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1、下面是在期中考试书面表达题下面是在期中考试书面表达题 My pleasant trip 中同中同学们写的句子,看一看错在哪里,在句子上标出来,学们写的句子,看一看错在哪里,在句子上标出来,并改正:并改正:1. I was went to the Great Wall in the last year. 2. Last year, I and my parents had been to Shanghai. 3. My friends and me by bike go there. 4. It took our about 40 minutes to got there. 5. I lied
2、on the beach and enjoy the sunshine. 6. The next day, we returned my hometown. Answer:1. I went to the Great Wall last year. 2. Last year, my parents and I went to Shanghai. 3. My friends and I went there by bike. 4. It took us about 40 minutes to get there. 5. I lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun
3、shine. 6. The next day, we returned to my hometown. 写作题的答题步骤与技巧1. 认真审题,列出提纲:认真审题,列出提纲:2. 联词成句,打好草稿:联词成句,打好草稿:3. 通读改错,书写工整:通读改错,书写工整:弄清写作要求:弄清写作要求:包括包括题目题目、所给材料的所给材料的提示提示、格式格式、所提供的图画内容所提供的图画内容以及以及要要求的词数求的词数等,等,抓住要点抓住要点,注意文体注意文体。根据规定的要求构思,可以先根据规定的要求构思,可以先列出提纲列出提纲,考,考虑要选用的虑要选用的人称人称、时态时态、词语词语等内容。等内容。根据写
4、作提纲和前面的思根据写作提纲和前面的思维成果,按要求分段书写,维成果,按要求分段书写,使用地道的语言。使用地道的语言。尽量使用自己已掌握的、熟悉的词汇和句型,尽量使用自己已掌握的、熟悉的词汇和句型,如果遇到不熟悉或想不起的单词,就用同义如果遇到不熟悉或想不起的单词,就用同义词(或近义词)代替,多使用容易的词和简词(或近义词)代替,多使用容易的词和简单句,少用难词和复合句。单句,少用难词和复合句。写完之后,要认真阅读全文,检查以下几写完之后,要认真阅读全文,检查以下几个方面:个方面:看是否符合题意要求,看是否符合题意要求,有没有遗有没有遗漏的地方,语言是否通顺、流畅;漏的地方,语言是否通顺、流畅
5、;看语法看语法是否正确是否正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写,标,包括单词的拼写、大小写,标点,动词的时态、语态,名词的单复数,点,动词的时态、语态,名词的单复数,形容词和副词的比较级、最高级,主谓一形容词和副词的比较级、最高级,主谓一致,冠词的用法,词语的搭配等,最后认致,冠词的用法,词语的搭配等,最后认真地抄写到试卷上。真地抄写到试卷上。记叙文的写作 记叙文记叙文:是以是以“记事为主记事为主”的一种文体,就是把的一种文体,就是把人物的经历人物的经历和和事件的发生事件的发生、发展发展、变化的过程变化的过程表述出来。表述出来。记叙文的记叙文的写作要求写作要求1. 交代清楚交代清楚“六要素六要素”:时
6、间时间地点地点人物人物事件事件原因原因结果结果重笔讲述事件的重笔讲述事件的起始起始、发展发展,结尾要,结尾要精练精练。2. 围绕中心组织材料围绕中心组织材料:选择能表现中心思想的材料,材料要选择能表现中心思想的材料,材料要精练、突出、有效。精练、突出、有效。3. 叙述事情要条理叙述事情要条理:事件安排要条理分明,注意事件之间事件安排要条理分明,注意事件之间的联系、过度、照应,主次分明,详的联系、过度、照应,主次分明,详略得当,并恰当运用顺序、插叙、倒略得当,并恰当运用顺序、插叙、倒叙等叙述方法。叙等叙述方法。4. 意图明确意图明确、句子简练句子简练、文字精练文字精练。记叙文练习:记叙文练习:记
7、述暑假中的一次郊游活动记述暑假中的一次郊游活动 根据表格所提示的内容,写一篇短文,记述去年暑假中的一根据表格所提示的内容,写一篇短文,记述去年暑假中的一次郊游(次郊游(outing)活动。词数:)活动。词数:80-100。weather SunnyTime Monday, August 16th Place A hill about 2 kilometers northHow By bikeTime to leave 8:45Arrival time 9:30ActivitiesMorning: walk to the waterfall, swimming; taking photos;No
8、on: cooking lunchAfternoon: singing;dancingTime to return5:40pmAn Outing It was a Monday on August 16th last year. It was sunny. I went for an outing with my several friends. We went to a hill about 2 kilometers north of here. We left by bike at a quarter to nine in the morning and arrived there at
9、half past nine. We did all kinds of activities there. We walked to the waterfall near here. We spent the whole morning swimming and taking photos. At noon we cooked lunch and ate together. After lunch we sang and danced happily. Then we came back at five forty in the afternoon. All of us had a good
