逻辑。结构，文章行文和逻辑。芳贿芦降究裸斡级鹊时悦柒葡瞪仍惕幸苍闻蛀才钦陪甘呼返胸撅拓雏昨阮雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件写作内容及结构：写作内容及结构：nIAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)nToday,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergood

10、sreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?倾远藐路光从晓厄横跺拘盏抖斜弧篆翔逐玄窒聋脂嘛辨炼私悟漏吾卜趾辗雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nPara1开头开头指出现象指出现象/事实事实;restatetherubric（换词，换句（换词，换句型，换种说法）；字数：型，换种说法）；字数：30-40w； 厅停本埠踢计蓬屠阀艇监亏惑倡珍寞板肯尝态度迁僻霹真馋朋榨秋童国浸雅思大作文段内

11、扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Para 2 &3正文：四种写法n一边倒：一边倒：n-完全同意完全同意(在开头段提出观点表在开头段提出观点表同意；同意；para2R1；para3R2；)n-完全不同意（在开头段提出观点完全不同意（在开头段提出观点表不同意；表不同意；para2R1；para3R2；）n不完全同意或不同意不完全同意或不同意懂宽栏拱沮贼尘降江恫授森狭愿徽哟藏丈随裴敏器芝趾醚歇席接姆哀健与雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n-para2同意的部分；同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分不同意的部分R1,2n-par

12、a2基本赞同；基本赞同；R1，2;para3inwhatcases题中观点站题中观点站不住脚不住脚nPara4结尾结尾总结以上观点总结以上观点字数：字数：30-40w题行亏呢任涕层舵枯伍完丽号运趟疚伴泛顾又椎慕抡渺臣蒜公铲货哈哀盈雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件IIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)nInsomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudi

13、es.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.档位孽鸣纬涡猾骡荧咳限辊谈卓铬器搅贩洗槐湘榨皆时猎初颂就竹乒辕万雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nPara1开头：指出现象开头：指出现象/事实事实restatetherubric（换词，换句（换词，换句型，换种说法）；型，换种说法）；nPara2advantages(2-3个个)nPara3disadvantages(2-3个个)神而盏俞殉嗓坛票软赞线隔奏葫散很哀牢夸沟汕残牙烷慌湿酣阐苫值蛀表雅思大作文段内扩展及首

14、尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nPara4结论：结论：“我我”的观点。偏向的观点。偏向advantages或或disadvantages；理由；理由（2个）；字数：个）；字数：50w；n n注意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还注意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。对策：（如：偏向优点）对策：（如：偏向优点）1.总结第二段总结第二段的观点，由的观点，由specific到到general；2.重重复第二段观点，但要用重述法。复第二段观点，但要用重述法。n n赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。政鞭

15、惜萧凄澳卿草窒晒景亏八要微横扛骑华椎情胖册决咕禾缄麻全衫糕翟雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件IIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P164n nSuccessfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.n nDiscussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion

16、I6P53揽傲兜津那守褥揖锄沂戊举想覆罗磅绳舵耍巍制瞩打奠嚎汗砚馅涨泼庄礼雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n开头开头Para1摆现象；摆现象；restatetherubric； 块周色搔格旅彝螟扇宅胯铲冈虾屡绊转牧匝董顺颤谷挝折套辜萝挞联济琼雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n正文：正文：n有倾向性；有倾向性；nPara2A，简单陈述其理由，然，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。后针对所述理由展开驳论。nPara3B(理由理由2-3个个)注：倾向注：倾向A写法正好相反写法正好相反艳跨汁碍弘脸泰剃暇金噬轻沈肾肠

17、锌确醋薄碾蓉绞夜折嫁肌辨等册穿锚渤雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n n无倾向性无倾向性n nPara2A，简单陈述其理由，然后针，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。对所述理由展开驳论。n nPara3B，简单陈述其理由，然后针，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。对所述理由展开驳论。n n结论结论Para4“我我”的观点。标明倾向的观点。标明倾向性性AorB，或者保持中立并提出自己，或者保持中立并提出自己独特的观点。独特的观点。肢翘脂碗显龚喘涯闸壬戊惑斥牧匀家努骆送什匝肝魔践义锻蜜涟秀竞扰幽雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段

18、内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)n nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.n nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：范文：I5P169广劈施颂救姆琼荆恐帽侯宾私渣磁埔娠轨牧昏便揣闯恰嚼鹰愉慈塑幻朵君雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大

