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1、1.要点要点齐全全2.言言语正确正确3.表达生表达生动4.行文流行文流畅5.适当适当发扬Pay attention to the following instructions when writing.3.表达生动表达生动4.行文流畅行文流畅专题复习：书面表达训练之三专题复习：书面表达训练之三如何使句子优美如何使如何使句子优美如何使文章流畅文章流畅宝应县中学高三英语备课组宝应县中学高三英语备课组n Sample 1n The students like n to choose majors . They can learn interesting things . They will have
2、 good jobs in the future.n The students believe that the environment is important to us . They graduate from universities .They can n find good jobs. They can get much money. n I think students should go to a good university . We like it and we study hard at it.n Sample 2 Some students prefer to cho
3、ose majors they can learn what they are interested in . It will make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in the future. , those who think differently believe that the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.sot
4、hatalsoHoweverandthat Sample 2 Some students prefer to choose majors they can learn . It will their favorite jobs in the future. , the environment is important to ones development graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job. , the best choice is a good major at a good uni
5、versity. If we cant obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, we study , we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.sothatalsoHoweverandthatInmyopinionbecausewhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwheresothat
6、alsoHoweverInmyopinionwhattheyareinterestedinmakeitpossibleforthemtohavethosewhothinkdifferentlybelievethatnomatterwhereElegance 言言语优美语优美Coherence行文衔接行文衔接句式多变化句式多变化作文更优美作文更优美怎怎样用不同的表达方式表示一用不同的表达方式表示一样的意的意义怎怎样经过对句子构造的句子构造的变化化,使文章使文章显得得更加丰富多彩更加丰富多彩 怎怎样运用高运用高级词汇，给文章添加亮点文章添加亮点怎样使句式多变言语优美呢？怎样使句式多变言语优美呢？1
7、.What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all. = surprised me he didnt know me at all.= , he didnt know me at all. ItthatTo my great surprise2.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _ _ traffic
8、jam . lead to result in 3.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know _ _ _ next. 4.Hurry up, or youll miss the train. =You wont catch the train _ you _ hurry. =You will miss the train _ you hurry.what to do if dont unless 5.虽然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多然他是个孩子，但他懂得很多(一句多一句多译)1) _ _ 2)_Although/
9、Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.6.这本本书是如此的有趣，以致于我是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。了一遍又一遍。1)_2)_3)_4)_This book was so interesting that I read it again and again. This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.So interesting was this book that I read
10、 it again and again.This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom.= The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _ _ _ _ (用with的复合构造) The teacher came into the classroom, _ _ _.用独立构造with a book in his hand book in hand句子开句
11、子开头的的变化化1. The boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldnt say a word.= _ _ what he had seen, the boy stood there , _ _ _ a word. (描画描画词做状做状语) Surprised atunable to say2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out. = _not until you pointed it out _I realized my mistake
12、.(强调句型句型 = _you pointed it out _my mistake.倒装句倒装句Not untildid I realizeIt wasthat3You are sure to succeed only by working hard.=_ sure to succeed. (only +状语提早状语提早)4. We all know that he is honest.= _ (It做方式主语做方式主语)= .(as引导引导的非限制性定语从句的非限制性定语从句) It is known to us all that he is honest.As is known to a
13、ll , he is honest Only by working hard are you 5.Ipassedthephysicsexamwithyourhelp.1).Ipassedtheexam_yourhelp2).Icouldnthavepassedthephysicsexam_ourhelp.3).Icouldnthavepassedthephysicsyourexam_help.thanks tobut forwithout 1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park shoul
14、d be _ _ _.2. The railway in our county is being built.The railway in our county is _ _. free of charge under construction3. We think the meeting is very important .= We _ _ _ that the meeting is_ _ _.4.The result is not satisfying at all.=The result is _ _ satisfying hold the view of great importan
15、cefar from Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful, since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some other people argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of ou
16、r knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes.欣欣 赏赏 一一 下下起承转合好起承转合好作文更流畅作文更流畅Task 1 在以下句子空白处在以下句子空白处填入恰当的过渡用语填入恰当的过渡用语,使行文衔接流畅。使行文衔接流畅。1) I dont want to go. , I have something important to do.2) Id like to come, Im afraid I cant.3) Lucy i
17、s twelve and Lily is eleven; , Lucy is one year older than Lily.4) Some people waste food others dont have enough.Besides butthereforewhile 在下面短文空白处在下面短文空白处 填入恰当的过渡用语填入恰当的过渡用语, 使行文衔接流畅使行文衔接流畅.Task 2However , In a word, Besides that, But A lot of people smoke. They say that smoking can bring them hap
18、piness. _ I am strongly against smoking. Maybe smoking can give people a little pleasure. _ , it brings much more harm to peoples health. Every year many people die from smoking-related diseases. _, smoking is also one of the causes of pollution. _ , I am strongly against smoking and I call on all t
19、he people to do something about it.ButHoweverBesides thatIn a word 在文中需求的地方在文中需求的地方 加上适宜的过渡用语，加上适宜的过渡用语， 使行文衔接流畅。使行文衔接流畅。Task 3May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop.
20、She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized批判批判the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them a
21、nd took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginning,In a wordso thatJust then/Just at that momentAfterAt last (In the end ),SoAnd thenMay25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday._，thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly._，shedidntadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop._，ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.
22、_，Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest._Iquarreledwithher._,themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter._heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批判批判)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginningAndthenInawordIgotsoangrythatAssoonas/T
23、hemomentJustatthatmoment 如何使书面表达更加优美流畅?1.学会不同方式表达学会不同方式表达2.留意句式构造留意句式构造变化化3.适当运用高适当运用高级词汇4.合理运用合理运用衔接用接用语EleganceCoherence Practice makes perfect! Make our writing better Lets begin Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small.
24、 It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it ha
25、s changed a lot since 1978. People here live a better life than before . 书面表达：书面表达：Sample1Now it is taking on a new look.Sample 2 In the past, the school here was very smalland most children had no money. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beaut
26、iful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the vil
27、lage. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. the newly built teaching buildingThank you. Next period well discuss how to express your own opinions in your composition. If you want to know more, please search: 163Every student will be faced with the sameque
28、stion when he passes the college EntranceExamination:Shouldhechooseagoodmajoragood university? Different people will offerdifferentanswers.Somestudentsgiveprioritytoagoodmajor.Whattheycherishisspecialtytheylikemost.Intheirmind,whethertheuniversityisfamousisnotveryimportantsolongasheworkshard,hecanle
29、arnitwellinanyuniversityandabrightfutureisawaitinghim.Other students pay more attention to theuniversity.Theyattachgreatimportancetotheuniversity because the environment is vital tothe making of an excellent person and is thesymbolofagoodfuturejobitself.Howcanyouhave a wide vision and broad horizon if youreceiveeducationinasmallcollege?Inaword,thebestchoiceisagooduniversity.We can only get such a chance after makinggreatefforts.Ifwecannotobtainboth,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajoritself.(givepriorityto表表示示“优先先思思索索，cherish珍珍爱，珍惜，珍惜，attachimportanceto注重注重
