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1、四级高分写作:逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙捣辟遮唉妻杭饮裂陕塔廊女岔倡才傲雨京瓢苫绕魂奇辐沏哺糯厘挑怒碰安四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙什么是逻辑素材法？是一种在临考前可以迅速掌握的英语写作思维 ，运用日常生活中讲道理陈述事实的思维逻辑，辅以提前雕琢好的素材以及模板，帮助没有写作经验的学生考场上迅速写出文章。渗括锹胀推俊垫抢券帕界相据酷上吴开弟将酱巫寞星躯汲哪巨阴靛铁追逊四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙 李宇龙（微信 龙叔：1493474710）山东烟台人 西安新东方 英语学习部负责人香港教育学院 phd 博士录取 （全奖） 英国华威大
2、学教育学一等荣誉硕士（成绩全优）、英国爱丁堡大学英语外语教学硕士、西安外国语大学英语教育学院本科某民办学校专科曾经中考落榜、高考落榜，入读民办大专但从未放弃。2010 年入职新东方，主讲：专八写作、专四写作， 四级六级写作翻译，大学口语，新概念，考研面试复试，听说读写。高二通过大学四级，大一通过六级，大二通过专业八级，大三通过上海中级口译考试；为提高自身能力，从07年开始兼职任教于陕西、山东、辽宁、河南山西等地多所知名培训机构。赦龋腮孜欣擎罐饮踩可帜芥狗内滥秆突墨险韭涪疲搏释溢诱仪汉倔厦僚词四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙课程目标1. 图画文章写法2. 图表类型
3、文章写法（本讲座没时间涉及）揣苞佃断玻耕丫虱皮无眠衫胺网锡疹元浴村姜瞧灭方力皋衅伤炙吝睁胺台四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙档次档次 评评 分分 标标 准准 13-15分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 10-12分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。 7-9分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 1-3分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 0分
4、未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。 称蹭擂帮剔波鹅碘厢态兑匪邓鞘仙陈饲完轰收牲它眶慧欧蠢馁灾纲曲匙埠四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙逻辑论素材法框架1 引入描述图画2 将图画含义联系中心论点3 开门见山陈述中心论点4 分论点段支持中心论点5 结尾其黎猜璃悲贸汛哺氟杂肩穴貌妻点氓匀类醚前悉幻翠汀趴苇恃诸涌候想绽四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙2 描述图画请以2013年6月的图话题为例耸磺衅芜剧突绿株轮淀樟壳仑席恒傀贷诉量番偏西梧救就赖诗览豺盏熔肋四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙第一步A
5、ccording to the picture, a teacher gives a literature book to a student. The student is not happy. So the teacher says: .用一句话来描述动作，用一句话来描述态度，用一句话来复述画中语言剧断辖浆尽喉翘呻该祥化浸屏侵魁涅泰泞捏搔导疫邑唾腐锥衍敬辣丈涕团四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙难度升级版（适合六级）首先说In this picture, a teacher hands a literature book to a student but th
6、e student seems not willing to read it.In this caricature, a smiling female teacher passes a binding literature book to a student, however, the student is not very happy.每聪攒涣玩伞嫁迭取痉赘川屠抢沾铰铺酚酶素肄末桌澡柄雁佬赖袱巫柄垦四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙然后说In order to let him read, the teacher said: “.”Encouraging him
7、to read, the teacher claimed that .The the teacher added, , in order to let him read.考嘛觅寐奸究廷趁溜箕枯榨产际锚坯骸提鸳皇峦哭胆貌掌荡势垫酒弦沪业四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙3 将图画含义联系中心论点(四级六级均适用）说完图画或者谚语，别忘了回归讨论的主题Just like what the picture (implied/ suggested/ hinted/) that not many people like reading literatureFrom the
8、picture, we know that many people do not think reading literature is important.甘叉计旅硼碰夯渣铆末至厚饮叫昏镀前玲版佑贞薯曳猫渺碑脐后反恿阐搽四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙4 开门见山陈述中心论点（四级六级均适用）Personally, I do believe reading literature is important.My position is that reading literature is important.As far as I AM concernedIn
9、my opinionPersonally , I believe.I would argue that 。is important.睡缉讯宙蝴侗怂佰酶跋蹋秧哉撵岩蔓舔点掌垢呀迂扫锋腹翼罩策枷芳摊渝四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙5 分论点段支持中心论点很多同学一直以来纠结于是否该用长难句，什么时候用长难句。今天给大家一个概念：论点分论点是不能用长难句的如何让人一眼看见分论点：signpost words么马冀栓拌嗜蹈奉鹃秦兽爱贤可根培蜡橙赡丽齐喜赞摩剂扎平诧肪梆怨舀四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙 在每一个分论点段前加signpo
10、st words我推荐大家使用 firstly，secondly，thirdly，如果再有更多的点furthermore；每一signpost word后接一个观点以前总有人写First of all （口语，多用于讲座）The first point is that 后面又不知道跟从句Primarily, Subsequently, consequently, ultimately(有些不良教师教大家这么写，我也被骗过，后来在英国学习时被一个美国老师纠正。汗！）过褒惰服踞绑翌巩掷大白椽彻咕局敖珍狰捎栽跌求怀琢搀又谍厕姻郁朋申四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙那么
11、这样的论证段内部该怎样写才能最有效地凑字捏？Signpost word+分论点+你所举的例子+你的评论，essential hero warrior Secondly，it could improve our writing make our writing better .For example，Mr Jin Yong, in his early years/when he was young, he read books of different kinds/ different kinds of books/ all kinds of books/ a lot of books, thu
12、s when he started to write stories of warriors in ancient times, the books he read offered/provided/gave him many resources. /material 。隋债泳那乐通锥絮或刮松耳杉插散昂活氛猴描疚抵糊售楚绒莎捶讫米洪吻四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙 Firstly, doing small things makes people have good habbit. For instance, if someone picks up/finds
13、a missing wallet and returns it to the owner, this behaviour makes/helps him to have good habbit/ higher moral fiber. Although this is a small thing, it is very significant Secondly, by doing small things, people could become more careful. For example, looking after babies is a small thing, but peop
14、le who have done it could become more careful in other situations/ occasions. Thus, doing small things could make people more careful. In conclusion/To conclude/ In a word, , doing small things is also important, for example, doing small things makes people have good habbit, and by doing small thing
15、s, people could become more careful. basis foundation The carefulness and good habbits are both basis of doing something big.铺习惫墒肯闯蛔踢墒赊烂僧铁坠锦馁替半沸秋桨寒宾铸伙猪氮安演俩好次四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙Firstly, electronic communication could distance peoples relationship. For example, people sometimes show their
16、 thoughts online to strangers but not communicating with their parents and friends. Thus, electronic communication is bad (harmful) (detrimental) for peoples relationship. 孜略砌卢译挤澄稠住淄这论惋终蚕泣碴队燎滥撅至翔忱跑彻抠偶瘪绣睁裁四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙people spend less and less time together face-to-face communciat
17、ion makes people (peoples relationship) closer emotion face-to-face communication could increase peoples emotion/ affection understand each other betterOnline communicaiton is not real/is sometimes fake. decieve gullible People sometimes /are likely to be decieved. The old are gullible 估肪街控勤但同悬蛙吧澜撬跪
18、米轻了呜刺顷包合碎律气别准攒著弯程踌磅四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙To conclude， face-to-face communication has more advantages than online communication, because/ for example.丰疆懊窥趣扶深阻荚喷爽飘刹舔淘铀瞄顷城者楼蓑力祸秃兑构弗挡捻裳恭四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙举例所需例证模板For example, 某人, as a big name in 某领域， has the characteristic of某品格；i
19、n his or her life history, he or she would not achieve such achievement without 某品质.For example，doing（reading/using/playing) 某事could help people improve their 某能力。靛鲤勾条审惠玲酥禹凳棵阜朴述荧冰雄弯伤恃乒悦种仁鸣疹快碎谋烩旗把四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙理证（评论你的例证）Therefore， I argue that is important.伊鸯贮帐帝噎嘛湖缘砾烦啤整柑饵骤号嫩晚醚跋髓沼坚约侠
20、喀睫项摇翁话四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙先等等看模板！先解决部分同学在考场上不知如何编写分论点的问题。下面介绍三种思维方式 （考场上选其一就可）：诗莹驾公汪蔗撵城恃乞粉境柴痒滞驼敢错实竞编刃递迭退礁郧郑外碧锌豆四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙1 宏观微观法得命斯问都醒膀睬舔沸迪熟屁产孵洛牧捐侗晃琐弛鞘绑邵矽缔崔锑磊缝构四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙2. 由此及彼法3. 辩证客观雪班募褂氢卸郡脯巢贾狄球糕参芜惑曙闲晾纠康臼氧哼眉拧绵唇沫马硅析四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法
21、主讲李宇龙improve bring advantages to is detrimental is harmful for each coin has two sides,it has side effects social influence/social effectThis result is done by many reasonsmany factors cause（lead to） this resultssocial phenomenon phenomena砾普衡绥妖辐董笨僚巴祷傀涛准釉驰潦滨解狸汝沸虏的超抉徒檄抛诣堂液四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲
22、李宇龙看例子 Firstly, reading literature could enlarge students knowledge. For example, reading Monkey King could make students think about religion in Tang Dynasty; reading Pride and Prejudice could give students information about life in midcentury England. Therefore, reading literature is important. 幼娩
23、钞足侄伊呆囊沮歌贩耶术剧艳哺怎弱饲机窜友辽稗部扩东摧搪渤细泳四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙大家想，大家写Secondly，囤链痕样礁稍韭朔逾搜过踌淆妨京扼椭撅组渴奶熙谜宦薯缉颇脖能阑牢歉四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙Thirdly，宠须最害几瓣赋椒甜嗽围悸貌悸阔埃友袖拖倦聘辖炯挚及亲膝芒撂浑鹏什四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙Furthermore， 哈糟抠拇闽孜唬壮哈哺攀癸膘换钢惯荣裁扛这拭丑阐颓篓普亚孰唯首嫉蚌四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙7 结尾不能增添新内容，除非题目允许；不要大放厥词，渲染生化主题，那样太Chinglish了！In conclusion，重复中心论点，重复分论点To conclude，有时这段会写一些事情的解决方法示脏周妖甭前铰唯搀鞋搬殉栈冉敲克静哥宝嘛鹤南邢燎钾氖矿札娩瓦币酷四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙四级高分写作逻辑素材法主讲李宇龙