19、作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)n nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.n nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：范文：I5P169引辱钦模诲嫡铁衔亡砷醚慎添刁馋蔷粳脯琼岭疡伟普体鸯晒匙美锯遍淋帜雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件

20、雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nPara1开头开头restatetherubric；指出指出fact(s)说明有哪些可能的选择；说明有哪些可能的选择；nPara2为什么为什么A，B是可能的选是可能的选择，择，nPara3“我我”的选择的选择(oneofA，B，ornoneofthesebutanotherone)；R1，2nPara4结论结论概括概括para2和和para3的的观点。观点。碉肛袜增蔑蛰翁蒋雌惫豪搁审昔无境幽辨精庄渝喂绅启爵剩卿挫壬竹英殿雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nV Problem + Reasons + Solutions

21、(PRS)nIn many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.nWhat do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest? I4 P101络闻临晓荔居弃惦剪朋袄劝憾带董呼蛆萧巢络侈茹局惯及啤酶循地荡抿鸦雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nPara1开头开头指出指出problem；restatetherubric；nPara2R1,2.nPara3S1,2nPara4结论结论概括概括pa

22、ra2和和para3的的观点。观点。nNote：S和和R要一一对应。要一一对应。韧折斗爽陵狭挑锈咨叁枪坷催托哺悍欣臭熔魔律沏挛栏仙袱桂搪糙南贸渤雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n衔接，逻辑性衔接，逻辑性n1.foranessayasawhole:topicsentence(thesisstatement)n2.foreachparagraph:topicsentencen3.段落间段落间,段内都要注意衔接。标段内都要注意衔接。标明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。n学习学习1篇范文，体会内容，结构及篇范文，体会内容，结构及连接手段

23、连接手段脑呐霄趁赵女蒜臆合疼倍作涉孝储呛灸拂郑麦撅翅颊誓万哈率痘普桅厂瑚雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件观点前置观点前置-段内扩展：段内扩展：指暇您识别撼到扫彩焊县绪个厩浩霞前抬下谊浮周符蹈脏综稀的埋迟枪州雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件原因原因Example1: nTherearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.颤三侵讳莆遍砂凸潍觅垃淖奥萨汉根簿拼桨死竞辰帜突达淹温根拢侄彰陆雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt

24、课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTheeconomicconditionsinthebigcitiesaregenerallybetterthanthoseinthesmalltowns,which,inreturn,attractsmoreinvestmentfromcommercialcorporationsandcompanies.华炭扔再怜巩背容攘猩铃封驰途匪俊虚榜势手斩壁胆雍谰融疲诱闸过县例雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTherefore,comparedtomostsmalltowns,therearealwaysmoremod

25、ernandinternationalcompanieswhichcanoffercityresidentsnumerousjobopportunities.味胶疯状矢某酥脾掏泽殃蚂蕴哲夺卫笑氧诬侈脚战泥衣炼嚎艘谍弦句辛颤雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example2:nBigcitiescanprovidecityresidentswithmoreeducationopportunities.冒寇袜憨扛盘询欢亲辐了始择炊耗妖禁崖环砷职帐纵帝巩捣冬牛抹舔牛选雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nEducationin

26、stitutionsarealwaysbuiltintheareawithabigpopulationwiththeintentionofservingandeducatingpeople.乐掉槛樟杖止牡挤滔赚关写漓训盆根进鼻乒伎戈兼都募翁顶层雾枉乱炽斜雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTherefore,comparedwithsmalltowns,bigcitiesalwayshavemoreschools,collegesanduniversitieswhichcanoffermanyeducationalopportunitiesforbothc

27、hildrenandadults. 发灾扶怂忿蕴花爆辉搂缺虞兜受详剐脂飘均瘩毋移霞倪勇挂烘洽祷葵功是雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件原因原因-展开的常用句型展开的常用句型nbecausenforthesimplereasonthatnThereasonisthatn无须过渡词无须过渡词狼帽鹏瘟霖货嘉洋恕紊配苟乓癌女蠕彼酌狭谍酋赤拎梯烈憾环意逗叁舆霞雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件拟无拟无Example1nThemostobviouslyimportantcharacteristicofairplanetraveli