10、time there. 说明文的写作 说明文说明文:以以“说明说明”为主要表达方式,用简明的语言来解说事物,使人们为主要表达方式,用简明的语言来解说事物,使人们对事物的对事物的形态形态、性质性质、特点特点、功能功能、成因成因、结果结果、用途用途等方面有等方面有所认识,从而获得有关知识。所认识,从而获得有关知识。说明文的说明文的 写作要求写作要求1. 语言简明语言简明、准确准确,通俗易懂通俗易懂:2. 条理清楚条理清楚,层次分明层次分明:3. 说明要客观说明要客观,例证要有力例证要有力。4. 要把握说明的中心要把握说明的中心,选择的角度要合适选择的角度要合适。说明文练习: “低碳”意味着降低二氧
11、化碳的数量,节约能源、重复利用是关键词。如今“低碳”生活在世界上很受欢迎,为保护环境,请你根据自己的行为谈谈日常生活中有哪些低碳行为。(80词左右) 提示:low-carbon 低碳 Nowadays a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is popular in the world. In order to protect the environment, there are many ways to reduce the pollution. For example, a no-car day is set up in some cities. I
12、 think its really a good idea because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. In our daily life, wed better use cloth bags instead fo plastic bags. As a student, we should turn off the lights when we leave, use both sides of the paper and we can go to school on foot or by bi
13、ke. In a word, it is importand for us to save energy. I believe if everyone tries to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. 议论文的写作 议论文议论文:以以“议论议论”为主要表达方式,为主要表达方式,阐明自己某种观点的一种文体。阐明自己某种观点的一种文体。提出问题提出问题 分析问题分析问题 - - 解决问题解决问题 议论文的结构议论文的结构: 议论文的三要素:议论文的三要素:论点论点:论证论证:论据论据:是作者对所
14、论述问题的见解和主张。是作者对所论述问题的见解和主张。是议论的过程。论证的方法有:是议论的过程。论证的方法有:例证法例证法引证法引证法对比法对比法喻证法喻证法是证明论点的左证。论据有事实论据和道理论据。是证明论点的左证。论据有事实论据和道理论据。议论文练习:议论文练习: 你的笔友李明在发给你的邮件中说,他的父母对你的笔友李明在发给你的邮件中说,他的父母对他要求很严格。平时他的父母不让他看电视、不让他他要求很严格。平时他的父母不让他看电视、不让他听音乐、不让他出去玩。他们希望他将所有的时间都听音乐、不让他出去玩。他们希望他将所有的时间都花在学习上。他心里感到很烦恼。请你回复他的邮件,花在学习上。
15、他心里感到很烦恼。请你回复他的邮件,帮他分析问题,并想出一个解决的办法。词数帮他分析问题,并想出一个解决的办法。词数80词左词左右。注意:不得用真实的姓名和校名。(邮件的开头右。注意:不得用真实的姓名和校名。(邮件的开头已给出,不计入总词数)已给出,不计入总词数) 内容提示:内容提示: 1. 叙述他的烦恼。叙述他的烦恼。 2.你的观点:学生需要适当放松,玩的时候也可以你的观点:学生需要适当放松,玩的时候也可以 学到很多东西。学到很多东西。 3. 建议:告诉他与父母沟通的方法。建议:告诉他与父母沟通的方法。Dear Li Ming, Im sorry to hear that your pare
16、nts are very strict with you. Dear Li Ming, Im sorry to hear that your parents are very strict with you. They want you to study all the time. They dont allow you to watch TV, or listen to the music, or go out to play. So you often feel unhappy. In my opinion, as students, we should have some time to
17、 relax ourselves. If we are allowed to play for some time, maybe we will be able to study our lessons better. Meanwhile, there are many other things for us to learn. So you should have a talk with your parents, or you can write a letter to them. You can also ask your teacher to have a talk with your
18、 parents. Maybe your parents will change their idea. Best wishes! Yours, Danny 拓展延伸拓展延伸 1. 我的收获:完成本节课的知识总结我的收获:完成本节课的知识总结 2. 记叙文练习:生活像一只快乐的小船,记叙文练习:生活像一只快乐的小船,承载着无数欢声笑语。请以承载着无数欢声笑语。请以“A happy day”为题,写一篇短文。词数:为题,写一篇短文。词数:60-80。(参照写作题的答题步骤和技巧和记叙文写(参照写作题的答题步骤和技巧和记叙文写作要求)作要求) 3. 阅读中考写作得高分的关键:阅读中考写作得高分的关键: