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1、参加参加“三大名师小学作文教学观摩研讨会三大名师小学作文教学观摩研讨会” 感受于永正老师作文教学的艺术魅力感受于永正老师作文教学的艺术魅力 邵原镇实验小学 马巧珍1 1一、其人和蔼、谦逊一、其人和蔼、谦逊二、其课给人享受二、其课给人享受2 2于永正于永正把作文写得有声有色把作文写得有声有色课堂实录课堂实录出示片断（一）（描写景物）出示片断（一）（描写景物） “细雨刷刷的飘着，雨丝笼罩着柳树，笼罩细雨刷刷的飘着，雨丝笼罩着柳树，笼罩着房屋，远处的山已经和天空中的云融为一体了，着房屋，远处的山已经和天空中的云融为一体了，燕子似乎特别喜欢毛毛雨，在微风中斜飞着，不燕子似乎特别喜欢毛毛雨，在微风中斜飞
2、着，不时发出唧唧的叫声。时发出唧唧的叫声。”3 3再出示短文（二）（小英雄雨来片断）再出示短文（二）（小英雄雨来片断）“雨来刚来到弄堂，见十几把雪亮雨来刚来到弄堂，见十几把雪亮的的嗖嗖的飞来嗖嗖的飞来” 4 4出示三组象声词，师读出示三组象声词，师读。 （1 1） 轰隆隆轰隆隆 呼呼呼呼 哗啦哗啦哗啦哗啦 （2 2） 咯咯咯咯 嘿嘿嘿嘿 嘻嘻嘻嘻 （3 3） 啪啪 呜呜呜呜 啪啪 噗哧噗哧 5 5作文讲评作文讲评 如果你写好了，要反复念。如果你写好了，要反复念。 改作文就改作文就要：再念，再念，再念，念是改作文的最要：再念，再念，再念，念是改作文的最好方法。好方法。 6 6三、其道令人深思三、
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