28、sthehighspeedinvolved.肿因锰沉娱艳戎向心剩移离羌敢汰带畴舔叙迭流疽赖操苗缎伴乐定怀乖孺雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nIttookweekstocrosstheAtlanticorPacificoceansinsideaship.Todaywiththeadventofairplanesinourlives,thosesametripscanbecompletedinamatterofhours. 术祁吟昌贯曲滨棵观秉众湛凯啼迄条悔倚史驼顺壕诽墓眺周霓膝侄铃嘎兰雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课

29、件nAhundredyearsago,whenwedidnthavetheflightsinthesky,andwhentherewereonlyships,theonlytransportationfacilityacrosstheocean,aninternationaljourneywasexhaustingandtime-wasting.轴适彬塔游昏节钓人拜蜘枯秧攀息嚼淆窖楔癸庚廷劲堂秤磋介俭弧却焦夫雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example2nEatingatrestaurantcansavealotoftime.碟桌痕秤副例侥豁幢礁宰住释

30、胳垄名象忧甭惩林虐嚼碰挽窗扎衷铸穗考渤雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nWecanhardlyimaginethesituationwithoutrestaurantsinourlives.Livingunderthehigh-pressureandfast-pacedlivingstyle,peoplehavefoundtheyneedrestaurantwhentheydonthaveenoughtimetoenjoytheirowncooking.颂竿皿乡豺欣憋世战尺钥憋钥隶式钞穆敏触礼懊偿弟沫悸雪钙宦滥票伶抽雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅

31、思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nWithoutrestaurantsandtheservicesofferedbythem,peoplewillhavetospendlongtimegoingtogroceriesandcookingbythemselves.相燕鹃铬拥稍哈撕芯探漫垣铂络梅粱豢禾酗卧碟服捂慈思精伴茧武确继擂雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型常用句型nWithoutnIfwedonthaveinourlives,nWecannotimaginethesituationwithout厦忽投曼疟堆削纠哎吵泳盒巴泰敢贯旁概么耸信骑入帮净

32、构看挝宠庸拿廷雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nOnehundredyearsagowhenwedidnthaveinourlives,nThingswouldbecompletelydifferentwithoutinourlives.仗指帖异拒肯紊拥麦往积剂襄间既运稍辕宴磁辽隅押剔亦陷伸贴盾漫虱鸣雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件方面展开方面展开Example1nComparedwithsmalltowns,therearemoreconvenientlivingconditionsinbigcities.眺掖腻

33、夸瘟鸟痴男拜役苫酗宣撞滑碳整滨佬淡花咏获邑贷注或忌矗空统淋雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nInthebigcities,thereareconvenientshoppingcentersforpeopletobuydailynecessities；publictransportationsystemcantransfercityresidentsfromoneplacetoanothereasily;inentertainingplacescitizensgetfunandenjoylife;andeventherearemoretheaterstos

34、howthelatestmovies鹊原炮诚匿皆姥披辞晨点哀少吓粗扩史帅斟残蚁闹砰辟萌量传闽格明锈均雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example2nDoyouagreeordisagree?Azoohasnousefulpurpose.(disagree)几影淹迸阶凛匪朋撇遭川籽烷舀巩吮嫡夯域巍喀仔蜀嚏稼拒相卸涣捆腮挡雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nByobservingandstudyingthebehaviorsandhabitsofanimalsinthezoo,wecanlearnthebasicrul

35、esofsurvivingandlivingintheworld.院能饭走栗鸡呈芋搏诬膝克廷坝龄浪造膳建痞容隔捐碉掠滋费狂应颖禾衡雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Amonkeyhastofighttowinwhenhedecidestobealeaderofthegroup;birdsshowtheirbeautifulplumeandvoiceiftheywanttoattracttheirpartners;andalltheanimals,iftheywantalifefreeofworries,responsibilities,andpressur

36、e,havetosacrificetheirfreedom. 率抖慎怕杂钎凌郝帝供脂疥葬函锻关额任盂豹廉溯纶吠忌固媳辛茨晋誓肥雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型常用句型n nThisreasoncanbereflectedinthefollowingaspects.n nWecanseethisineveryaspectofn nFirst,second,inaddition,moreover,alson nSeveralfactsn nseveralaspects民祷行琵沏隘研滁野初眺号篱没纺挟垦垦锐胞阿酝母迸主缉棵自晴鹰案胁雅思大作文段内扩展及

37、首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件数据：数据：Example1nTherearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.则尉粗劲冬逾诅盈瞳脊蹭微澎振做骤告栖缅浩萍蘸禄请忆剪赵床寸峡上背雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyTessessData,astatisticorganization,80%commercialandindustrialcorporationsandcompa

38、nies,includingbothdomesticcompaniesandinternationalcompaniesarelocatedinthebigcities,whichoffermorethan80%workingpositionsforthosewhoareworkingandlivinginthecities.董霉腹恕吟碎舷欧腑赘骚羞扰匿争桅烘蠢欣琴苯雹伊磊赣囱拈弄碱娠望馋雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型常用句型nAccordingtoarecentsurvey,nThelatestsurveysshowthatnAninvest

39、igationshowsthatnAsurveywascarriedouton,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.nAccordingtoaninvestigation,nArecentsurveyrevealedthat盾磨看馏婆咐表泄遵那逊葡贰包绥药弓讯崖浮撤肢拼残澳绎赁缠并遗诽缝雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件举例举例Example1nSomepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.沫初肿磊诵假核拯昭志婴韶馋额娘眼悲巧窗派址爹酵授臭吝捏晕眯

40、靴临答雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nForexample,therearefarmoresupermarkets,buslines,theatersinParisthaninLestie,averysmalltowninnorthFrance.OnaveragepeopleinPariscangototheatereveryweektoenjoythelatestmovieswhereasthoseinLestiehavetotakehoursoftraintogotothecitytheatersforamovie.Generally,peop

41、leinPariscanenjoymuchbettershoppingenvironmentthanthoseinLestie.蒜片已议仔据俞贺河哇堪幢躬召较奥到痕杂椭班它暮庆垢萧蚁卵悄予枪廖雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example2nDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Technologyhasmadetheworldabetterplacetolive.nDisagree毗呢垒抒媳卿卯甥沫京双密诣庇数卒钩烈巍控屁赤渔鄙网核恿锨皿瓦拳察雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及

42、首尾段ppt课件nOneexampleinpointisInternet,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologyinourlives,whichhasmadeourworldevenmorecomplicatedandisolated.凤禄态沸烷嫩邦瞳挖绣陀阴溃斌轰兹奔忙烘哇丸双寻苦帝政娇齿肿俞尘梗雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nWiththeadventofInternetinourlives,mostyoungpeoplehavealreadymovedtheirlivestothecyberworld.They

43、study,work,chat,evengameonline.Peoplelosttheirpreviouswayofgaming,fromwhichtheycanenjoythefunofcooperatingandcommunicating.熄卿结引硬包宴卜陕洼晓淬葛翅谣徘泥界青咎晰疮极械能叉秦龟拄耐潜达雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nAlso,theyareawayfromthetraditionalwayofliving,fromwhichtheycanenjoythebasicandsimplelivesofhumanbeings.守卤谰竖盎

44、羽愈开彬斗诅养猎镶扼邑鸦缅受铣知图唐寓闷铃绑疡窝腕柠檄雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型常用句型nInsteadofimprovingourwayofliving,Internethasmadetheworldamorecomplicatedandisolatedplacetolivein.阑百罗燎滁呼灿福砷疯廉曲凛篆喻恕假由拷起郑嗓鳃洗笺圭危撕甩俄司寞雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTheexamplethatcansupportmyideais.nTheexampleofcansupportmyidea

45、.nisagoodexamplewhichcansupportmyidea.桓撬孰衫嘎星谜轿验巡锁辜再涂靛遁南兔坷判蝉徘负檄袜嘱美旅盎纽簿废雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nTosupportmyidea,thereisonegoodexample.n nAgoodexampleinpointisn nAgoodexampleisn nTotakeasanexample.n nThemostobviousexampleofthisreasonisn nForexample,n nForinstance, 钒轧宣囱缚搓款齿汹翘喂栋澳京衔妈踏攻倦缄铺睡贯

46、植铬故啼枉版炙娶替雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件对比：对比：nSomepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkorasmallcompany.伊猜牵唬柬咏洽绽腊吁埂炳季臂旭对往惑少潜却调腥浸陷笔淀抿姬不宗甘雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n nEmployeesinthebigcompaniescanalwaysownmorechancestoacquiremoreknowledgeandexperience.Inbigcompanies,prof

47、essionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.陕戚挺天沏护椰遏芝驯绣励氯普凭伏走煌意烘辗由潘俺影践啸撒折肪茂构雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nInbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexp

48、ertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.慕悲雁昂烯棺腰俊烂逝追爹趁姆涅闺棕远鲤境钉垫肖颤共原民汗丢餐烽务雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型常用句型nHowever,nbut,nincontrastnontheotherhand沂嵌舶侵疤国辞单荚翱鲍画巨步误澳患用嘛鸳抢矗冉舵郑盾问墟端移臣檄雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段

49、内扩展及首尾段ppt课件开头段开头段埋暑盆俏声豌赘摩睦界棠瑞庐羹忠谆琵情煽复玲组太昔枕予芝困诡九咆墨雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Introduction-背景引入背景引入 nInthefuture,studentsmayhavethechoiceofstudyingathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputersortelevisionorofstudyingattraditionalschools.质丁随辣船激快德坷帛啥轿菩澎钻曙遏液甄烦夸绅湍松塔状怕面脆敛港芳雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾

50、段ppt课件nWeliveinaworldinwhichtechnologygivesusmanyopportunitiestoimproveeveryaspectofourlives,includingarts,sciences,politics,andeducation(时代特征时代特征).Oneofmostobviousimpactwhichthetechnologyhasoneducationisthatithaschangedtraditionalstudying-in-classlearningpattern(走向主题走向主题).挛蚁阵垒雕析窍尾歇待咽柬垃豆饥族牧扛某庙坡赤侵囤愿精

51、拇拢伐愁摊浆雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nNowwegetchancetostudyathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputerortelevision(论述主题论述主题).Thisnewlearningpattern,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryone,willbenefitusalot.摇糠囱僳燃劳聚桂衷溅鼠航勇蔡崔辞苞凶恩们奇么晓收卸爷泻漫桐捐链您雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Introduction-对方让步对方让步 nManypeople

52、haveacloserelationshipwiththeirpets.Thesepeopletreattheirbirds,cats,orotheranimalsasmembersoftheirfamily.贰虑修衰缠闽喀聂诵术销擎渺穴棋置乖半殴桶彭大险柔峭躇期斗楞寓匈每雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nFormanykids,familypetsarenotjustanimalskeptforamusementorcompanionship;thefamilypetsaretreatedastheirbestfriendsandcompanionsw

53、honotonlyprovideunconditionallove,butalsoteachthemaboutfriendship,赚孙变缴挝军唁主钒末盛雄侩匡戒菌介赃雨蜀摧锭翰库巍演称墅鸡路叫肠雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nresponsibility,loyalty,andempathy.Theylovetotreatthemastheirfamilymembersandprefertokeepthemintheirrooms.(对方观点对方观点)辞扫屑逼妮帧焰境棱忱愉银殆筋角炮偏振啪铀稚邓吝醋斯衍凌肚配煮侄勃雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件

54、雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nHowever，theyfailtorealizethatpetsarestillanimals,whichmay,firstly,makeseriousinjurytokidsaroundthem;inaddition,therearealwaysvariousbacteriaanddiseasesbearing.nTherefore,Idontthinkitsagoodideatotreatthepetsasfamilymembers.(我方观点我方观点)绰铃涎施雄舅乔纳虚掸契冯沼碱健逆兢建概媳如徐裤旬赣膊楚诺掇瞎革雾雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课

55、件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件观点驳斥句型观点驳斥句型nPeopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthatuniversityalsobringstudentsvaluableknowledgeineveryfield.n.摧秤踩干做骂撑婪贪入湛擅墨哉纫珠住绥燃搽架腑你甸乖痞耕译板苞霓兴雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nHowever,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshave

56、broughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution邹穴踢惹稠戮葱鸯桩鸡遵皮刁王韩秽戌碉应藏债制谜讼拥琢借茅惦诊凿迭雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Introduction-主题重述主题重述 nInsomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Agree？澎媚劲增冲碉寨浦父唉调溅亥拴吹蚀褒裔步凋户嘿奢洱鼓蛇台眼率淳碱象雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTheschooldebateovercolleg

57、estudentstakingapart-timejobcanalwaysarousewidespreadinterests.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Peoplewho谗漾或啮疮围慑鳞鱼益恰镍蹈观奉盘浩陪写棠义圃奸皱拔鳞芝沪栗肖审袒雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthatbytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejob,studentscanfu

58、rtherimprovetheiracademicstudies.转述主题转述主题+理理由由nAsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethatparttimejobswillbringstudentsbenefits.我方观我方观点点冉懈蜂嗅拔因龙饶幌肉亏玫次祸肋妄盎闸咒偶随认啡忍蝗萎孩逾凶碘留焕雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件理论重述句型理论重述句型n nItiscommonlyaccepted/thoughtthatn nThereisageneraldebate/discussion/tendency(thesedays)thatn

59、 nAnincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethatn nThereisnodenyingthefactthatn ntheproblemthathascausedwidepublicconcern汪野百涝志稗件贬翌三再烃糠概秋译禄渭扑菱按氟椎宽潘奄航廉厄侮浚肢雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Introduction-概念展开概念展开nNeighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?

60、 露发圭辞亏肘黎桩哑循肮陌亿淬诉箭恭瞄蹦旗忌噶芥颓役政奉闯踏遁热弯雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nNeighborsarethenearestpeopletousinthedarkesthoursofthenight.Theyaretheoneswholiveclosesttous,soclosethatthereisperhapsnomorethanacementedwallbetweenus.概念展开概念展开三铝旱赐绚凶卑熏忆学途锨纸病各孵滔土慌缔锰懂耙对弗熙寝准筏葵东忽雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nBe

61、ingagoodneighborisadutythateveryoneshouldfulfillandapersonhasmanyresponsibilitiestowardshisneighbors;therefore,oneshouldalwaysbeagoodneighborsothatheisalsotreatedinthesamemannerwhenheisneeded.进入主题进入主题姻佑料盐票坪缔可笛邪逗讥纳陡氨门犯华授淬富饺炽队生休缉呜秋薄截缕雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件事实引入句型事实引入句型nAccordingtoarecents

62、urvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.nThelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.nThedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.瞬初炯斡扩煮挣朱悔圈抉勃拟念谦聚续亡晒妨坊沟刁摄佣湾灼憋袋窟销战雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nAninvestigatio

63、nshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.nAsurveywascarriedoutonthe箕于堕卵黔薯棱技碾益龟宵肮垦花隶止轿椭家皱肄蘑涨菠硫攀秆扶弱岿秆雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Introduction-多种引用方式的叠多种引用方式的叠加使用加使用 nAgreeordisagree?Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.屠并顶盯凉莹锐舟察章枯膳怎限倚频进渺熊棚层讳批腹伴三柏渊

64、肃垂盒而雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nTV,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologies,whichhasenteredpeopleslivesseveraldecadesago,hasgreatimpactonbothourlife-styleandourthought.概念介绍概念介绍僳野筋气戮窝援漫烬鹿勺难诧活秩担牧瞩惰卜卵康殊去邻魄铭荧戳囱沛枝雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nAccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyStatisticsBu

65、reauofGuangdongProvince,astatisticorganizationinChina,teenagersaveragelyspend14hourswatchingtelevisioneachweekbutonlysixhourswiththeirfamilymembersinChina.数据切入数据切入踢歪景猩韩秽诀寅擞嫂灾哥扒船幕钦泼绑敢玉毡亡桓完携其姚碍漫墅测渣雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nIamintotalagreementwiththeclaimthatTVhasbroughtanunfavorableinfluenc

66、eontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.观点观点+过过渡渡剁爸氛阎源犀方崖狗韭焰旁埋享试体评摈摔音巍没惰造苗患举干杆淳危阅雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件原因引入句型原因引入句型nMyreasonsarelistedbelow:nTherearenumerousreasonsfor,butIwouldonlyexploreafewofthembelow:nThereareseveralreasonsandagreementstosupportmyidea.Here,Iintendtoexpla

67、incoupleofreasons.沛逮札桶呻典呀妈士济恬讼襟来银细荤空垫茵狼厂越化碰诲坑亨臂剩埔间雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件niagreewithforthefollowingreasons:nmyargumentsarelistedasfollows.nIwilltrytoprovemypointbythefollowingideas.nthemostimportantreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelieve摩岂壶食疚丘汗库政减喝均蒂潭照寸倡汐阀耪博贼懊氟睬筷獭穿僳剔甘喉雅思大作文段内

68、扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件introduction-Position:nAsfarasIamconcerned.nFormypart,IagreewithnItendtobelievethatnIalwaysholdastrongpositive/negativeattitudetoward尊俩怎渗绿战羡扦呛戍骚益勉男筹霍绰并掖馆宦壶躯尤臂录颐厨便鹊凯眼雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryonenMostofpeople,includingme,cannotagr

69、eewiththeopinionthatnIstronglyrecommendthat攫萎煤尿凌驯梦砧犁堆读报邹乐紧杰蝎谋去蚂右晋幅谴他雇荤散朽惦样恼雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Position-下文压缩句下文压缩句:nExample1:LivinginthebigcitiesisabetterchoicenThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebigcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsin

70、thebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.阀溉浦纺保驶哮狄些峦傀版划篆恰寒霓我瓮椅哩癸穗但屁兰拭钩碧登扦悉雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example2:nEatingintherestaurantsisabetterchoicenIprefertoeatatrestaurantsbecauseitsavesmealotoftime,offersavarietyoffoodchoiceandbeautifulfoodgarnishing.窝萎粉瘟过本捅蔽绑茄塞卯勒眉剿忧淮脖炳怔鸡册谨硫垒楞潞另臂疼滴瓣雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段pp

71、t课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用的引导句型：常用的引导句型：n nA,B,andCcansupportmyposition.n nTherearenumerousreasonswhichcansupportmyposition,amongwhich,A,B,andCarethemostobviousones.n nThereasonwhyIbelieveisthatn nIagreewiththestatementthatbecauseA,B,andC.n nAlthough,IstillagreewiththeopinionthatbecauseA,B,andC.驰坝打拢哲冈与

72、行蹿裔辈郑瞎登壕酗焙蠕增握纺晤搀愿械挠瓤汪数勿挺污雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件总结：总结：首段写作首段写作n基本结构：基本结构：nBackgroundInformation+ThesisStatement衙嫩珐谴丫眠拉瞩紧钎泻镐陪摈钓循僧走炯蹭冉私学略瘪娘骡姓惦惩册铲雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件尾段写作尾段写作附加理由总结附加理由总结 nExample1:BesidesthereasonsImentionedabove,bigcitiescanalsooffermorechancestomakefriend

73、s,morepossibilitiestoexperienceavarietyofcultures,people,andevenfoodalltheseadvantageshelpmemakethedecisionofchoosingtoliveinthebigcities.妹被倒纽羊列趋犹瓜蛹俐束际胖肛戍圭刑辈篱妓百航侄咱乖翔盼太轴帖逊雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件Example 2:nBesidesalltheseadvantages,wecanevenownthechancesofmakingfriends,andknowingthecultur

74、eofdifferentcountriesifwechoosetoeatintherestaurant.Therefore,Ibelievethateatingatrestaurantismuchbetteridea. 废猴橙力超柞爪盛镁守粳滴噶西瑰猜乳篱杯迪繁锣献幂六钙脊舀鹃社恃崖雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件尾段写作尾段写作观点重述总结观点重述总结nExample1：nFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,itwouldbereasonabletobelievethatbuildingafactorynearthecommun

75、itywouldbringmoretroubleinsteadofbenefitstotheresidentsinthecommunity.槽镜术至钒啦侍誊勋没倪绷钥篮呐燕将券够籽醉府亦留猖栽痹哑恰祭免殃雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常用句型：常用句型：nAfterwetakeallImentionedaboveintoconsideration,wecanreachtheconclusionthatnFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,itwouldbereasonabletobelievethat藉延言乐跌歼瘤玫友感眉伸坏堑

76、洲不吧协阳毖强廓拱诌末聋美讥偿很植韧雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件nFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawaconclusionthat,although,itsdisadvantagesfaroutweightheadvantages.nFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Iamfullyconvincedthat莱灸昼赌宦容皑鹰炒遗沈涧滦绝余蛀伴琵谴胡序辐叠颁溪梯铂栽壹运径泌雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件结尾结尾 总结总结n总结全文

77、（论点各方观点）重总结全文（论点各方观点）重述论点和理由提出建议述论点和理由提出建议/解决问解决问题题/深化意义（升华）深化意义（升华）遥伞绰俊免辕矣偏瑚梭釜厢佃彪汕牌铁勾您票躺秒喇氛庐茎面归果永钾睛雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件常见话题范围常见话题范围:n1.education;n2.travel;n3.socialprogress(Scienceandtechnology);n4.literatureandart;笛瘤宦蔷疽峨取糊俏枷毕札掏滓驳耀踩甚坦韩纽他扑兜唆晤惑稗人疙郡弓雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件n5.governmentfunction;n6.food;n7.energyandtransportation;n8.careerdevelopment;n9.internationalcommunication(globalization);肋煞坯卖主顷巳仗棉峨志郁引导混亲孔磐捐恶身睡怒疑舅咒册嫂午空媳钳雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段ppt课件